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Review of Murphy's Vacation  
Review by mary568
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
cute and humourous. i like it.
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Review by mary568
Rated: E | (4.5)
very wise words. this is a lovely poem and photo
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Review of Not a Billabong  
Review by mary568
Rated: E | (4.0)
This isn't just about dialog.. it's also about bullying, a very damaging problem. I like how Karen stands up for herself but violence isn't always the best answer for a problem bully... theres a video on MSN aobut a boy who stands up for himself and he is being punished the same as the bully and what the psycologist says about is has some interesting points... being the victim of bullying, I certainly dreamt of hitting my bully but in the end I beat him by finishing school and not getting down to his level....
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Review by mary568
Rated: E | (4.0)
Aside from a few typos and grammar glitches, I love the idea of this and I think it would make a great novel.
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Review of Cosmogony  
Review by mary568
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
a very interesting concept
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Review of Gray House  
Review by mary568
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a very inventive story, I like how the first part of the story leads you to believe that Aaron is the true live person. The ballroom gives a hint that maybe all is not as it seems. When Aaron gets home I thought that was the end of the story and was surprised to find there was more. It's a great twist at the end.
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Review of Grandfather  
Review by mary568
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I was fascinated. It's a really interesting story...
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Review of Roses in Heaven  
Review by mary568
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem, it makes me think of my own mother and what she means to me.
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Review by mary568
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like that. I think it's a good way of pointing out that we should meet people before we decide what they are like.
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