I am pleased to be reviewing some of your work on behalf of the 'Bipolar Special Forces Unit'.
* THE STORY :
you have bared your heart & soul in this emotional write.
It is not easy to share such heartache, & I commend you for your openness.
I would like to see this write go further, & you have said it is a work in progress.
As you have come this far, it may be time for you to be more specific in your personal experience & story.
The story as it is, is left a little vague, but I sense that you are preparing in readiness to share more of your self, in a more personal way.
Readers always want to know more; but Cissy, I think YOU will benefit so much from sharing your pain in a more intimate way!
Open up to us...free yourself, if but for a while.
I promise it works magic, & I'm sure you felt a sense of release to write thus far.
You have done a wonderful job, & I look forward to more!!!
Thank you for sharing your inner most self.
Much love, Meriki*
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