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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem, I am hypnotized by the words. It's full of rhythm. The words flows musically that pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of Nigeria's heart. The poet has painted a charming poem where the sun's golden fingers caress the leaves, where everything is bright by the radiant light.

All the natural things sings in melodies by the Niger's waters flow.


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Review of Gentle Reminder  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked this poem and the true words of it. It reaching down to the very depth of soul.

Like the lines "If only I look to Him and
All the chaos is laid bare"
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Review of Normal  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Good poem and inspirational. I liked the lines "I'll go my own way, stand on my own to, because I can manage."
I think your words need a rhythm to make them flow.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!!
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Review of MANGO  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really a good poem about mango. It floats beautifully. Its written from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful poem about environment. Nice to see you penned down all your thoughts so beautifully in this poem about the room with a view.

We can all have the same experiences and we recall the places we associate with a feelings of happiness which reflects in this poem.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the story written with the prompt "Creature has secret admirer". Dialogues flowed beautifully. The imaginary of the picture brings life to this story. It's make the story more interesting. It has emotional connection; that makes the children read from beginning to the end.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Devoted To You  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem ended with the same rhyme. It's sounds lyrical to me. It gives a beautiful music to the words.
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Review of Not out of clay  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your two line poems. It has good rhyme.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is good write about poems. Poems are the mirror of mind. They touch our heart and minds. We express our emotions by poems.

So thoughtful!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
That is a wonderful story. You have good imagination. I like how you sketched. It would be better if you write more from the suspense ending.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like the way you crafted your poem. “garlic” “ geese” “maple syrup” “future shore” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene.

This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like the title as well.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is wonderful story written with good points. I like the thoughts embedded in it. I like the line "Then, do not protect your positive, even saintly characters from negative emotions. A highly evolved character will know how to use an antidote to the negativity he or she is feeling, like using love against hatred."
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful poem about a brilliant London-based detective, Holmes. Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story. The tones I find in this poem are rhythmic.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good read. Written with the prompt "THE TV IS BROKEN" for the Flash Fiction. I think your write go with the prompt and you managed very well.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
{/b} This is an interesting story. It is full of suspense’s.
I like the way how you wrote this story. Dialogues flowed beautifully between the character Jakoline and Lattan. I like the fonts as well.

There is no description of the events I found. Otherwise it's a good story.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very good message with an unique concept.You have written a very good piece of poem from life experience. I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation. I like the emotions and the lines

"Sailing with the wind while cresting reckless waves before,
Churning through the white caps leaves you scurrying for more!"
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Review of Fragmentation  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
“Fragmentation” is a poem of war. I like the picture of war scene the poet painted here. For example

“napalm blossoms blaze
whistling mortar thumps
wet mud
drifting diesel haze
near-miss foxhole jumps”


The lines are full of sound imagery, the sound of mortar, explosions.

The poem telling how a soldier facing what in the battlefield. I like the rhythm and how each line breaks.

The tone I found this poem carries the sounds and stress of the war.
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Review of Heat Wave  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good poem for global temperature. For the past few years many countries weather pattern are changing. Here, In my country for the past few years, the winter chapter is shrinking.

I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like the simplicity of this poem. My favorite lines "Heat waves blowing
All around the sky
Sunscreen needed
Now it's high time"

Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read this from read and review page. It is a very good message with an unique concept. You have written a very good piece of story. Yes, we all have skills to communicate. You truly said that "waiting your turn to speak, not interrupting, valuing everyone's opinions, and offering your own contributions."

Thank you for sharing your opinion.
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Review of Spring Nostalgia  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem and the vivid details of nature. The descriptions are beautiful. The tone I find this poem is cheerful. I could imagine the scene.

Thank for sharing!!
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Review of Lost on Route 66  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Truly this is a good folklore poem. It creates the story with beautiful images . I like the way you told the story of good descriptions of Erin's spirits. I like the lines "Banshees wait in graveyards
ghosts don't get their kicks."


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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Hooves!!

I like this family story. It has beautiful thoughts. The role of a loving aunt in a child’s life should be a cherished one and, more important, a necessary one. In this story you describe your aunt Catherine who create a great role in your life.

The title of the story fits the themes of the story. I like the happy ending. The dialogues are believable. They floats beautifully.

I like the emotions evokes in this story.
Overall it told beautifully and well-written. I enjoyed it!!
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I like the story you crafted here.
This poem is powerful in its story and rhyme . I feel the sadness woven in this poem by the line “While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.

I feel that it wrote from a person’s life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.

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Review of The Winning Goal  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good story written and told with the given prompt "The Winning Goal". The title fits this story. Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the ending.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is really a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view. It makes me reading to the end. Beautifully told and written that I can relate your story. The characters you introduced are not boring. I like the fonts as well. I like the suspense of the ending.

It's my pleasure to review this story "Love In Cheshire 1966. Chapter 11.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
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