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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about some very sensible, practical steps to make a person fall in love. While I do not feel love can be bought or earned, these practical steps will lead to it.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the common sense used here. Sometimes the world falls short in the common sense department.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Note to Self  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a person beating up on themselves for making a mistake. The reader has to ask if the author needs a bigger ball bat? We all make these kinds of mistakes. Sometimes we have to make a choice to walk away.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you were thinking aloud.

What I liked least: I didn't like that you were hurting.

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Review of What will I do?  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about unrequited love. I think we have all been there at least once. The heartbreak is horrendous. There seems to be no out. I do know that in time the pain lessens though it never goes away.

Your spelling and grammar: except for "mines" which should be "mine" I saw no issues.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to vent this. Letting go of anger is important.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Rain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a child's love for rain. One of my favorite childhood memories has to do with rain and how my brothers and I took advantage of a summer rain to take a natural shower and swim in a ditch.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of CITY IN BLUE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: I don't always understand politics, nor do I ever understand war. I have to wonder why man cannot follow God's command that we love and accept each other. I hate violence and ugliness.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to vent this. I hope it helped.

What I liked least: Nothing. Again I hope your city finds peace soon.

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Review of IF YOU WERE HERE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about losing a twin brother. First of all allow me to express my condolences. Loss is always difficult.

This poem expresses the love you had and have for your brother. The rhyme is good and the flow was good.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the loyalty and dedication.

What I liked least: I hated thinking you had to go through this.

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Review of Small Things  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: If I am interpreting this one correctly the author is getting hung up on the small issues. Perhaps the author has some form of Obsessive-compulsive disorder and sweats the small stuff? There is not enough detail to say. So a lot of it is left ti the imagination.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you expressed this.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of No Choice.  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a what if poem about a broken heart. The author says he would have given anything if his object would have allowed it. Since she did not he is at a loss.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you got this off your chest. You seem hurt and angry. It isn't worth giving up over. Perhaps someday

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Drops of Rain  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impression of this item was: This is a metaphorical poem about love. It tells the story of somebody who cannot find true love. The rain is love and the storm is the downpour of emotions the poet attaches to love. Does the poet ever find true love?

Your spelling and grammar: "Casades" should be cascades. A typo I believe.

What I liked most: I loved the use of metaphor. It was very imaginative and clean.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of The Coming Storm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: I like this poem. It brings glory to God while telling of the serpent's victory in Eden. Eden however, was just a battle and a declaration of war. It was Satan's Pearl Harbor. Yes. He won that battle, but it cost him the war. In the end he was defeated by the second Adam.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you addressed this.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Sepia  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: I don't know that I would be comfortable with being controlled and tormented the way this poem expresses, but then when it comes to love are we not all controlled and tormented? Love seems to be a human curse because we are attracted to a mate and then find them to be...perfectly imperfect.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the loyalty, dedication, and love in this one.

What I liked least: I felt like you wanted out but felt trapped.

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Review of In The Quiet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about those quiet times we spend with Jesus. I too love those moments and wonder how I ever got along without them. I know now that God protected me from myself.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me

What I liked most: I liked the faith in this one and the witness to Jesus.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Love One Another  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about caring for and loving one another. I believe that was the intention of our Creator, though the world has strayed far from it. Every major religion has love as its ultimate goal. This fact alone should tell the world that division is not right.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: This poem had a good message and good flow.

What I liked least: Nothing

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Review of Memorial Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a beautiful tribute to Memorial Day. Many do not realize that Memorial Day is a day of remembrance for fallen soldiers. It has become a day for decorating all graves and remembering all deceased. Thank you for this poem. Many good people have paid the ultimate price.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the patriotism and the sing-song rhyme. It was moving.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of TRY AND TELL ME  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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My impression of this item was: This patriotic poem is well spoken. As Chaplain of the WV Veterans Home I see the results of war all the time and yes, Iraq and Afghanistan were wars. I see the pain in the eyes of the people here all the time. I hear the weariness in the voices. it is easy for the arm-chair generals to criticize but ask them to put their butts on the front and they will balk.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most: I liked the way you told this.

What I liked least: The only problem I had was that it was all in caps. That could be due to eyesight. If so, please forgive me. It felt like you were shouting.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: The author of this piece asks the question that every author asks themselves in wondering if the author will ever get published. I have a tip for the author: self-publishing may be your answer. There are over 3 million new books published each year. Many of those are self-published. I use Reader's Magnet in San Diego with good results. They edit and do the whole package. Mine was $895.00. Contact my agent. mariogonzaga@readersmagnet.com and he will steer you right.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you keep trying.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Rose Petal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the beauty of a rose and the glass case protecting it. The author expresses how beautiful the rose is entombed in the protective case and ponders whether to remove the case. let's hope the author did not remove the case or the rose may be ruined.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery of the rose entombed and preserved.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of I MISS YOU MOM  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the passing of a mother. The author expresses the grief that is so often inexpressible. The three hardest losses we ever face in life are the loss of a child, the loss of a spouse, and the loss of a parent. it is unfortunate that we have to face death but we do. This poem expresses the grief well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the love that went into this. You obviously had deep admiration for your mom.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Jeremiad  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a complaint called a Jeremiad. Poor Jeremiah did not have a chance. I often feel the same way when I find my preaching falling on deaf ears. The author is remorseful about complaining and this is good.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that this was metered. Metered poetry takes skill as well as talent.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Eye Contact  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: It's odd that I would come across this poem today. I was just lecturing the other day to a peer support group that I operate about the importance of maintaining eye contact and body position in interpersonal relationships.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you emphasized the importance of good eye contact.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Tracy Chapman  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impression of this item was: Im sorry, but I have to be honest and say that I never heard of this singer either until now. However, based on your poem, I will probably Google her. Thank you for the heads up. We often miss nuggets of gold because they are hidden in plain sight. As a published writer I know that unknown means unsold.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the opportunity to learn something new.

What I liked least: Maybe the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This was a humorous Limerick about the birth of a grandson and the pride that brings to the author. Congratulations Grandparent. I know that pride will never go away as you will always be proud of your grandchild.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I laughed at the ego part. I think we can all relate.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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Review of Meditative Ohm  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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My impression of this item was: I think you answered all four questions in a round about way. Poetry such as this is difficult and you seem to have it down. I loved the repeated lines that I know made it more difficult to say what you wanted.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that this was a rhyme and meter poem.

What I liked least: Nothing. I would have given it five stars.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the most special ladies in all our lives...our mothers. Nobody was ever wounded in combat who did not think or cry out to their mother. It's an instinctive thing to want our moms when we are hurt or sick. Moms are always there because...they are our mothers.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good except for "mey" which should be "may".

What I liked most: I liked that this was a tribute to moms.

What I liked least: The format. I prefer rhyme.

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Review of Passing By  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression of this item was: This is a beautiful nature poem. The scenery is exquisite and the author describes it well. I have viewed many scenes similar to this in my lifetime and they are always beautiful. This is captured well. It reminds me of my childhood.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I loved the rhyme scheme and imagery.

What I liked least: Nothing.

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