|This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I like the story you crafted here.
This poem is powerful in its story and rhyme . I feel the sadness woven in this poem by the line “While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.
I feel that it wrote from a person’s life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.