This poem is absolutely adorable!! I love how it talks about life how a two-year-old sees it. You are clearly a pro at poetry and i would be honoured if you would read and review my poetry and short story. If you have any advice on how to change my kids' short story to make it go better with illustrations(that I will be doing myself), I would be totally grateful. Please keep in mind that I am a total newbie at poetry and story writing.