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Review by MatildaRose
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was really touching to read, and having horses myself, I understand the huge loss you feel when you lose them, as they are more then a pet. I could feel your emotion when reading this, and I think the uncomplicated rhyme scheme was very effective in broadly portraying you emotion without hiding it through fancy words, so this was a great choice. 'and say your name' really demonstrates the heaviness you feel, and the emptiness of needing to say the name to remember how it sounded, really struck me.
thankyou for sharing this!
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Review by MatildaRose
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this, and had to go back through a few times in order to gather my thoughts! I really love the way in which you have manipulated the text to mean more then one thing, opening the poem up to deeper perception from the reader, a technique I am trying to develop myself! The question in the first stanza leaves me pausing before continuing, which is so effective in mimicking the emotions felt by the narrator.
'Unwanted and will
Never find my place.'
I really appreciate how you have built in this hidden sub text, that hope does in fact exist.
A great piece of writing which I think would really help a lot of people going through a hard time.
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Review of The Ocean  
Review by MatildaRose
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this, and I think it is universal to lots of people, and perfectly portrays the peacefulness of the ocean!
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Review by MatildaRose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love the rhyme scheme used here, would love to know the inspiration behind it!
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Review of love travels on  
Review by MatildaRose
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love this, so short yet portrays such emotion. Great job!
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Review of Marriage  
Review by MatildaRose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Absoloutley loved this, began by seeming sinister however had a very fun and comical twist!
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Review by MatildaRose
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was incredibly interesting to read! I've had a little look through your writing, and absolutely love your style. I think this is very important to remember, especially as the idea of unrealistic beauty standards is so relevant with the uprise of social media, however is usually linked to the female beauty standards, many people forgetting that toxic masculinity is very real.
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Review of Red  
Review by MatildaRose
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow! I absolutely loved this! I am still at school and often come across pieces like this when studying anthologies. I loved the way you used the idea of red to sculpt multiple meanings and sub plots. For me, when I think of red I immediately link it with danger, so reading the title my mind automatically assumed this, which creates great contrast when we go on to read the first line!
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