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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's my pleasure to review this travel story from read and review page. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a good story written and told from the perspective of your experience. I like the descriptions and presentations. It feels me that you are a part of the nature. It leave a stronger impression in the reader's mind.

The fonts and the way you wrote this story is easy to read. Keep writing and keep sharing!!
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Review of Memories  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful write. I appreciate how you put down your feelings. I like the emotions evokes.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good write! It's a thoughtful piece.

Yes, happiness and joy could be something we feel deep down in your soul.
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like this piece. I appreciate the simplicity.

Thank you for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Lost Love Found "  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 


I like this poem written from personal experience and views. I like the story of Anthony and Deborah. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. This is good tribute for a dearest friend. It's easy to read.

The last second stanza is my favorite.

"Both had tears that day as their bond was set in stone
Rings of love knowingly exchanged meant they would never be alone "

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem. And again, thank you for giving me an upgradation.

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Review of Life  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's my pleasure to review this story "Life"  from review request page. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

It's a thoughtful piece about life. Yes, everyone has purpose and everything happens for a reason. Man made barriers divide us with religion, color, social status, money . Sometimes we forget that life is too short. And in this period of time we have many things to do.

I like the lines “Maybe you can travel the world. Meet new people. Or you can become the next Albert Einstein”
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Corporate Wars: Retrieval"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I picked up this story because the title caught my attention. Their conversations and adventure is beautifully written. The way you wrote could gave character’s to the person as John Carrio sitting in the opposite couch. It's an easy read.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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Review of World as a Heaven  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like line “Stay tuned with true faith and love
The world will be seen as another Heaven!"

It’s so full of wonderful thoughts.
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Review of Waves  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem about Ocean waves. The poet wrote a charming poem of nature. It is the feelings of the poet. The plot is extremely simple. The waves comforts the poet when he is lonely.

I feel this poem has a soothing tone. It has good rhythm and flowed like sea waves.

Nice work!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The messages are unique. You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. You have good rhyming. I like the lines “Donot destroy God's works of art, His masterpieces great
Don't drive the natural world to extinction's fate
”

Nice work!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Me and Dad and the Rosebush"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. You wrote it from personal experience.

*BurstP* THE STORY: We love to remember our old times which reflected in this story.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogues are believable.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't see any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

Thank you for sharing!!

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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like your poem and the way you express your feeling. I like the simplicity and the images you have used here. I like the lines "When somebody started to bicker
She made us all birds of a feather."
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Review of A longing servant  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the flowed dialogues as well as the story. It told beautifully. I like the character "Nigel".

It's my pleasure to review this story . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
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Review of Dark and Light  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It's my pleasure to review this poem "Dark and Light" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like this poem. I like thoughts and emotions evokes in this poem. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. Darkness is not not the absence of light which reflects in this poem. I like the last line "Total contrast brings one out of the other one."
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Review of Frantz: a movie  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi!

I just read your story about first world war. I learned you wrote it to keep a record of your writings in English.
My second language is English. Writing in a foreign language is hard and it takes a lot of practice. Especially I have difficulty in grammar.

I like the setting of the story how you described.

Keep writing!!

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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem. I like the lovely romantic thought woven inside every line. I feel this poem is positive tone. I like the last three lines.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good story for friendship. Yes, friends makes us laugh. We can share our thought with them. They give us shoulders when we are sick.

In this poem the memories of your old friend make you nostalgic.

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Review of The Life  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi!

This is a good write and inspiring. I like the thoughts woven in this piece. This well crafted write delivers a powerful message to the readers. I like the lines “Life of love,hatred,pain and happiness”

In some places I think. You some paragraph breaks. Keep writing more !!!
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi! Jaya!

Beautifully constructed poem for WdC's 20th birthday. It is great tribute poem. Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like the lines “Delightful bonding of a community
Comprising the whole world in one web.”

It's my pleasure to review this story "HAPPY TWENTIETH WDC: A TRIBUTE" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very sweet story about a girl who gives her battered and overworked Mom a special gift. You did very good moving the story toward a happy ending.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "WINNER AND NEW PROMPT "  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 


*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: I liked the overall concept of this contest. You have written the poem based on the prompt "Your favorite fictional character suddenly finds themselves transported
to the real world. What happens next?"

*BurstP* THE POEM: I like the story of this poem. You have good imagination.

*BurstP* RHYME: The free verse poem go well. You crafted the words beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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Review of A Little Girl  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I like this poem. Through this entire poem, she painted out the wish of the little girl. I liked the rhythm and words of this poem.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: The word vividly describes the feelings of a little girl.

*Cut* Suggestion: Poetry has its own rules.I enjoyed.

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Review of Hurricane  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Hurricane"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

*BurstP* MY IMPRESSION: This is a good poem. Wonderfully floated with your crafted words. The title Hurricane fits your poem. I like the story.
You effortlessly portray the feel of the poem.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of The Frog  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's my pleasure to review this story "The Frog" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like this children story written with 703 Words. Writing story for the children is challenging. In your story you managed it well. I especially like the endings where you told how a frog became Linda’s friend.

Dialogues flowed beautifully. You wrote “A frog sat beside the pond, green and fat.”

I think you could described the frog more details so the readers can imagine easily.
The fonts are appropriate and easy to read. Thank you for sharing your work!


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Review of When will I win  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's my pleasure to review this story "When will I win" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Throughout the poem the poet telling that she rarely win a contest, I like line “Perhaps everyone will see I’m just a fool,
But I never broke the golden rule.”.

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.


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Review of Mountain Storm  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's my pleasure to review this story "Mountain Storm" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

You paint beautifully an enchanted picture of nature. The descriptions are vivid. I like the images. The poem tells the violence of storm on the mountain and its after-effects.

I like the lines
“Sun throwing the crags golden, clear
Yet darkening the deep brooding
Lower slopes.”

It has nice rhythm.

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