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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a whimsical poem about crows eating lunch. Crows are not known to be picky eaters. They will eat nearly anything. I know one thing for certain. There is no good way to eat crow!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the flow and rhyme scheme the best.

What I liked least: I would suggest smaller lines instead of two rhymes in one line.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a twin sister who has passed. The author does not express grief but joy that the twin sister can do all the things in heaven she could never do on earth. This is a refreshing, faith-filled look at death. Yes. We miss them but they are in God's care.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you took a faith-filled approach to grief.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Awestruck  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a frog after a thunderstorm. The frog sings its raspy song. The author believes the frog sings as a way of dealing with what just happened. Who knows? The author could well be right. I always heard that the frog sang as an all clear signal.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the vivid scenery.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Snooze  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the snooze control on our clocks. I never really could make sense of them. I mean five minutes flies by! What is the point? If I could snooze it for three hours... I have a love / hate relationship with my alarm. It sounds like a rooster and every morning I swear I am going to chop it's head off and cook it!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the humanness in this one. Insomnia sucks but most have it.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This was an interesting quiz about the attack on Pearl Harbor. I thought I was familiar with Pearl Harbor having read and studied it in history classes. According to the test results I am not as familiar as I thought! This quiz makes me want to study Pearl Harbor more.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I love history. Any aspect of history is fascinating to me. I sat and watched 13 hours of a history marathon on cable one Christmas and have been enthralled since.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Oftimes I wonder  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem in which the poet discusses why people write poetry. I can weigh in and say that I write it because it is challenging. Some write just as a pressure valve. Poetry can be cathartic and healing. Read the book "Innerlight's: Eat and Drink My Words", by Spiritual Lights available on Amazon and you'll see how poetry heals.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the sing-song rhyme scheme and syllable count.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Cartoonist Theory  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about drawing a cartoon. It reminds me of my own illustrating abilities. I start out to draw a house and before its done it looks more like nuclear waste!



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it met its goal. It made me laugh. That was the author's expressed intention.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a song of hope. The author admits missing somebody they love but holds forth the hope of reunion. Hope is the mainstay of life and I hope the author gets to reunite with this loved one.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the upbeat tone to this one. The message was excellent.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Five Gold Rings  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem written in response to a prompt. The prompt asked for a poem in which the author receives a special gift. The author here chose dragons. I don't know that I would want a dragon. They might burn my house down!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the flight through time the best.

What I liked least: I think I would have come up with something unique. While dragons are exotic they are not unique.

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for entry "I lost the moon
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about admiring our nearest natural neighbor. I have seen a few nights I've howled at the moon. Your imagery works well and your imagination flows.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery. The moon is a good topic. I've won contests writing about it. Keep up the good work.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about being above or below average. The author says there are those who know and those who do not. The dangerous ones are the ones who think they know when they really don't.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you acknowledged that you cannot fix stupid. Ignorance can be fixed. Stupid....

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the sea. The author has a deep love for the sea. I studied oceanography in college but have never seen the ocean. The largest body of water I ever saw was Lake Erie. I know a lot about something I never actually seen.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery. I could imagine being there and someday I will see it.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a short piece about a person rediscovering their passion. I don't often review short stories but this one caught my attention because it reminded me of myself. I often rediscover lost passions and it is both sad and happy.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that the young man was creative. Boredom and time off tends to make us that way.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is an essay in which the author asks "What is a whole person?"
This is a question with an elusive answer. A whole person to me is one who accepts themself for who they are and is well balanced in their attitudes. Even this answer however is incomplete because it seems to indicate that emotionally disturbed people are not whole. So what truly is a whole person? This essay describes them well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you tried to tackle such a tough question.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impression of this item was: This is a panoramic view of the world. The author describes being in a position to see the ends of the globe from all directions. The author may be a pilot or an astronaut but they have a terrific view!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a very sad poem about being tossed aside like yesterday's trash because one is disabled. The author in this one knows they will heal but the employers have no loyalty to human beings, only to the bottom line. It is sad when humans work like animals for years, but when they become ill they are tossed aside.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the fighting spirit in this.

What I liked least: Knowing this was probably a true story.

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Review of Sing on Bird  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This was a poem about the birds of spring. Birds of spring. Birds do tend to be noisier in the spring as they sing their mating calls to each other. It is always one of the signs that I too listen for to remind me that spring has spring.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay with the exception of "haft" instead of "have" in the last line.

What I liked most: I liked the flow. It had a nice steady flow to it.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Snow  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about snow. It is written in a form I am not familiar with so I can give no critique on the form. However, I will say that I personally do not like snow. Your poem warms me up to it a little bit. You make it sound attractive and desirable.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the way you gave something as ugly as snow some class.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Winter's Breath  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This was a poem about going to sleep in the great outdoors during the winter. It is a poem about the lure of becoming dormant like everything around in the winter. One must be careful of hypothermia.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most: I liked the pleasant idyllic scenery. It flowed well and described the scene well.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about nightmares. We have all had them and they are very unpleasant. Sometimes it is just a figment of our imagination. At other times they are the result of trauma such as that experienced by PTSD victims. Nightmares are no fun and the author has caught the scene well. The author asks "Am I awake?"

We have all sat on the side of our beds realizing it was a nightmare.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the way it kept coming in and out of reality.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Touch  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about memories and future possibilities. I have had my share of heart breaks in the past but I've come to realize that the only goodbyes that are really final are the ones at funerals. As long as both parties are breathing anything is possible.

This poem expresses the truth that some break ups are best left alone. As you said, my lips have kissed people I will and would not kiss again.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the reality check in this one.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem of admiration, love, and tenderness. The poet sees a potential loved one who has been broken-hearted and offers to wipe away the tears. This is a touching poem of pursuit and courtship. I hope the relationship blossomed for you.


Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the tenderness and love in this one. The poet shows deep empathy for another person.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of My Next Poem  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about fantasy and imagination. The smoking bear was my favorite part as it is imaginative and funny. I could picture the bear with a cigartee in it's mouth as it looked at the cars.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I thought this poem was very imaginative and fun to read. The imagery was great and the descriptions ideal.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of The Moving Box  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: The author of this free verse asks "What is the body but a box for the heart?"
I agree with this assessment. I believe humans are body, mind, and soul. The author seems to agree and says that we are always movig on. Life is about changes and moving on.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked your attitude and acceptance of change.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Exhale  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a free verse poem about the soul. The poet says the soul is eternal. I agree with this belief. I am a Christian and feel secure in the fact that Jesus Christ has paid the ultimate price for my soul. This poem reinforces that belief.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the form and flow of this one. Free verse is suppose to have cadence and this does.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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