I won't lie, this was one of the best stories I have ever read. The idea of Purgatory is a great topic for a story, and I haven't read many as good as this one. I love the last paragraph. The gruesome detail made me squirm in my seat. I rate this story a complete and total success.
I love the story. It's really good. I didn't read much but from what i did read it's one of my favorites. I enjoy stories like this but I can't write them. Well I can they just suck. Would you be willing to add to some of my stories if you have any ideas on what people might like. I love the fart torture genre. Too bad not many stories involve it mainly. Or maybe im stupid and can't see them.
Write back and FYI you are AWESOME
I don't get why people aren't adding to this story. I think you laid down good requests and a great idea. I think the reason you don't have many chapters yet is because you only have 4 chapters and alot of people avoid interactives that aren't long. My suggestion is try adding yourself and it will slowly get better.
I know it sucks when your story doesn't get a lot of attention. Maybe if you try adding to it yourself or expanding the audience you are available to, then you may get more additions. I do like the way you give the options of who is getting tortured and who is torturing.
I think you are a really good writer. Maybe you can help me out
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