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Review of Fiery Red Hair  
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a story about the dreams of a dying woman.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: What a wondrous story you wrote! I thought it was great right from the red hot title. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: Your story is very enchanting. I enjoyed reading about Celtic settings and galloping horses. Very entertaining. Your reader's will feel that the dying woman left her life in tranquil peace. *Delight*

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: I loved your story, but I did have to read the first few paragraphs a couple of times. I thought the woman on the horse was the one who 'carried a baby in her belly', and her husband was killed. Then when I read that her daughter-in-law was expecting the baby, I was a bit confused. ...Especially since these were all the thoughts of a dying woman in a hospital bed. Of course it all comes together and makes sense by the end. I needed to know that it was the same woman thinking about the past through sort of flashbacks in the dream.

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Review of Mental Circus  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem full of emotion for relvelryssorrow's blog entry commentary.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Hello and congratulations on your blue promotion! *Bigsmile*

It was sweet of you to write this poem as a tribute to someone's blog.

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors in your poem.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I really love the simplicity of this one. At first I thought it was a collection of haiku, but then I realized it's just written in a short and meaningful way. I like the way you succeeded in expressing thoughts of emotion and confusion in such a small place. Great work in putting this one together. *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a beautiful love poem.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS/RAMBLINGS: Hello from Ireland! I'm glad my husband gave me a laptop to use on this trip, or I would have missed out on this very special SP entry! Hey, this is my first review as a blue! (*Smirk* I should frame it...)

Someone needs to create 'post card' cNotes that we can send out when we're away! LOL

Sherri, I already knew you were very talented, but it seems that it must run in the family too! The both of you worked miracles with this one! Nice work! *Delight*

*Check2*ERRORS: No errors here.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: This whole poem could easily be very impressive wedding vows, especially the last stanza. Did you ever consider publishing song lyrics Sherri?

I loved the part in a middle stanza, too, about the open door to the heart of angels. ...How charming!

Your poem is so pretty, and I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of The End of Summer  
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Rated: E | (4.5)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a very pretty story about a lake and how one woman loved to go there.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: What a very touching story! I'll have to admit, you had me teary eyed at the end! *Blush*

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors. Nice work. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I enjoyed reading your great descriptions. I could feel the nature all throughout your story.

You did a fantastic job in expressing the love that Lois felt for Swan Lake...Right through to the end. Your readers will really feel the emotions of the character.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: I thought your story was beautiful. It's ironic, though, that the only paragraph I didn't really care for, was your opening paragraph! It makes sense that this paragraph should be the best one of all, to 'hook' your readers into reading on. There were three long sentences in it. The very first two were about birds eating fish in the water. The last one was: "The majestic Blue Herons and the pouch-billed Pink Pelicans, Pinkies Lois called them, filled the vista; their long graceful legs stalking through the shallow lake." To me, this read a bit choppy and seemed confusing as my first taste of the story. I think the first paragraph might also give a hint about what the story will be about...As in Lois and how she looked forward to her get-away summers at the enchanting lake. All in all, it's a very pretty...and touching...story. Nice work. *Smile*

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Review of Live It Up  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem which suggests that we make the best of the bad situations.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Welcome to Writing.com, and thanks for sharing your inspirational poem. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: How many times have we all been 'cheated' out of what should have been ours. You succeeded in putting real truth and wisdom down in words. Your theme of Living it up, even though, leaves us all with hope. *Smile* Nice work!

I like the way your poem rhymes.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: In some places, you wrote words such as, cant and dont. I would change that to can't and don't...especially since you did write they're.

I understand that writing 'cuz' and 'playin' adds to the casual feel of your poem.

Writing 'god' with out a cap might offend some people here, so it's something to think about...

Your poem can be a big inspiration to our members by causing them to remember to 'live it up', so why not add 'inspiration' to your genre instead of 'other'. By doing that, more WDC members might see your poem. *Smile*

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Rated: E | (4.5)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a very friendly poem. *Smile*

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Aw! I saw a tire swing just today, and I thought back to how much fun it used to be to swing away in my younger days. I think the idea of a porch swing sounds like just as much fun. *Delight*

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't see any errors.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: Thanks for putting that smile on my face, as you mentioned in your fun to read poem. The scene you created, of friends laughing and talking while swinging on a porch swing, seems so tranquil and appealing. ...Bring on that coffee and cake! *Bigsmile*

Your rhyme doesn't seem to have a sequence, but I do love the gentleness of it. Keep writing these upbeat poems! *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a descriptive story about sights and textures.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: ...And I certainly painted my own story, as you say in your last line, filled with the visions of your beautiful imagery. Very nice! *Smile*

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't see any errors in your story.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I love how you awaken the senses of your readers, by causing them to imagine things like the heat of the sun, and the feel of the grains of sand.

I also enjoyed the how you made each color you named special...The blues, browns, grays, green...You made whatever color you mentioned come to life in your readers mind.

You really did a great job with your descriptive story. It's upbeat and inspirational too...I feel like going outside into the sun now. *Bigsmile*

Thanks for sharing. *Smile*

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a great story about a family that came to the rescue of a little baby bunny.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Wow! What an experience! I guess these are the times when we say, "Never a dull moment..."

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors in your story.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: What! What! What! Gosh, you had me on the edge of my seat throughout the story, and then you ended it with a VERY suspenseful closing! What happened to the rabbit?

Great job in telling this story of the rabbit rescue. You wrote it so well, that it really held my interest right to the end. *Smile*

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Review of Hotly Scored  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a romantic bitter sweet love poem.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Oooh this one is well done! I really felt you described the hurt of a lost love in a very unique way. *Smile*

*Check2*ERRORS: No errors here.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I loved the gentle rhyme of your poem. It flowed smoothly without seeming at all forced.

I could feel the tender emotion in your poem, of the desire for a love that we can not have...Like touching a flame and getting scored.

Thanks for sharing. It was a pleasure to read...And a perfect size too! *Smile*

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Review of crumby steps  
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Rated: E | (3.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a funny story about a day in the life...

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: I found your story to be very humorous. It's unique and your creativity shows. Nice work.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I absolutely loved the punch line at the end of your story! *Laugh*

I also think the title is perfect! One simply needs to read the story to get it. *Smile*

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: Your story is very humorous, but it deserves some polishing up.

First, I would suggest that you go back to edit the content rating of the item. You didn't choose anything in that place.

You might also want to choose a few genres. Right now, you picked 'other' a couple of times. Comedy, might be your best bet there. With so many genres to choose from, you might find at least three...Adventure maybe?

More WDC members will read your poem if they have a better idea of what it's about. The content rating and genres will be the hint they need.

Next, I would suggest to proof read your story again. There are a few typos that you might want to fix. You used the small letter i a lot for the word, I.
Also you wrote typos such as, "I madea friend of a...". 'Made' and 'a' should be separated.

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Review of Slow Rush  
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Rated: E | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem about nature and the sea.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Your poem seemed to have a unique style of no rhyme or reason. ...Phrases randomly clumped together. I left me a little lost at times, but at the same time, it added to the poetic beauty.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: You used really creative descriptive words. I love the thought of orange-pink clouds and seagulls.

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Rated: E | (4.5)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem about moving on after a bad relationship.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: What a very inspirational poem. I'm sure that others who have been in similar situations would find strength and new found hope after reading your poem.

*Check2*ERRORS:I didn't find any errors.

*Star*FAVORITE PART:You succeeded in putting down in words all of the thoughts, hopes and joys of moving on. Nice work. *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION:This is a poem about thoughts of a dark soul.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: After reading the first two lines, I felt that this might have been a vampire poem. Then, your poem seemed to change. Words of blood spilling onto shoes, and wickedness within made me think that it's more of a poem about guilt and evil feelings.

You did a great job with creativity. Your dramatic poetic words leave your readers with deep thoughts. Nice work.

*Check2*ERRORS: Great proof reading! No errors here. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I found your poem to be very intense. The strong feelings of conflicting emotion flowed throughout the entire piece.

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a writing project about Vampires.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Oooh! This story has the makings of a GREAT story! You are a very talented writer, and it certainly shows. I hope you plan on adding more because I think this is a fantastic introduction. *Delight*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: Wow! This part is only an introduction, but already I can feel that it's going to be a chilling and captivating story.

Your introduction seems so exciting...An airplane crash...Dead bodies...And the talk of vampires!

You wrote with excitement and suspense. Great job in creativity. *Delight*

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: Your brief description is the very first thing seen by our WDC members. You'll want that to be perfect. You left out an 'h' in wheter It should be whether.

One would say, "There was no sign of life." It's not necessary to say, "lifes."

I like the idea of waking up in the midnight. I think it adds something to the mystery of your story. I wake up sometimes, though, in the middle of the night.

Here you wrote: "Not the cold of the rain or the freezing wind that scared this 19 year old boy, but it was something..." -- This doesn't seem to flow smoothly to me. I think the word 'that' should be left out.

This sentence also seems to need a bit of help: "Something he could never imagine it do exists in this world." For one thing, 'do' could probably be left out.

This is a great story so far. I hope you will continue to write it. *Delight*


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Review of Dear God  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem prayer.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: What a sweet poem Wyn! I found it to be very touching and tender.

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't notice any errors.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I could feel the emotion in this sensitive and spiritual poem. Sometimes we get help and answers just by talking about it, don't we. You put such pretty thoughts down in words. Nice job. *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)


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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a short 'letter' story, written for a contest.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: How did you do in the contest? I hope you did well because I thought this one was really pretty. *Smile*

Gosh, I think my soul has attention deficit because it keeps distracting my mind a lot. LOL *Bigsmile*

*Check2*ERRORS: No errors here. Nice work. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: This certainly is a unique and creative idea for a story. What would ones mind say to it's soul...I think you answered that well. The mind is always busy, even at night, but the soul knows to take a moment here and there to 'think' about the little things that make life sweet. *Smile*

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Review of Pigeon Parade  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a nature poem about birds...Pigeons in particular.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Oh Harry I really enjoyed your poem! I've always been fascinated with birds. I make my husband crazy by always asking him what type of bird we see. Lately he's been just making things up. On our last trip to Mexico, he called every bird above water a sea bird! LOL

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors in your beautiful poem story.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I thought you painted a picture well of the scenes in your backyard. I could picture all of the pretty birds you named happily eating their food. I loved the story about the pigeon guy! Thanks for sharing this entertaining poem. *Smile*

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Review of Golden Letters  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)


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*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is the story about the dark and scary life of a young man.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: I must say that your story left many unanswered questions in my mind. It almost seems like the introduction chapter of a novel, which teases the mind and leaves the reader with enough intrigue to read on. Where were these people? What was the book? What was this room John was thrown into? ...Solitary confinement?

Congratulations, btw, on having your story featured in the newsletter. *Smile*

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors. Nice work. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: You did an amazing job with 'flash backs' and such. That is not always an easy thing to do without causing confusion. I thought you succeeded in expressing different scenes from John's experiences.

Your descriptions were great, though as I mentioned earlier, I was left wanting more explanations.

Your story was intense enough so that the reader feels the fear and thoughts of the main character, as well as the hatred of the men kicking him...This example, of course, was from the panic scene when John sees the door to room 101.

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Review of Why I Write  
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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by KC under the midnight sun


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: These are the thoughts about writing by one Writing.Com author.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Thank you for taking the time to write an explanation of your writing. I think you take a very unique approach in writing, as compared to much of what I come across on Writing.Com. I'm looking forward to reading your other work. *Smile*

I'll have to say, though, that I disagree with your statement that much work ends up in the "dust bin of history." How many so called 'chick flicks', sci-fi, or otherwise non-sense movies bring back fond memories of friends and fun? Sometimes we'll remember a book that we read at a special time in our life...During a hospital stay...During a beach trip...etc. Just because one doesn't change the world doesn't mean that one has no purpose or meaning. Each 'type' is important and needed to add variety in our vast world.

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors in your well written work.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I'm much impressed with your writing background. You seem to be knowledgeable and talented far above many of your other WDC peers.

I liked that you name-dropped movies, books, writers, and philosophers that we're all familiar with, to make your points of explanation.

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Review of Promise Me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: These are the song lyrics for a song of love.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Oooh I could picture this one on the radio! Since it's summer and wedding time of the year, I could picture this one ending up as couples wedding songs too! *Delight*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: There are too many songs about dumb things that hardly make sense. It's refreshing to find a true love song. *Smile*

You did a good job with writing your expressions of love. I especially liked the thoughts of rewinding the clock to take it slow through all the best times. Great creativity.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: I think it's time to change your brief descriptions. Instead of talking about how you think your work has grammar problems, I would write something like, "A song of love for R&B or Soft Rock."

In one verse you mentioned that it's a song for a person you loved all your life. Then, in another verse, you wrote, "... I was broken till I met you." I imagined a sweet love song from one childhood sweetheart to another, but then I was a little confused. Great writing though...I hope you do get your songs on the radio someday. *Delight*

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Review of Heaven On Earth  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem about making good choices.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: I feel that this is a very inspirational poem. I like the way you began with descriptions, and had it lead somewhere...In this case, you were trying to express that it's better to not fight.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: You showed creativity with your descriptions, and upbeat mood. You expressed in several different ways that fighting is not a good choice.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: You used question marks here and there throughout your poem, but I think one was needed at the very end after, "So why don't we pick right/
And have heaven on earth?"

You chose 'other' as the type of poem this is. I think if you ever decide to polish this poem up a little, you might pick 'inspirational' while you're editing it.

Maybe you might change your brief description to something other than "I just kinda threw this together..." "Which would you choose..." or something like that...might strike more intrigue and get you more viewers in the future. You can always add the brief description you have now as an added introduction before the beginning of your poem. *Delight*

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Review of Don't Worry Mom  
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Rated: E | (4.0)




*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem written for the love of ones mother.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: I guess we never really know how our own mothers feel until we're mothers ourselves.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: You did a nice job in expressing the feelings that children understand when they grow and become parents themselves.

I really liked the ending...Now when the grown child says, "Don't worry mom" it's to say 'I love you'.

*Idea*SUGGESTIONS: I don't think the 'but' is needed to start the sentence in the second paragraph. I would just leave it as, "The best has already been given by you."

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Rated: E | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION:This is a terrific article about things we could do when we receive gift points along with a review.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Hi Anastasia! It's great to have you active again on our fun site. *Delight*

Your article caught my attention, and I really enjoyed reading it.

*Check2*ERRORS: Perfect five! It was fun to read, and I didn't see any errors. Nice work. *Smile*

*Star*FAVORITE PART: This is really something that, I'm sure, we all think about. When someone gives me a review that really makes me smile, I always want to give them gift points. ...But what do we do when that reviewer already included gps with the review? It is a dilemma, but I think you gave a lot of helpful ideas.

We feel funny 'returning' the gift, so instead we can do some other nice thing in return. CNotes...Auction Donations...Etc.

So, here are some gift points for you along with this review. Like you final suggestion says, a simple "Thank You" is all that's needed here. *Bigsmile*

Very creative and helpful article. *Delight*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a poem in an interesting, stream of consciousness, style.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Gosh, I didn't even realize that your poem was one sentence until I actually read the note at the bottom. I guess I was so entranced with how touching your poem was. I can't imagine that style of poetry is easy to write, but you made yours look easy with effortless flow. Nice work. *Smile*

*Check2*ERRORS: I didn't find any errors.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I could feel the emotion and sad atmosphere in the poem. It was very touching and a pleasure to read. Great job with that 'stream of consciousness' style! I'm impressed. *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)


*Note4* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is an inspirational poem about angels.

*Exclaim* THOUGHTS: Oh what a terrific poem Harry! I will always think of your poem whenever I hear a howl. *Delight*

*Check2*ERRORS: No errors in this well-written item.

*Star*FAVORITE PART: I loved the story behind the meaning of the howl. This was pleasant to read, and now I think I'll be dreaming about wolves howling at the moon tonight. *Laugh*

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