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15 Public Reviews Given
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Review of Armageddon  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Yikes. That would suck.
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Review of Letting You Go.  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope your heart feels better soon. Hugs.
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Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. There are a lot of these little snippets into people's lives. I really hope they're not true because they're a little heartbreaking. I hope your hands can find warmth and stay that way. Hugs.
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Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like the last line. It lets the reader finish the story however they want. Considering that it's the dead/undead world coming for a visit, I'm not going to make it very pleasant. Poor Sarah and Grant. Very cool.
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Review of Corona  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Truth. Very well done. There's a wonderful flow to it. Hopefully soon there will be a pleasant follow up piece.
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Review of A Fool's Errand  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Very cool! It made me think it could a scene from a videogame like Skyrim. Nicely done.
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Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was cool. I liked the flow of it. It wasn't a typical he said she said. It felt like I was listening to someone tell it. Great job!!!
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Review of The Crater  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really dig this. It's a moment in the life of a couple of boys who witness something extraordinary. Very cool.
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Review of Airport Romance  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was a bit heartbreaking for me. If my wife ever cheated on me I don't think that I'd be mad. I'd be crushed. There was a lot of sweet moments between Jill and Dave which I think many people will be able to relate to. I can't really comment on punctuation or anything because mine is atrocious. Nicely done!
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Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nicely done. Body image is something too many people feel they need to worry about. Like I always tell my daughter, You are you and that makes you beautiful.
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Review of Law of the Jungle  
Review by MichaelLomas
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I really dig the set up. Make your reader think one thing and hit them with something different at the end. Nicely done!
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