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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Intuey! I don't know if I've ever been to this fundraiser before, but I figure I'll give it some pretty stars. Being a dog owner, I like the name of the activity, and I love the little dog pictured in the brief introduction. I notice that there is a lucky dog merit badge associated with the prize, which makes your activity even more interesting. *Bigsmile*

I wasn't a fan of the people and the raffle tickets at the top image, but I really love the dog image! He reminds me, just a bit, of the dog from 'Little Orphan Annie'. The other has people smaller than the raffle tickets. I think I would have rather see just the tickets at the top, but in the end, it really doesn't make a difference what images are used when people are looking for tickets to send out.

Overall, I think your heading was presented well, and I found it easy to follow.

At a thousand gift points for each ticket, I don't think it's a low price, but it doesn't seem too unreasonable as that's basically the common price most people use in all the raffles.

All in all, I'd like to say that you did this well. It seems to be an ongoing raffle, which is good because I have no doubt people will grow to use it as their, 'go-to' place to buy little gift prizes.
Also, it has a very neat and understandable look to it.

In addition, it's so sweet of your to rotate the groups which will benefit. This will probably get your activity noticed by more people.

I liked that you reminded people that they can buy tickets for themselves as well as to be given as gifts. I thought it was smart to even add that they can give these tickets out anonymously and you gave instructions for that, too. Some people don't think of such things, so it was good to bring it to their attention.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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Review of Red Carpet  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hello Hope! Bravo! What a fun story! I thought it was very clever of you to write a story from the point of view of a lipstick which belonged to a celebrity! Very unique, indeed!

I liked that you included a link to the prompt. I think that added to having your readers appreciate the twist that you put in the challenge prompt.

You were asked to write a story from a Taylor Swift song (That attracted me to your story, by the way, because my daughter likes Taylor Swift and has been to one of her concerts a few months ago.), and you wrote about Taylors lipstick getting interviewed. That took creative imagination, and I loved that idea.

I felt that you, 'set the stage' well, with giving your readers the vision of the red carpet lights, hearing the song from the loud speakers in the background, and seeing the excited reports with their microphones waiting to get the Lipstick's voice captured.

I chuckled when I read the name you gave to the character - L.I.P. Stick! That added to the fun of your story! Your reader's were able to get a glimpse of the excitement the little lipstick must have also felt, 'waking up in Taylors makeup bag'. I didn't know the ingredients of a lipstick. I'll assume you did a little research to find that out, and it was great to include that in the narration of your story.

It was funny to add that small gossip about how many times Lipstick said Taylor reapplied it! Also, the QR code was hilarious! It was a smart way to stick the name of the song in the story. Well done.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of Pink Perfume  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim*Hi PiriPica! If I can be honest, I was attracted to your item because of the really pretty unicorn ribbon which it has on it. After I clicked on the item, I was glad that I did. At first glance, your presentation made your item look like a fun piece to read. I wasn't disappointed!

LOL I must say that I read the notes at the bottom first, and I smiled when I read that the perfume pictured wasn't meant as a product placement. I did hover over 'here' and saw that it was Clean. Nice use of that feature, by the way. Not too many make use of all the features on our site.

Also in the notes, I didn't realize that June 23rd is National Pink Day.
I'll have to remember that, and I'll think of your lovely poem when I do.

I liked that you gave information about the decuain form of poetry. I like to try structured poems from time to time, but I don't always remember the patterns. Adding a bit about it here will help people to see it in your poem, and understand what you were doing.

The pink font at the bottom as well as inside the poem itself added to the nice presentation.

The look of your poem reminds me of a sonnet, though I knew it is a decuain.

I feel that you succeeded in making your poem seem like a 'pink little bottle full of summer aroma'. I enjoyed reading that, although you have a 'kaleidoscope of memories', summer (in other words) brings back memories of pink.

The narrator says that past memories can easily be recalled when thinking of that pink bottle. I loved the little details that you included, such as pink aromas in the breeze, pink clouds, pink floral fragrances, etc. These thoughts help your readers to see pinkish, too.

One more thing that I'd like to point out is how nicely I felt that you rhymed your words. You did this effortlessly and your poem flowed smoothly because of it. Nice work in putting this unique piece together.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of Follow the Sun  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Emerick! I saw the title of your sweet poem, and that's what drew me to it. It reminded me of so many lovely songs with that title, such as Xavier Rudd - Follow The Sun, which I had to put on in the background. With so many nice thoughts about that title, I knew your poem would be just as nice, and I wasn't disappointed.

I found all six of your stanzas to be dazzling and full of pretty poetic words, which left me with a good feeling. I felt that you kept up the upbeat theme well throughout your poem.

Your first stanza was stunning, and it had me wanting to continue on to read more. You are a talented poet! As a person who loves to watch sunsets, I might say that your words complemented the beauty of the sunset, with words like 'orange hue' and 'fiery blaze'. Great choices for the first 'hook' stanza.

I felt that you succeeded in continuing the inspirational purpose of the poem, urging the readers to follow the sun. I interpreted it that although a day might bring sunshine and happiness, it's not always that way. When one sunset brings an end to the day, it's a promise for a new sun - a new start to tomorrow. I think you expressed all of that - and more - in your pretty poem.

I think that your fourth stanza brings the message to your inspirational poem the best, and brings the readers back to your brief introduction about fervent plea from The Preacher as we are reinforced with the thought - "One setback is a chance to soar." What a beautiful message that is!

One more thing I'd like to say, is that I enjoyed seeing the title here and there throughout your poem. It enforced what you were trying to say, in my opinion. Very nicely done. *Smile*



The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Rachel! My apologies! I don't know how I never remembered to review this amazing emporium before. I visit it often enough, but somehow I missed giving it the pretty stars which it so deserves.

There's a reason that your shop has so many ribbons on it and has won at the quills a couple of times. It's because this shop works and there's really nothing else like it. As you put it so nicely in the heading, it's a, 'fantasmagorious chocolate emporium'!

That sets the chocolaty atmosphere of the great shop. With your descriptions in your perfect heading, I could imagine walking into a fudge shop on vacation, and taking in the aroma of many different delights - chocolate, marshmallow, and cherry! Willie Wonka would be envious!

These packages make awesome gifts because each is very unique. Or, one could treat themselves! I love all of the exclusive merit badges, and I like how you posted them in the heading to further make people want to get them. I'm looking at that Taboo Words Crow bird and wondering why I don't have it yet!

In addition to the exclusive badges, there is so much more. One can find reviews, raffle tickets, gift shop certificates, community badges, cNotes, and so much more!

I love the names of the packages. Those, I believe, add to the fun of the shop. We can choose Coffee Creams and other types of candies. There are, of course, chocolate cup cakes, fudge, and cake!

I found your prices to be affordable for anyone's price. Someone could pay eight thousand, seven-hundred thousand, or just about anything in between for a package. There are so many choices.

I liked that you listed the gift certificate holders at the bottom.
Some people (like me) tend to forget such things.

Congratulations for having such a successful shop, and thanks for ALL you do.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Sandra Lynn! I enjoyed reading your fun story. Congratulation in having it win a prize in the contest.

Ah what mothers go through to make their children happy. The narrator wanted her daughter to have a wonderful birthday party. A girl doesn't turn five more than once after all!

I liked the way you set the action going right away in your first paragraph, offering a good hook to your story. I could picture the scene from your descriptions of the party atmosphere. The narrator had been looking around at the balloons, the banner and the cake. I liked how you casually get your readers to see the room through the person's eyes, rather than just simply write about it. The little details such as that is probably what the judges of your contest also noticed. and appreciated.

Your story had a real feel to it, as many little girls love unicorn themed parties. I'm glad you added comedy into the list of genres, as the mom running around trying to make things nice for the party, while little sister is innocently messing things up seemed comedic.

Such a fiasco! The birthday girl was letting her friends in who were at the front door, and the mom was in the kitchen, attempting to fix the cake which had been sabotaged played with by the younger sibling. I thought it was adorable that Alex knew what happened.

If I have any suggestions, it would be to leave space between your paragraphs. It's not easy to read a story which consists of one big block of small print, especially for people who don't have the best eye sight. Leaving space would give your story a more polished presentation.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of Caveat Emptor  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Oh Jace! I found this limerick item of yours to be so much fun! I don't remember how I came across it, but it's great that I did. It was so nice to have fun and enjoy an upbeat item in the middle of my busy day.

You created the best introduction - 'Let the Buyer Beware'!
I guess I'm strange, in a way, because I actually like commercials. I learn about products which I might otherwise have missed that way.

I'll have to say that I did actually hear of each one of those commercials. I think commercials these days are getting shorter and shorter. I saw some that were only thirty seconds each! I remembered all of yours. You know, it made me think that commercials of the past were more memorable than the forgettable ones we see today.

You followed the limerick patterns well in all of the ones you presented. I was impressed and happy to see that you did these patterns while incorporating a cute jingle into those lines. That couldn't have been very easy to do, but you seemed to do it effortlessly.

The couple of lines which stick out in my mind from your poem are, "Can you hear me now? Buy Purina Dog Chow!" So much fun!

I noticed that you picked, what I thought, were either the most noteworthy lines, like the one for Grey Poupon, or lines which had catchy jingles attached to them, like, "Every Kiss begins with Kay."
Everyone has heard of those types, so I think it was smart to pick the best as you did.

It was nice that you also added at the end, a paragraph about the companies which had to do with what you used in your Limerick groupings. Thanks for sharing. I sincerely enjoy reading limericks, and I felt that yours were unique.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of Gervic's Portal  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Gervic! Wow, I'm mindboggled at how skilled you are with technology! This entire webpage is a masterpiece. I didn't know you were so good with computers and this tech stuff which goes into making a page like this. I don't understand much of it, I can barely operate my TV controller! LOL So, I can just look through this page which you did and admire how pretty it looks! As you put it so nicely, 'HTML is your second language'! I can see that!

Nice work with the images. The guy in the images reminds me of an AI, cutsy girl thing that my daughter made to 'resemble' herself.
She told me the name, but I forget what it's called. Anyway, these gorgeous images add to the fine presentation of your web page. *Bigsmile*

I liked that you added recommended items from your port after the paragraphs about you. It seems you have a good amount of shops and fundraising activities. I would bet with your computer skills and skills with making images, you do well with those activities. I'll have to browse through them sometime.

I moved my mouse around and noticed that almost everything is clickable, and then I saw that there are a bunch of words at the very top, under your largest image that are also clickable. I clicked on a few of them. It's like pages within pages! I see that you belong to many groups ('groups' was one clickable word), and I'm glad that you belong to "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  as one of them. I enjoyed the guides section.
I should stop by that also sometime so I can get some tips on technology like webpages.

I'm really glad that I visited this item. It was like 'Disney World' equivalent in an item!! *Laugh* Well done.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Bikerider! Our paths always cross on WDC, especially at "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" , but I figured since we are now on the same Game of Thrones team that I might peek in at your Guest Book to, as you said in your brief introduction, get to know you better.

You have one of the best guest books that I've ever had the pleasure to see. I must say that my first impression was the animated Bike riding image. It's so cute, and the bright red color is eye-catching.

The very first paragraph prompts the reader to sign in. I hope I will remember to do that after I finish this review. I don't have the best memory, but my intentions are sincere.

Your readers also learn a bit of what they will expect to see in this very long guest book heading. You let them know that you will provide many suggestions to activities and items which they might learn or have fun. I thought this was a great start to the page.

The presentation of the page, by the way, seems done well and very easy to navigate because of the different colored fonts for each area.

Congrats on getting two of your stories published in an anthology!
You see, I succeeded in my goal of getting to know you better. I didn't know that!

*Star* The image under that section says it's unavailable. Maybe see if it can be fixed or perhaps add a different one.

I like how you added a thoughtful quote before your Sensations folder. You mentioned that writing is like opening a vein. What a creative way of saying to write from the heart!

You listed a few groups which you belong to, but "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  wasn't there. Here's my pout face *pout* sorry, we don't have an emoji for that! LOL Kidding, but maybe this page needs to be updated - perhaps in MAY after the Game of Thrones event is over. You have Simply Positive listed. I thought that group went out of business.. *Bigsmile*

The final section talks more about you. Thank you for your service as a police officer in law enforcement. *Salute*
You've also done triathlon, chef cooking, and cake decoration! ...And you write and travel, too! Very impressive, and I'm glad I stopped by.


The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Stained! I saw that you had entered this dark poem in the Writer's Cramp contest, so I wanted to read it. I would have loved to know what the prompt was, but if I had to guess, it would be to write something having to do with a ghost.

When I think of ghosts, I think of things like Casper the Friendly Ghost, or the one from the movie which Unchained Melody was about. Your poem had none of the above. I felt that the wording you used to call your ghost, Spirit, added to the dark, chilling, theme of your poem.

I thought the words which you chose to separate each stanza set the atmosphere well. Come, tells the tale of when the Spirit first announces itself and, most likely, chills the bones of the victim.

Stay, seems to describe the terrorizing experience.

Too Late, is self-expressing, in my opinion. It's meaning is that the victim had been overcome by the unfriendly spirit.

It was a good touch to end your poem similar to how it began, with the wording, Spirit in the night. I believe that added to the ghostly fear, which was more than hinted at in the poem.

How scary it must have been to the narrator, to hear an unknown presence whispering to them. I had the feeling that the narrator watched helplessly while the spirit tormented its victim.

The torment, I thought, seemed to escalate in the next stanza, where you described an almost torture from the spirit. Nice work in building up the terror in your scary poem.

The ending brought good closure.

One more comment, whoever gave you that black ribbon surely chose the perfect color. It assisted in setting the dark atmosphere before I read the first word.



The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of HSP Gift Shop  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Purple! I see that you like purple, as most of your pretty images and merit badges are in that color theme.

I enjoyed looked through all of the packages and badges in your shop.
You do have an impressive amount of badges.

What I liked most about your shop is that you, not only offer packages, but you also allow your visitors to decide if they would prefer to have something which isn't offered here as a package - Like a, 'create your own package' selection.

I felt that the names which you gave to these different packages went well with the group which they represent and benefit. Words like Sexy and Romance were in abundance.

In my opinion, your prices are pretty fair. I was at a shop recently and the prices seemed horrible! Here, one might give a gift to someone without using up all of their gift points. There is really something for everyone, with prices starting at ten thousand gift points for a class certificate, or fifteen thousand gift points for a community badge.

The exclusives are the best though, I think. They range in price from thirty thousand to seventy five thousand, and then, of course much higher prices for the plaques. I thought this was reasonable.

My favorite is the Purple's Exclusive package. Two really stunning exclusive merit badges for sixty thousand gift points. I will have to treat myself someday. I love the Purple's Prize one. It looks like something from a fairy tale. Great creativity in the imagination which went into that badge, and into the entire, very impressive shop. Well done, and good luck with it.


The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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Review of Scenic C-Notes  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Elizabeth! I came across these pretty cNotes, so I figured I had better give them a review and the pretty stars which they deserve.

I liked that you presented all of the cNotes in this collection as, 'blank', so that the people who visit your shop can choose to send them however they'd like.

After clicking on, 'View full cNote', I noticed a fun quote in the first one, which was a cave. "“The cave you fear to enter holds the treasure you seek.” ― Joseph Campbell" What a thought provoking, inspirational quote that is! It might be interpreted that, if we don't try something, we might be missing out on the rewards. I wondered if this was a quote that had been meaningful for this cave, or if you simply thought of putting it there. Either way, I thought it was a nice touch to be included along with the image.

I live in the States, but I've visited Ireland several times in various areas. I don't recall seeing the places which you depicted here, but they certainly are beautiful! I also snooped in your bio to see if you are from Ireland, but I see that you are from Canada. I guess you took these photos on a visit there.

Very nice photography, by the way! It's nice to see a cNote shop that is made up from the actual photos which someone took!

The one of a castle is my favorite! This one could be sent out to GoT players, I think. It has that fantasy feel.

I wondered where the Irish Garden and Irish City scene had been taken.
In my opinion, they look like different places. Anyway, I think I could look at these pretty pictures all day long, and I feel like I have been! LOL Thanks for putting this great shop together.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm


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Review of A poem for Chance  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim*. Hi Kit! I thought I’d take a chance and read this poem! Kidding! I saw so many poems about your dear furry friend, that it made me want to read one of them. You mentioned that you are not a poet, but I do disagree. I enjoyed this poem and I can say that you did a wonderful job with it.

I love poems that rhyme, so I was pleasantly surprised to see how beautifully this one rhymed. It added to the fun and sweetness of your tribute poem to your pet.

You expressed in your poem that you are so proud of Chance. I can feel that emotion in your writing.

Your readers follow the cycle of his growing through your well thought out stanzas. I smiled when I read about how he was a coy kitten, just learning to loose his fear and trust the owner.
What a good life you gave him, to help him through a bad start of sickness and get him to be the mighty cat that he is today. It was a lovely name to give him at the young stage, during the period of uncertainty.

I have three large dogs. As a person who is so used to having the dogs, I could imagine from your writing what it’s like being around a cat….Being around Chance. Your descriptions of his sweet, gentle purr and coiled tail painted the picture vividly. I liked how you described his meow, too. I can tell that there is a strong bond between the owner and pet.

Kit, my favorite line was the closing line, about how he keeps your feet warm! So sweet! I thought that was a perfect way to end the poem.
Our pets do become part of the family. It was thoughtful of you to write a poem for yours. I’m sure if he could talk, he would be just as proud of you. Thanks for sharing your cat poem. *Cat*


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Game of Thrones  [13+]
Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st
by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Jeff! Somehow while wandering through your very impressive port, I found this cute item. I was attracted to it because I love animals, and this piece seemed to scream, 'animals' all over it.

I also loved the idea, as stated in your brief description, that it's an animal alphabet acrostic. When I think of acrostic poems, I imagine that they will spell out words. I thought it was very creative of you to do one showing the entire alphabet. I could imagine it was tricky to think up an animal for every single alphabet letter, but you did that smoothly!

I'll have to admit that a few of those I will look up later, just because my curiosity is getting the best of me! Those would include Vicuna and Xeme.

Good thinking to include animals like Unicorns and Narwhales! Those, I believe, added to the fun of this sweet poem.

What I found to be most impressive, is that your alphabet acrostic poem rhymed and made sense! What I mean is that I've read acrostics where people wrote lines which fulfilled their obligation of starting with the needed letter, but those lines didn't necessarily connect in any way. Your rhyming phrases did.

My favorite lines were of the Quail and the Rattlesnake! I could imagine a bird chirping, not realizing that a snake was thinking about pouncing. My Boxer was bitten by a poisonous snake not too long ago, but I won't get into that here. Anyway, the incident made me picture what was going on in your poem there.

Lastly, there are a couple of other fun things which I want to point out. I thought you went above and beyond by including animals which were less common than others. For example, you used, 'Centipede', rather than cat, and, 'duck', rather than dog.

Also, I felt that you ended your poem in a way that is sure to put a smile on your readers faces. It was all for the Zebra's birthday! What a nice way to give the poem closure. Well done.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Exclaim*Hi Jakrebs I thought your story was very captivating. You do know how to keep your readers 'in the palm of your hand with your gripping tale of potential romance'. After I read the whole thing, I wondered if Patty ever called. Maybe she did. Maybe there was a different 'Patty' after that incident in the narrator's life.

I liked the opening of your story. The narrator captures the hearts of the readers by mentioning how he used to write more fiction type stories and poems, but now he seems to lean more toward personal writings. I thought he was sweet to volunteer in a soup kitchen. I have always enjoyed doing volunteer work throughout my life, so this is particularly meaningful to me.

I also thought it was sweet of the narrator to be so nice to the gal with the mental disability, although I was a bit confused by the ARC reference. I wasn't quite sure what that was.

I got the feeling that this Patty person saw goodness in the narrator because he was holding a nice conversation with Ashley about Winnie the Poor and all of those characters. I felt that you did a great job in writing a very realistic conversation between the three people. The rest of their encounters also seemed realistic to me, with their paths crossing while they were doing various tasks at the soup kitchen place.

I thought it was a bit funny how shocked the narrator was when Patty asked him for his number. You did the whole write up of reasons why she never called, but I think it was because he sounded to her like something was wrong when she asked.

I used to enjoy David Letterman's top ten lists! I enjoyed reading yours! You had very humorous suggestions on the list. In your brief introduction, you mentioned that you could easily come up with a top twenty list. I had the feeling that you easily could have. Thanks for sharing your fun story.



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Review of I Have Questions.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Fivesixer! I gave you five stars because I don't believe I've ever read such a deep, philosophical Item like this before.
In my opinion, it gives the question of life a new meaning. Not only does the author question life, but has a number of questions which seem to not have an answer.

Bravo for writing a piece which provokes lots of thought. One could feel the strain of the complex questions, while attempting, in vain, to answer such questions. The pondering alone could possibly take many turns, as the reader contemplates several of the various paths.

I thought you showed creativity in beginning the thought of the first stanza with the idea of how everything starts at one, and then revisiting that idea again in a later stanza.

We are always taught that everything starts at one. You presented an idea that everything starts at one, except when we start at zero. It's true! A zero is a nothing - A place holder of things which haven't began yet. So yes, you are correct, I agree, that the goal is improvement. If one starts at zero, it is a starting point where the imagination thinks of a goal. It gives a chance to start, and then to have more than they had before.

That brings up another question you offered. Perhaps once this person has a goal in mind, when does that person get the chance to proceed in following that goal. Will that goal be successful. It's hard to say. I thought you expressed that feeling well, with relating it to winning a lottery.

Here on WDC, for example, we might enter a contest or challenge. We put in work, but there's no guarantee that that anything will become of all our hard work. As you put it, "we might pay back in interest, but that doesn't defeat the purpose of getting ahead." It makes me thing that life if full of chances. We win some, and we lose some. I'd like to think that we learn along the way.



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Game of Thrones  [13+]
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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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for entry "A Final Decision" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Kiya! Oh my gosh, I didn't know you write such scary stories! Your story sounds like it could be made into a movie that my husband would love to watch! It seems too violent for me!

I thought your descriptions set the scene well, in this story of death, bloodshed and torture.

You introduced your main character nicely. I could feel his terror, as he sloughed through filth and mud after the days on end of torrential downpours. I got chills while thinking about the incredible cold which poor Jakob had to endure.

The overseers seemed mean. I had the feeling that Jacob and his friends were mixed with both anger and fear at what their orders would be next.

I didn't understand why Jacob was assigned to the Crematorium, or what that actually meant, but this story read more as an excerpt of a long story, rather than a stand alone piece. So, I could only imagine that this crematorium was a place meant to destroy dead bodies which these people are probably killing.

I liked the action and suspense in this story. Jacobs friend showed him that he had a hidden gun. It made me think right away that he planned to kill the mean people who were giving them the orders. I especially thought this, when Jacob warned his friend that it was too dangerous.

You did a great job of adding the prompt words, "Let's get out of here", during this suspenseful moment. So many times in a story, authors try to rush the prompt in quickly in order to get it over with. You waited to the right moment toward the end.

I can assume that Jacob didn't get away, and that he was instead recaptured. It seemed the target was killed, but I can only imagine what happened to Jakob's friend. I hope he got away!

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Review of Zippy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Legerdemain, I'm still looking through your assortment of poetry. This one caught my eye because it looked like it would be fun to read. The title of, Zippy, and the introduction of, 'Poor Zippy', intrigued my curiosity, as I wondered who this Zippy was and what was the delimma about. Also, I really love pictures of animals, and stories/poems about animals, so when I saw the genres which you picked, I knew it would be something which I would enjoy spending some time with.

Wow, I enjoyed the fun rhyme pattern, and the upbeat themne throughout.
One could not help but smile while reading this cute poem. You are very talented, indeed. I just read a poem from you which I felt was very artsy, and now you did this adorable, 'fun', poem. You can really do it all!

The first stanza begins with Zippy about to be born. I thought this was a creative idea and way to start a poem. Zippy has a conversation with Gob about what color he would like to be. What a truly fun idea!
So, Poor Zippy - Yes, now I really get the title! Poor Zippy seems confused. Your readers will understand that from the words you picked in your character's conversation.

I was able to figure out very easily, through the next couple of stanzas that Zippy's indecision continued. I loved how you allowed your readers to get an idea of how cute little Zippy was, as he teeter-tottered back and forth between Black and White, and just could seem to make up his mind.

When you wrote how God chuckled, I had the impression that what Zippy would end up with, was, in a way, God's surprise joke to play on him.
We all know what a Zebra looks like! *Laugh*

I thought this would be a fun poem to read, and I wasn't disappointed. Have you ever thought about adding a zebra image along with this poem? I'm sure you are the person to have a bunch of those.


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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of Daffodil Slumber  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Legerdemain! I was wandering through your port and I came across many really pretty poems. I chose this one because your title and brief description captured my attention. It's the perfect time of year here where the Daffodil's might be in their slumber while they wait for Spring!

In my opinion, your poem had an artsy feel. It was simple, in an artsy way, yet it was able to tell an entire story with finely chosen poetic words. It made me think that the author is a bit of an artist. I know you are great with images, so maybe this is true.

I thought the centered presentation and the genres you chose, (nature, environmental, etc.) added to the setting and atmosphere well.

Your opening stanza set the scene for the rest of the poem to follow.
I could imagine from your descriptive words, daffodils asleep for the winter, under the blanket of snow. I don't know much about flowers, but I'll assume they are flowers which bloom again when the spring and better weather comes. April Showers bring May flowers?

I like how you can make your readers see the sun, without actually mentioning the sun...spring rays. I felt that was very clever.

Your creativity continued with all of the other stanzas. I could picture the pretty flowers just beginning to bloom, nodding their faces. I was impressed again, how you can describe the scene without telling what's actually going on.

I felt that you continued to set the mood of the poem by hinting that the flowers are soothing to people viewing them.

I interpreted the ending to mean that the cycle was going to end and start over again. Nice work!

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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Review of The Ocean  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Joy! What a treat for me to stumble upon your beautiful, spiritual poem to start my day!

I truly loved the uplifting mood of your poem. You succeeded in capturing my attention and I felt relaxed and in awe as I read it.

The ocean and it's beach are always so pretty, and you expressed that well in your poem. Even if there is a threatening storm, the beach is still a wondrous place.

As I sit here drinking my coffee, I wish that I was at that beach. You used the perfect descriptions which opened many of my senses, so that I could truly imagine being there.

Your first stanza, made me think of what the grey, cloudy sky looks like as it touches at the water. I can 'see' the choppy ocean waves blending into the dark air around it.

Uhoh, although I love how you talked about the angels and their thunderous lullaby, I'll have to confess that I am terrified of thunder and lightning. Joy, I will think of your words during the next thunderstorm, and I'll try to imagine it as a thunderous lullaby. I'm sincere! Your words will stay with me. The sign of an amazing author is that they have the ability to write something so special, that people will remember it at later times in their life!

I particularly liked your phrase, wrinkles in the sand. My family and I love to walk along the beach. I always find those little ripples to be like pretty artwork! It's nice to see that you wrote about it. I see many ocean-type poems, but no one seems to mention those little details.

I loved the last stanza. The author seemed to relate the beach to our life as well.

Joy, thank you for adding images with this beautiful poem. I can honestly say that I spent a good deal of time enjoying these images. I love to take pictures of sea gulls at the beach. I never seem to get nice shots of them, but you found a perfect image to add here. Very nice.



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Review of Conduct Becoming  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Don! What a pleasant surprise for me - I started reading your poem, and then I realized that it consisted of many stanzas of limericks! I love limericks! To me, they are really lots of fun! I expected a simple, sort of spiritual drama poem. This one, I thought, had the best of both worlds. It told a lesson, and it did it in a fun and unique way.

I hope you did well in this contest, and that the judges found this as much of an unexpected gem as I did. You should probably add comedy to the genres!

The opening had me cracking up, and the mention of the tram made the little picture in your brief introduction make sense. Also, the ending 'punch line' last stanza about the conductor also explained a lot, and tied nicely into the title of, 'Conduct Becoming'. I thought that worked well with the mention of the conductor. *Smile*

Each limerick stanza had its very own witty charm, and they all flowed together to tell the story of the bully, Graham. We get a good idea that this, Graham, is one bad bully. He obviously has a bad attitude, and picks on people, as when he stole a mans book and sang, "I'm Bad", as he did it.

What bad luck he had to have priest and a nun who seemed to tattle on Graham to God. God answered their prayers and put Graham in his place, and now Graham is anew as tame as a lamb.

I liked the happy ending, and I also felt that you ended it well by using the same, There once was a bully named Graham, but only now Graham was no longer a bully. Very nicely done. *Smile*

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Jay, and first let me say how sorry I am for your loss.
I can't imagine how it must feel to lose a sibling. I have two siblings myself, so I understand that we all must experience loss. It doesn't make it any easier to know the inevitable.

The way you wrote this letter that your brother, who no longer with us to read it, brought tears to my eyes. You wrote it in a heartfelt way. I'm sure that if there's a way, your brother is looking on and knowing your feelings and surly feels the same way too. I could feel the love between brother and brother in each and every stanza.

Through watery eyes, I read the emotions of love, regret, and the passing of life's moments. The sign of a great author is when they can write in a way that provokes these same emotions in the reader. You did that well.

The start of this tribute poem speaks of wishes that pain could have been mended. It's so true that words can cause pain, which can truly be sometimes more painful than wounds.

Brothers endured the same memories while growing up, and they eventually drifted apart. Later, they have regret for the moments wasted which they might have had together.

You said it well, that you new to grow stronger with every waking day. Though we can never forget memories, I'm sure it's good to also remember the good memories and to know that each brother surely also feels love of the brotherly bond that can never be erased.

I liked how your poem ended in peaceful thoughts of how you were thankful for being able to say you had a brother and that you are grateful and loving toward Ray. The carefully placed gentle rhyme added to the experience. Nice work.



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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Exclaim* Oh what fun! Bravo, Carol! Your fun/funny poem story about the Halloween experience put a smile on my face this rainy morning! It made it feel like Halloween in April!

I wanted to read something which was fun, and I wasn't disappointed by choosing your item. I had no idea when I started reading it, that it had stanza, after stanza after stanza of limericks! Wow, I can never get enough of good, humorous limericks, and you had an abundance of them here. I'll have to say that I was very impressed. I've written a few limericks in my life - though I wrote only one at a time! - So I know that they are really not easy to write. Not only does the strict pattern need to be followed, but it has to rhyme well, too.

All of the limericks in your story poem read smoothly. I tried to find something, anything which I could point out to you...A rhyme that was off, for example...But everything was perfect. You have a talent for storytelling and rhyming!

Poor Jack. He wanted more than anything to fit in to the Halloween pack, but wow, things had a way throughout the story of going wrong. He had someone carve a creepy face. He had someone vandalize him with a fire candle. Poor Jack the pumpkin couldn't catch a break!

I felt that your creativity shined, as I read about Ghosts and witches, too. Oh, and we must not forget the witch's hat and cat! All of these things gave me vivid imagery of Halloween.

I'd like to add that the little Halloween story you added under the poem about the Halloween Pack was a fun/funny touch! I enjoyed reading about the skeleton and other favorites there, too. The image at the top was perfect as well. Nice work.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Hi Wren and happy WDC Anniversary! Wow! What an exciting and fun prompt! I would never had considered a challenge about making every word in the poem begin with the same letter. Someone had a great creative idea!

I can figure how tricky it might be to do a poem in this way, but you seemed to have done it effortlessly. I hope you did well in the challenge. *Smile*

What I was most impressed by was the generous amount of stanzas which you added. I think if I had to do such a thing, I probably would have ended with three stanzas! Nice work.

I thought River Rock was a nice theme for your poem challenge. You found lots of great, 'R', words which worked well here. At least, you made them work well. Everything flowed very nicely and made sense without having me stumble through it at all.

One of the most impressive ideas that I felt you did in this poem, was to have a sort of topic in each stanza. In the first, we are introduced to the rolling river and round rocks. The next talks all about how the ranchers react. Followed by a stanza about the rains. The next showed trickle creativity as you wrote about raft riders. Your last stanza, I think, was one of my favorites. You mentioned a runoff, which led up to the ending of the poem, where we find that the roaming rivers relaxed. I thought this was a nice way to bring closure to your poem.

How did you do in the contest? I can't imagine anyone would do better.
I was curious as to which contest this was. I would add a link to it so we could see it and more poems like this. Of course, if the contest is over, it's better not to add any link.

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Review of Before the Winter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Exclaim* Hi James and Happy Anniversary! I'm glad I came across your port because if I didn't, I wouldn't have found this very beautiful poem.

I thought that this poem could be made into a song. Have you ever considered that? Not only does it talk about seasons, but it also hints of the seasons of love. I felt that was lovely and intertwined the seasons with thoughts of romance in a most creative way.

My favorite stanza, if I had to pick one, might be the third stanza.
There, the narration spoke about waiting, no matter how long, and keeping the flame alive.

The middle stanzas were sweet. I saw true poetic words, in the talk about how thoughts of the summer will keep them warm in the winter's breeze. That was very pretty and creative.

The last stanza, I though, was done well. I liked how you brought your readers back to the first line of the very first stanza, by making a similar last line about, 'before the winter'.

Your poem reads well, flows smoothly, and stands perfectly the way it is. However, I had a thought to play with colored fonts. If it were me, I'd center the poem, and make each stanza in colors, almost like a sunset! It might look similar to this:
This could
be your
Very beautiful
poem

Anyway, that's just an idea which came to my mind since this poem mentioned seasons and love. Seasons are usually colorful, and love is sometimes associated with a sunset. You might even be able to come up with a better color scheme than the quick example which I offered above.

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Game of Thrones  [13+]
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by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm




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