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Review of I Have Waited  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about unrequited love. The woman in the poem has figured out that she is wasting her time waiting and now is the time to move on. I am glad you came to that realization. Some people cannot be loved.



Your spelling and grammar: You wrote 'an" smile when it should be "a" smile.

What I liked most: I liked that you gave this person a chance.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This poem reminds me so much of the first few chapters of Proverbs where Solomon is discussing Wisdom. We are currently studying proverbs in my blog forum/Bible study
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. This poem puts me to mind of Wisdom. If you want to join our Bible study or even just receive the prompts, let me know.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: "Peace comes by living in true humility
and kindness."

What I liked least: Nothing. I would usually say format because I prefer rhyme and meter, but your words blew me away.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just what it says. Public use.

This review is brought to you by Disability Writers Group in conjunction with Space Blog. We hope you enjoy it as much as we enjoy helping you become a better writer through encouragement and simply positive reviews.

My overall impression of your writing was: I think we are all the adulteress woman in this story in one way or another for no matter who we are we stand in need of a Savior. Yes. God does have plans for each of us. He often allows horrible, terrible things to happen because they shape us, mold us, and make us dependent on Him. The one thing I can guarantee you is that Jesus Christ loves you and died for you.

Your spelling and grammar were: Okay as far as I could see. Nothing stood out that could have been worded differently. The only improvement I could really suggest is possibly expanding on this to talk to those who victimized you. Tell them off with your words.

What I liked or didn't like about your writing was: It wasn't poetry, which is what I typically review.

My closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I hope it helped you. Jesus truly does love you and have a purpose for you. I was nearly sixty before He revealed my purpose. Now I am a chaplain.
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Review of ode to Alice  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is an ode to Alice in wonderland, though I believe the choice between the red pill or the blue pill was from Matrix. This poem expresses the horror of suddenly finding oneself in a strange environment even though it is one's own home. I guess shrinking could do that.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the mixing of tales in this one.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about a bird endangered in its natural habitat. This danger was not from man but from nature itself as a storm surges ashore, probably a tropical one like a hurricane. The poor bird has to seek cover but thankfully survives. Nature is rough enough on itself. It doesn't need man's help.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the rhyme of course. I love rhyme poetry and this country setting made this perfect.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about dads. I agree with your sentiment that anybody can be a sperm donor but it takes someone special to be a dad. I also agree that as fathers we are not obligated to make the mistakes our fathers made. The old adage that the apple usually doesn't fall far from the tree depends on the apple. Some apples roll a long way from the tree. I am glad you are one of the good apples.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked everything. The message was strong and the rhyme scheme good.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars. Happy Thanksgiving and Merry Christmas. God bless you.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a dissenting poem about those who get a blessing from serving others. I make a life out of serving and loving others and would not have it any other way. Your poem expresses the opinion that serving others is useless. I obviously disagree.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you are able to express your opinion. In doing so you give others enjoyment.

What I liked least: The hopeless opinion you expressed.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about skiing. The character remembers a daughter who plays a very important role in the character's life. I know from personal experience that children can be very special. My son will always play a special role in my life.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked the imagery. I especially liked the part about stepping on the stone hidden in the snow. I'll bet you wanted to curse.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of Seasons of love  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: I love a good romance. I don't think there is anything as special as love. Most of my preaching the past six months has been on the topic of love. I am a chaplain. I think the epitome of being a Christian is expressing love. I know this poem is about eros and agape love and I hope it all works out for you.


Your spelling and grammar: The only thing I seen questionable was "Sprung" in line one. I believe you meant "Spring".

What I liked most: I liked the romance.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of Fall Morning  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: Your haiku looked good to me. The syllable count was right. I am no judge of metered poetry but I truly love reading it. Maybe you would like to try your hand at
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when it reopens. Right now I am trying to find somebody to operate and judge it for me. Interested?



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: It was haiku.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about unrequited love. I can tell you from personal experience that no human being is worth going crazy over. I can tell you somebody who will love you and never leave your side. Jesus Christ loves you.



Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I hope this was healing and cathartic for you.

What I liked least: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry.

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Review of My Vixen  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a semi-erotic poem about two people in love sharing a bed of wedded bliss. Or at least I hope it is wedded bliss. As a preacher I am assuming so. *BigSmile*



Your spelling and grammar: Looked goood to me.

What I liked most: I liked the love shown in this one.

What I liked least: It was more of a paragraph than a poem. It expressed well though and that was the main thing.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is an epic poem about a woman putting a businessman and an apparently arrogant one in his place. I have often heard my grandfather say that it was a woman's prerogative to change her mind. You made that clear to your date. Good for you!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I love it when a woman puts a pushy man in his place.

What I liked least: the format. I thought it would work better as a short story.

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Review of Once Upon a Pen  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a writer's poem. It expresses a deep desire to write and a great inability to do so. I think every writer has been there! It's very frustrating and you describe that frustration well. Personifying or anthropomorphizing the pen was a good idea!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the anthropomorphized pen.

What I liked least: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about unrequited love. I felt that way about a woman once. It took time but eventually, it passed. I don't think you ever completely get over it. Part of you will always love her. I do hope you find healing though.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked thinking that it was healing for you to write this. Maybe she read it?

What I liked least: Thinking that somebody could be in such anquish.

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Review of Cool Dark Night  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This was a semi-erotic poem about somebody watching their lover sleep. I always enjoyed watching my wife sleep. She always seemed so peaceful and calm. I could tell from this poem that you dearly love the object of your affection. I hope all works out for you as God has planned.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked the romance in this one. I always enjoyed watching people sleep peacefully.

What I liked least: Nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Dreaming of you  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about wished for love. I knew a woman once who fell for a man. The only time he wanted anything to do with her was when he wanted something. He'd have fun and leave. She finally got wise and divorced him.



Your spelling and grammar: Looked great to me.

What I liked most: I liked the loyalty on your lover's part.

What I liked least: The unequal rhyme scheme.

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Review of Morning Light  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port on the Space Blog Prompt today because it is your account anniversary and I wanted to give you a review. After all, Space Blog was designed to get you reviews. So was Anniversary Reviews Forum.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about waking up in the morning and giving thanks for being alive. As a preacher and chaplain, I can appreciate a poem like this. It is God who wakes us every morning to view his world anew.


Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that it was rhymed. It flowed well.

What I liked least: I would have preferred to see it in more traditional stanzas.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about everybody's least favorite subject: death. Most people do not want to die but it comes for all of us sooner or later. I have never had to preach a funeral yet but I am sure the day is coming when I will be called on to do so. In the meantime, this poem says, we all continue to hate death.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked that you didn't glorify death because there really is nothing glorious about it.

What I liked least: If anything, the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of If Only  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a lyric about somebody with a crush on somebody. I had a tremendous crush on a girl all the way through school. I never said anything to her. In later life I encountered her again and confessed my high school crush. She stared at me for a moment then asked why I had never said anything. She had a crush on me too!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good as far as I could tell.

What I liked most: The stroll down Memory Lane.

What I liked least: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Twin poem  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli
I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

First impressions: This poem is anthropomorphic of the sun and the moon. It gives them characteristics and makes them a couple with children. It does not elaborate as to who the children are but one knows the children have powers. The poem again does not elaborate. It could be used as the basis of a story.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagination it took.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of one and none  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Made by Lilli
I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

First impressions: I found all three of your poems interesting. They show different pieces of your personality. I love the way you contrasted the good days from the bad days. I also liked the way you referred to self-loathing. I do that to myself sometimes when I eat too much ice cream.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me. Nothing stood out except "morning" and I believe you meant either "mourning" or "loathing". I think "loathing" fits the context best.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the contrasts you made.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I would have made them three different items.


Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Made by Lilli
I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

First impressions: I knew the moment I began reading this poem exactly what scripture you were basing it on. I admit that I did not read the attached story because I have a thousand other things to do today and wanted to do some anniversary reviews. I am a seminary student so your poem caught my eye. I love to talk about Him. I wish more people acted like Jesus.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good in the poem. As I said I did not read the rest.


What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that the Pharisees were hushed and humbled. I nearly expected one of them to go ahead and stone her!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The prose. Of course you were expounding on mercy, which is good. I just have trouble reading stuff on screens so I usually review poetry. That plus always being rushed.


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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Made by Lilli

I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about heartbreak and betrayal. Nobody should have to go through that but unfortunately it is a fact of life. I know what it is like having been there and done that.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most: the sing-song flow to it. I love rhyme and meter poetry and while this may not be meter it is rhyme.

What I liked least: nothing thus the five stars.

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Review of Lovelorn  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just What it says
My overall impression of this article is: This is a poem about losing a loved one. I tell people all the time that they have no idea what lonely is until they have lain a spouse in the ground. My wife died on life support after having a massive heart attack that left her in a consistent vegetative state. I understand the pain though I was never married nearly as long.

This poem made me feel: sad just as it should have. The tone was sad as the lovers spent those last cherished moments together.

What I liked most about this article was: I liked that they remained together that long. Marriages were meant to b forever. Man made divorce.

What I disliked was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

Your grammar and spelling were: okay as far as I could tell.

My closing remarks: This review was also given on behalf of Anniversary Reviews Forum. Congratulations on your account anniversary.

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