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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem and so motivating words.

“I bring joy to those around me
knowing I am happy to be.”
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Review of Not out of clay  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your two line poems. It has good rhyme.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is good write about poems. Poems are the mirror of mind. They touch our heart and minds. We express our emotions by poems.

So thoughtful!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
That is a wonderful story. You have good imagination. I like how you sketched. It would be better if you write more from the suspense ending.
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Review of The Traveler  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good story. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view. I like how you begin it with a new paragraph. I enjoy the character “Ezekiel”

The most I like the best the description of the view with vivid scenery.
Though, I am not expert but it sounds like the story doesn't really reach a conclusion. This is my opinion only.

Best of luck for the continuation of your story.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like the way you crafted your poem. “garlic” “ geese” “maple syrup” “future shore” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene.

This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like the title as well.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is wonderful story written with good points. I like the thoughts embedded in it. I like the line "Then, do not protect your positive, even saintly characters from negative emotions. A highly evolved character will know how to use an antidote to the negativity he or she is feeling, like using love against hatred."
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful poem about a brilliant London-based detective, Holmes. Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story. The tones I find in this poem are rhythmic.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good read. Written with the prompt "THE TV IS BROKEN" for the Flash Fiction. I think your write go with the prompt and you managed very well.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
{/b} This is an interesting story. It is full of suspense’s.
I like the way how you wrote this story. Dialogues flowed beautifully between the character Jakoline and Lattan. I like the fonts as well.

There is no description of the events I found. Otherwise it's a good story.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very good message with an unique concept.You have written a very good piece of poem from life experience. I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation. I like the emotions and the lines

"Sailing with the wind while cresting reckless waves before,
Churning through the white caps leaves you scurrying for more!"
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Review of Fragmentation  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
“Fragmentation” is a poem of war. I like the picture of war scene the poet painted here. For example

“napalm blossoms blaze
whistling mortar thumps
wet mud
drifting diesel haze
near-miss foxhole jumps”


The lines are full of sound imagery, the sound of mortar, explosions.

The poem telling how a soldier facing what in the battlefield. I like the rhythm and how each line breaks.

The tone I found this poem carries the sounds and stress of the war.
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Review of Heat Wave  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem for global temperature. For the past few years many countries weather pattern are changing. Here, In my country for the past few years, the winter chapter is shrinking.

I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like the simplicity of this poem. My favorite lines "Heat waves blowing
All around the sky
Sunscreen needed
Now it's high time"

Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read this from read and review page. It is a very good message with an unique concept. You have written a very good piece of story. Yes, we all have skills to communicate. You truly said that "waiting your turn to speak, not interrupting, valuing everyone's opinions, and offering your own contributions."

Thank you for sharing your opinion.
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Review of Spring Nostalgia  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem and the vivid details of nature. The descriptions are beautiful. The tone I find this poem is cheerful. I could imagine the scene.

Thank for sharing!!
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Review of Lost on Route 66  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Truly this is a good folklore poem. It creates the story with beautiful images . I like the way you told the story of good descriptions of Erin's spirits. I like the lines "Banshees wait in graveyards
ghosts don't get their kicks."


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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Hooves!!

I like this family story. It has beautiful thoughts. The role of a loving aunt in a child’s life should be a cherished one and, more important, a necessary one. In this story you describe your aunt Catherine who create a great role in your life.

The title of the story fits the themes of the story. I like the happy ending. The dialogues are believable. They floats beautifully.

I like the emotions evokes in this story.
Overall it told beautifully and well-written. I enjoyed it!!
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I like the story you crafted here.
This poem is powerful in its story and rhyme . I feel the sadness woven in this poem by the line “While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.

I feel that it wrote from a person’s life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.

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Review of The Winning Goal  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good story written and told with the given prompt "The Winning Goal". The title fits this story. Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the ending.
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Review of The Pig And Rhino  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice to see you penned down your thoughts so beautifully. I like the Pig and Rhino story.

The fonts are appropriate and easy to read. Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing!!
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Review of City Boy  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this because it goes well with your crafted words. The poet go back in time, with his mind in Brooklyn, remember those good old days where he once lived, the street where he played . He tells “Now everyone I know has left
Perhaps a few have stayed”. He remember the people who had loved him and he feel nostalgic.
I feel this poem is positive by the lines “I’m better off where I live now
And this is where I’ll stay”.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)


This is a good blog written about life. And from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view. I like how you you begin it with a new paragraph. It makes me reading to the end. And I hope you will write and share your metaphor of life with us.

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Review of Blue Light  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Blue light: Is a nature Poem, pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of night. The poet has painted a charming poem of night with lightning bugs, bats, nightingale, stars and so on. All the natural things sings in melodies of colors of night.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your story about "Tina" on the review request page. This is really a good story. Beautifully told and written that readers can relate your story. I like the suspense. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending.
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Review of Jackie Runs Away  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogue floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Jackie”. You crafted him so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't see any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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