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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: First of all, thank you for the trinket. I agree with you. Christian Hip-Hop can carry the message too. It would not be my way of preaching, but as Paul says, it doesn't matter as long as Jesus is preached. Young people can relate to this and we need to capture today's youth with the gospel.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the message of hope.

What I liked least: Hip-Hop is not my cup of tea.

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Review of The Messiah  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about our Lord Jesus Christ. As a Christian myself all I can say is Bravo! Glory to God. This poem wraps the sum of the gospel up in a few words when it says He is risen. Many people will be regretting the fact that He is risen. I have people ask all the time how a loving God can send anybody to Hell. I tell them that God won't send anybody to hell but a lot of people are choosing hell over God.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I loved the message and wish more would hear it. Perhaps you would like to join my Bible blog? It's called Take up your cross. Right now we are in Proverbs.
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What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of A Day Spent  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This seems to be a poem about the first flowers of spring. The rich use of metaphors such as a school-age love affair and childish writing of poetry give this a special flair. The hint and the allusion of a spring scene make me long even more for summer as we struggle through the cold days of winter. Good job.



Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most: The metaphors as I already said.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about life and the insincerity and seeming meaninglessness of it all. The poet complains that we are not given a choice but to be born into this mess. I personally do not see life in this way. The poet goes on to consider the inconsideration of others and finally ends with saying along with the Teacher: "All is vanity."



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the near rhyme.

What I liked least: I prefer rhyme.

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Review of Black on Black  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem, I believe anyway, about those incredible lost moments we all seem to feel from time to time. It describes that feeling of lostness or disconnection with reality that seems to grip us. Nothing seems to make sense to us.

Your spelling and grammar: looked alright to me.

What I liked most: If my interpretation was correct, and it may not be, you described the evil that lurks within.

What I liked least: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review of I fall...  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a shape poem about falling and it is shaped like a tear drop so that it expresses what falls and why they fall. As a counselor I know that tears do indeed fall to allow us to stand again. They are our safety release mechanism. They serve as a safety valve to release pent up emotions. Once they fall we stand once more. Well expressed!

Your spelling and grammar: looked spot on to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it subtly made the point using both words and shapes.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the uniqueness of each individual and the existential crisis we all eventually face. It questions why we are here and surmises, I feel incorrect, that we are the alpha and omega, the beginning and end. God is why we are here.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I like that you are searching. I pray you find the truth in the end.

What I liked least: I didn't like that it failed to glorify our maker.

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Review of Caveman  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. \

My impression of this item was: This poem reminded me of a lot of the houses I have lived in. Most of them seemed cold, dark, and dank. I lived in one house where the coldness was the isolation itself. I was in the middle of one of the biggest towns in my state yet totally alone. Your poem brought that to mind and made me grateful to be where I am today.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: The senryu format.

What I liked least: I had trouble connecting the internet and caveman. It seemed almost inserted.

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Review of The lost child  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This was an imaginative little poem using many movie and story titles from Christmas classics. I was surprised not to read "A Chgristmas Carole" in it or "A Christmas Story" but it hit on many of the classics.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imaginative use of the titles.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the effects of the light of the moon on the human heart. I don't know if it is the light reflecting from the moon or if it is the tides caused by the gravity of the moon, but the moon definitely affects our mood. Good observation.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the homemade science that went into this one. As I said, the moon does have a direct effect on mood.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Global lies  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This item is a poem about the ills of a government that is supposed to be run by the politicians and the people but is actually run by those who have the deepest pockets. You are right. The rich get richer and the poor get screwed. My brother would love this poem.



Your spelling and grammar: There were a few errors in spelling such as the word merely which you spelled twice as meerly. You also wrote that "nobodies" noticing when it should be "nobody's" noticing.

What I liked most: I liked the message and the flow.

What I liked least: Just the spelling errors.

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Review of Scattered  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This was a poem about the hauntings of memories and the way of overcoming the sorrow that some memories leave behind. It is about doing things one regrets and then working to make those things right. The key to living guilt-free is knowing that one is working to make right the regrets and mistakes of the past.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good except for "mislead" which should have been "misled".

What I liked most: The rhyme scheme. It had a good flow.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of The Little Girl  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a child's struggle with cancer. The little girl in this poem loses her battle. I found myself tearing up as I read this one. The line in which she tells her parents not to be sad is the saddest line of the poem. I could just picture the little girl holding her mommy's hand as she said that. It still makes me misty-eyed.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: the faith and love of the little girl.

What I liked least: Nothing though I was sad she lost her fight.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about breaking up and reuniting. The author seems a bit ambiguous about the situation but is trying to be optimistic. That's the thing about us humans. We seem to have long memories, especially when somebody makes a mistake. Then again I know a man who married a woman twice and she divorced him both times to marry a man she had previously divorced. Love is blind.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the loyalty showed in this one.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about having a bad day. The author feels like nobody cares and that they are worthless. The author feels like nobody cares but I can guarantee you that you have a bunch of friends and family here at WDC and we all love you.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to vent this.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a little boy daydreaming by the sea. He has many adventures as he sits there daydreaming. The world is his oyster. I hope he went on to become very successful at whatever he does.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the rhyme. I love rhyme poetry.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about the old movies. I used to love to watch those old-time actors. That was back before everything had to be politically correct and culturally perfect. Nowadays the actors act like overpaid advertisements and there is nothing but filth and sexuality.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the stroll down Memory Lane.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the high score.

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Review of quiet pool  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: Your signature reminds me so much of the creek by which I lived as a child. The green, moss-covered rocks remind us of the swimming hole we used every summer. I love these idyllic country scenes.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: The swimming memories this evoked.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Birdbath Beauty  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about birdbaths. I always enjoyed watching the birds. In the country, we did not have birdbaths but they are plentiful in the city. As man continues to encroach on wildlife the need will be greater.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the rhyme.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Missing  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about that insidious monster known as depression. I read the poem before I read the caption and knew from the reading that it described depression. I have bi-polar disorder, though I will not allow it to defeat me. I know depression well. It is everything you described. Isolation feeds it. Loneliness feeds it. I overcame depression when I moved to an environment that allows me to interact with others. Maintaining a medication schedule also helps. If you ever get in that dark place, call 1-800-273-Talk.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to vent this. I hope it helped.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about struggling with depression. As a mental health professional I know the struggle from the other chair. As a mental health consumer who also suffers from bi-polar disorder, I know the struggle exactly as you have described it. Depression can be devastating. I encourage you to stay the course with medications and follow your doctor's advice. I also encourage you to continue writing as writing can be so helpful when depressed. If you ever feel overwhelmed or suicidal call 1-800-273-8255. If you are a veteran press one at the prompt.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the message that recovery is possible. I know it is. I have been in recovery for 12 years. I will always take medication but as long as I comply I am fine.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of It's Your Move  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem comparing life to a game of chess. This is very appropriate for life is indeed about the choices we make. I was addicted to drugs for many years. it wasn't until after I went into recovery that I could see that my life was a result of choices I made. The wrong strategies will lead us astray every time. Your poem seems to say that the buck stops here. I agree!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked this new form the most. I love metered poetry in any form.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of Journaling  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: This is a senryu poem about one of the questions we all find ourselves asking: "Who am I becoming?"

As life progresses we all change. Even the very molecular structure of our bodies slowly changes so that every two years we are completely different people than we were two years previously. I know I am not the same person I was two years ago and I am certainly not the same person I was 20 years ago. Those people are lost in the woodwork somewhere.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I love any type of metered poetry and the Oriental forms are among my favorites.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of In the Barrio  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a Limerick poem about the life of a turkey. If turkeys make it through Thanksgiving their life expectancy curve takes a tremendous upturn. I liked the way you played this. At first I was thinking it was a farmhand who had fallen for the proverbial farmer's daughter. What a surprise.



Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: the Limerick of course. I love metered poetry.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of If I Asked  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about looking for a one-night stand. While I think the poem was well expressed and conveys it meaning very well, I have to let you know that I do not approve of one-night stands. I am a believer and I believe we were created to be in relationships. This character seems afraid of relationships and commitment. Perhaps you could write about the fear?

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most: I liked that you were able to express this. There must be some trust there huh?

What I liked least: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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