I like the poem and the conceptual thread, but in some places, it feels forced. But, like I said the idealism holds true. Wish she would have ended more assured.
This poem is unique. It carries the multiplicity of the emotive context. The amicable acquiescence, the residual torment of past review, and the sometimes blindness that guidance given as refrain. Good job.
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