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Review of November Nuances  
Review by Mina 🚣
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Jaya,

I like all the thoughts woven in your poem.
you have penned a charming poem of November Nuances with dancing leaves. I like the melodies of colors of love and affection. It’s so full of wonderful thoughts. Your rhyming floats beautifully. I like the lines

"With the wind dying down, I see my love
sitting on the stone seat in the yard,
gazing at the pale sun glimmer above."

It's been a pleasure to review your poem.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

Lisa, It's been a pleasure to review your poem "A letter to Johnny on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like way you put your feelings to Johnny.. The poem expressed your nostalgic feelings. The poet wrote “Johnny I love you the world full and the sky full No one can compare to you you’re so cool”.

I find the lovely romantic thoughts inside the lines..The poem has a nice rhythm with good imaginary. The title, “A Letter To Johnny” fits this poem.

Good write and so beautiful!!

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "One Busy Night in Chicago on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

I just read your detective story about a Girl and a Gangster and I think I will read some other stories of Lou Ryan’s .

I like the setting of the story how you described the surroundings. Dialogues flowed beautifully. You described the fight with accurate and believable actions. I liked the range of problems and the way you solved the mystery. Especially the lines “I opened all the pigeon cages and spooked the birds until they flew off the roof making a racket. A nervous Vinny looked up at all those birds flying wildly “.

Great write and so thoughtful!!

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

I just read your story. The beautiful photo of a black bird caught my attention as I visit your port. The story is told with the bird’s point of view with lively voice and vivid descriptions.

The end is beautifully constructed. It explains that the things don't always work out as you expect. I like the poetic line “"Bailey Blackbird, you are banished from the barn, never to return.”
It's my pleasure to review this story"The Littlest Blackbird.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.*Bird*

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Review of Wall of Tears  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a beautiful poem and inspirational. I appreciate and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title Wall of Tears fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem written with lively voice and vivid descriptions. “the memories of aging, fragmented,
broken into segments of ground forgotten”. I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.


*Bee* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end. I like the line “Fly home to rest, little bird
No tears to echo off the wall will fall in your honor”


*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

Beautifully written and told . The readers could imagine the scene where they were. The ending of the story is brilliant.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Stars and Other Poems on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a beautiful nature poems. You have captured the natures unique moments so beautifully. I appreciate the thoughts woven in this poem. Yes, Beautiful nature could cherish our heart always.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “Orange is the dusk
Before they start to shine
Opening the night
A magnificent design”.


*Thumbsup* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poems. It’s well written.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Voices of the Wolves and the Dragons on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

Beautifully written with the Wolves and Dragons view. The story flowed well with your crafted words. You have good descriptions of your characters.

You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I can’t wait to read another Chapter from you.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "To my pains surrender from read and review page on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good poem. I like the way you put your feelings out. I like the thoughts woven in this poem. It’s really true that poetry help us express how we feel by writing a poem from deep down within the heart and mind. But I think inner peace is within us. The rhyming is beautiful. I like the lines

"I've been broken down in pieces
My hearts been ripped in two.
I've tried to regain composure
But I just couldn't see It through."

Keep writing more !!!

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Nature's Wonder (1) on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

Beautifully written with the 24 syllable. You capture a unique moment of life. I like the wording. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like nature poem because I like all things of nature and enjoy her surroundings.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem. It's inspiring and motivating. I like the thoughts woven in this poem. This well crafted write delivers a powerful message especially the last lines
“We dwell in a globular ball, merely a massive hall.
United we stand, divided we all fall."

It’s really true that the peace is within us. For that we need unity. It is important to work together to achieve a bigger goal. It’s sad that human don’t think what will happen to our future. The tone I find this poem is positive. The rhyming is beautiful. Keep writing more !!!


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Review of How Silent  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "How Silent on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a sweet poem full with wonderful thoughts. I like the way the poet wrote it with illustrated feelings. I like the lines "Every piece of music sounds like your favorite song
How silent my world would be without you."

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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Review of The Golden Pool  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Golden Pool on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: Wonderfully told. The readers will get pulled into the witch's world.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialog floated beautifully between the characters. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Mordon”. You crafted her so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Your Eyes are my Favourite Colour on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “If you could see how it feels when you dive into deep and you're so light and the water's so blue, you just want to get lost in it” . I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.

*BulbO* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*BulbP* SUGGESTIONS:I feel that the sixth line of your poem is a little longer. I like the repeated line “That's what colour it would be”

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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Review of A hero *  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's my pleasure to review this story"A hero *.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a good piece of write and yet so informative. The image that comes to my mind is the effects of war. You paint beautifully a perfect scene of war . It’s sad that human don’t think what will happen to our new generation. It seems you wrote these from personal views and experience and it looks great. It expressed the feeling, rights, and change etc.

Keep Writing!!

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's been a pleasure to review your story "On Butterfly Wings on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I appreciate the philosophical thoughts and the emotions portrayed in this poem.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind.

I like the lines “When two loving hearts collide
Honoring equality in all things
With mutual respect and care
They'll soar on butterfly wings ”.

I like the thoughts evokes in this poem. It reflects the thoughts of all of us. This poem tells us to embrace life fully. The last second stanza is my favorite.

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.
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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Laughter of the Gargoyle on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate the simplicity, and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title of the poem fits for the contest.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of a mythological character gargoyle you have painted here. The poet imagined a gargoyle and he could watched what was taking place below. The descriptions are well written and very vivid. There was a comic touch to everything that would make the readers want to take a ride through Gargoyle‘s world

*Bulletg* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has nice rhythm.

*Bulletg* FAVORITE LINES: As I sit in my spot, one final thought
Theses loony souls, just need to be taught



*Bulletg* STRUCTURE & FORM:you have beautiful thoughts inside every line. I like how each lines breaks.

*Bulletg* THEME: I enjoy the images, colors and sounds this poem.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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Review of Tanya  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Tanya on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told with third person. I especially liked the suspense of your story.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogues floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Tanya”. You crafted her so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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Review of Art  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First I want to welcome you in WDC. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Art on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* TITLE:The title “Art” caught my attention. I think the title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* THE POEM: This poem has lovely romantic thoughts. I like the emotions portrayed in this poem. The poet beautifully expressed her feelings.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully. The rhyming scheme a,a,a,a makes this poem beautiful.

*Bulletg* THEME:I like the theme.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

Keep writing!!
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Review of 10 Days of Spring  
for entry "Bracelet of a Queen
Review by Mina 🚣
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully described the bracelet of a Queen.
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Review of Oscar the Octopus  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Oscar the Octopus on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

I like this story about Oscar the octopus. You painted beautifully the daily adventures of him. It's a beautiful poem for the children. I appreciate the simplicity of this poem. I especially like the rhyming of this poem. My favorite lines are “Oscar the Octopus likes it under the sea
For him life is just full of glee”

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of Chicken Donny  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Chicken Donny on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This is a thoughtful poem. The image that comes to my mind is a leader.

Poetry is one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings. As readers, sometime I read poems again and again, trying to understand the deepest meaning of it. Throughout the history poem has been used to expressed peoples feeling for rights, for social change etc... It is a popular device for awakening people..

I like the way you put your feelings. The poem has a nice rhythm. It contains thirty six lines, which are separated into Nine stanzas. The title, “Chicken Donny” fits this poem. The fonts is appropriate. I like the tweety bird image you have posted.

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Review of Breath of Spring  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Gita!

I just read your poem. It's been a pleasure to review your poem on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. You paint beautifully the enchanted picture of spring nature. The green fonts you used is appropriate. Here in my country we don’t have snow either. Here spring has decreased, on the other hand, winter, summer and rainy seasons have increased. I think it is because for the weather pattern changing. Spring is the season of rebirth . It is the time of flowers, bees, butterflies, a season of color, scents and the sound.

I feel this poem is simple, positive. I like the lines” While this exquisite scene I view, entranced,
a nudge of warmth reminds me it won't last.”

It has nice rhythm.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Billy Goats and Troll on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

I like this poem written about Billy Goats story. It makes me laugh. The title fit’s your poem. The rhyming is beautiful and soothing to the ear. I especially likes the lines He then feared the other
He was so scared he lost his stuff!

Thank you for sharing. It’s fun reading

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of A Duo Of Demons  
Review by Mina 🚣
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "A Duo Of Demons on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This Halloween story is well written and told. Writing stories for children is a challenge because of the message. I find myself sometimes reading your stories here and I think they are all wonderful. I think your story could grab the children to reading it to the end.

You have good imagination, the dialogues are rich and floats well. It makes the children feel like they are traveling with the little characters. You crafted all the character so beautifully.


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