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Review of Fear  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing account anniversary reviews today. I see you have an anniversary. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews forum. You have an article here about fear. I know that fear is something that kept me bound up for the longest time and I did not even know it. When I finish my graduate degree I think I will write a thesis on fear or possibly shame, Fear's little brother.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it identifies a prevalent problem in society.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: The length. I have trouble reading longer pieces on my computer.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Fear the Spectre  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I stopped by your port to do an anniversary review. Happy account anniversary. You have here a poem about spectres. Your spectre seems a lot like the Grim Reaper. At least that's who came to my mind. If that was intentional good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme scheme and the flow.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I see you have an account anniversary today. Happy account anniversary. You have a poll here about the best car manufacturer. At one time I would have said GM but I had a Toyota. It sipped gas and drove like a dream. I finally wrecked it.


Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that Toyota was ahead. One day I will have another Toyota.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of An Ode to Slim  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing anniversary reviews today. I see it is your anniversary. Happy account anniversary to a very talented writer. This is a eulogy to a deceased singer that the writer likes. I hope you have recordings of him because it is obvious that you appreciated his music.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was a eulogy. It had good wording and flowed well.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing anniversary reviews today. I see this is your anniversary and wanted to give you a review. This piece is about retelling stories. Before television and radio people spent their time telling stories. I'm sure the angels smiled over that.


Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked your reference to angels. I never thought of an angel being behind my own inspiration but anything is possible.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of You Old Fool  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing anniversary reviews today and I see you have an account anniversary coming up. I loved this poem about the old man and the "little blue pill." It reminded me of the advertisements I get advertising "little blue pills" though I delete them. I'd have to say the old man in your poem was getting a little ornery wasn't he?

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I loved the ending most of all. It was a surprise ending with a good laugh effect.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing. Of course I usually give four and a half to five stars but I needed a good laugh.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Love Song  
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing anniversary reviews today and found that you have an anniversary coming up. I love any type of meter and this one appears to be a good one. I don't know the format so won't pretend to judge it, even with instructions. The imagery of two lovers walking in the trees was very romantic. I could just see them walking hand in hand.


Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: The meter of course. The imagery was second favorite.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Maybe the length.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Writing.Com 101  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I had asked for the sake of my own curiosity what it takes to become a moderator. I don't know why I did not think to look in 101. Now that I have I leave with a better understanding of what a moderator is and does. I am a moderator on a preacher's website that I belong to and was curious as to the similarities. This article has explained the process well. Thank you for the information. I look forward to seeing more and learning more in the future. This site has so many features that I can understand your need for moderators.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was informative and answered my questions. Who knows, perhaps I will one day be a moderator here. In the meantime, there is plenty to keep me busy. I am a student and love to learn new things.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of The Stars  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing reviews for Anniversary Reviews Forum today and you have an anniversary coming up. I am glad too because it brought me to your port where I read this whimsical, sing song little poem. I wish it were a recent write. I'd nominate it for a 2020 Quill. Perhaps they will start a category for "older" port items? Anyway I liked the flow of this one and the brevity. The flow was perfect and you said so much in so few words. I just imagined you lying on a roof stargazing. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me!


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love metered sing song poetry. Old fashioned rhyme has gone out of style but to me, it will always be the best.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars!


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I am doing reviews for Anniversary Reviews forum and it looks like you have an anniversary coming up! I love c-notes. Were they your idea originally? I have a question about them but I will send it later. Your C-notes shoppe has a lot of very nice C-notes in it. Now that I found it I'll have to try to come back more. I love the encouragement. I'm sure many do.


Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love the variety of WDC notes!


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I found this piece because I am doing my monthly anniversary reviews today. I love doing reviews, which you probably already knew. I try to encourage others in their writing and I love the fact that WDC is a rocking site. You had a stroke of genius in creating this site. That is why my membership is paid so far ahead. This reviewing advice of yours is par for you. It is what I would expect from a writer/designer like yourself. It is informative and helpful. It encourages us reviewers to be candid. Perhaps I am a bit of a softie with my reviews. I find something positive to say or try to say nothing at all.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you wrote it to instruct and encourage.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I have never despised a child although I've disliked the actions of a few. I think what you have here are wise words. Even Jesus said not to harm the little ones or lead them astray. You must be a believer?


Your spelling and grammar: Looked good.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that it gave a word of wisdom.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I have heard of this disorder but I have never known anybody who experienced it. I will be praying that Holy Spirit heals you of this in Jesus's name. I know it has to be painful and my heart goes out to anybody with a chronic illness. Thank you for sharing your experience. I am again so sorry you have to deal with this.



Your spelling and grammar: Looked okay to me.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the information. For example, I did not know this could be caused by a stomach flu.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Phoenix Skyline  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

I loved this photo of the Phoenix skyline. It looks like a beautiful city, although I know it is quite warm there now. My heart went out to you all after Harvey. I still think I'd much rather live there than in Florida though due to the hurricanes. I like the photo you took and hope you won your photo contest.



Your spelling and grammar: The only nit pick I had was "into". I think you meant "into".


What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was a beautiful photo.


What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.


Closing remarks: Thank you for sharing this. I am sure it has helped many. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

I am doing this review for Space Blog Forum and Group. I was thrilled to read this poem because I never thought of a rainbow that way before. Now everytime I see a rainbow I will be looking for the angels in it. I also look for its end and imagine a shining pot of gold. I also remember that the rainbow is God's promise never to destroy the world by flood again. I really enjoyed reading this one.


Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: to talk about this. The first step toward any healing is to discuss it and acknowledge it.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!


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Review of Parents  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: A short and concise poem about parents. I love it. I wish at times that my parents were still around but I trust that the Lord knows what He is doing. If we all lived forever the world would be a crowded place. I like that you remember that even when your parents are not there that they are still there. All most of us have to do is look in the mirror and our parents are looking back.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was a tribute to parents. They do all the things you said and so much more.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this one. I enjoyed it. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Muse Got Lost  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression: I love any acrobatic. This one came home as a writer.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it flowed well.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My impression: This is a poem written by somebody who faces the bereavement of an incurable illness. A thousand questions linger such as why do these things happen to me? Why do they happen at all? Does God really love me and if so why this? Have I done something wrong? Will I ever be okay?

I cannot give a pat answer to most of those, nor an answer anybody wants to hear when they are hurting. Yes God does love you. Evil happens in this world because it is a fallen world. Jesus will come back someday and when He does He will restore balance.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to talk about this. The first step toward any healing is to discuss it and acknowledge it.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!


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Review of Crashing Waves  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: It reminded me of a song we used to sing as a child. It's a good memory exercise. I liked the way it flowed as well and I'm not talking about the ocean in it. Your words were rhythmic most of the time.

Your spelling and grammar: I saw no issues.

What I liked most: The trip down Memory Lane. Your poem did remind me of a children's song and took me back about a half-century.

What I liked least: The length was my least favorite but that was part of the purpose originally I believe. I just prefer short pieces.

Thank you for writing. Space blog will return!


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Review of The Veteran  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I'll have to try this form sometime. It looks like it would be fun to write.

I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home and deal with soldiers all the time. Veterans often feel neglected and misunderstood. Many come back from duty injured and scarred for life and they feel like nobody cares. Your poem expresses to them that somebody does care. Good job.

Your spelling and grammar: look fine to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was a token to soldiers.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of The Rose  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I thought this was fantastic. It is a metaphor about love and I love the way it was designed. At first, I was looking for a specific metaphor and then realized the whole poem was a metaphor. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love metaphors. One of my favorite metaphors is Psalm One because it is a metaphor. They are fun plays on words.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing. I'm giving it five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this metaphoric poem about relationships. It was a fun read. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of O! Mohonk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem about a nature scene is wonderful. I could almost smell the lilacs and I don't know anybody who doesn't enjoy smelling them. They are not only a treat to the yes in the springtime but also to the nose. Your poem portrayed that well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery. I could almost smell the lilacs.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I would have liked to have seen more metaphors.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This was a poem about life and nature in a scenic river valley. I liked the imagery it uses and the proper use of adjectives to describe. A lot of poetry sites prefer you use no adjectives but I love them.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the images.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the form. I prefer rhyme.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: Since your image is of the moon I am assuming the poem was of the moon. The moon has a good view of death and if there were a "man in the moon" he certainly would see a lot.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The metaphorical use of the man in the moon. I used to believe there was a man in the moon.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of SONGBIRDS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I was impressed at your knowledge of birds. I guess I learn something new every day for there were birds on this list that I have never heard of. I found all of them but the puzzle would not go to solved when I finished.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I learned something new.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

Closing remarks:Thank you for creating this one. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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