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Review of Two Poems  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem because each stanza is beautiful and so enchanted. The poem captures the moment of life. The words are so true that keeps me reading. It makes me feel connected. I like the words "Seasons come and seasons go,
Delete off that harsh word "NO""

Thank you for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Treason and the treasure on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good story. Wonderfully told. You paint a wonderfully flawed character. I like the morel of the story "never betray your friends"

I didn't find any mistake.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story " Adventures in Xenia: Pterodactyl Island on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told with the view of a tree. I especially liked the way you tell your story.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: You crafted the tree so beautifully. This made it come alive for the reader you vividly described.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of Autumn Passage  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Autumn Passage on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

I like this poem because each stanza is beautiful and so enchanted. The poem captures the moment of autumn life.

I like reading nature poems, because, It makes me feel connected. They cherished my heart.

The word vividly describes the feelings towards nature. The rhyme: a-a-b-b makes this poem brighter; the flow of this poem is wonderful. I could say poetically that it floats like the floating sea waves.

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Review of Screens  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the concept. Yes, Technology is advancing very fast. It changed the society both positively and negatively. It helps us to keep in touch with friends from all countries over the world.

Thank you for sharing and keep writing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this activity from read and review page. I like the way you made this.

Careful design of the word selection and arrangement, the length and density of each line, and the breakdown is perfect.

I will do a review and read some of them later.

Thank you for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "When It Rains, It Pours on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good piece of work and so informative. Wonderfully written the importance of salt in our life. I like the smallest descriptions. Yes, Sodium chloride or NaCl is necessary for life. It is the main source of sodium and chloride ions in the human diet. The way you wrote that I can easily read.

I like the ending.

Thank you for sharing such an informative piece. I learn many about salt.

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Review of Memories  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's my pleasure to review this story"Memories. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Every words are so true and inspirational. It seems you wrote these from personal views and experience and it looks great.
The messages are unique. I really liked the lines "Memories, mind's archives of the past,
Abstract in form, but hold true to all".

You have good rhyming.

Nice work!

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful lyrics emotional and had nice rhythm "I've got no reflection". I really liked the words and the way you put out your feelings.

Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing!!
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Review of Refect  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is good piece of write. It is pure, honest and very true. I really liked the way you put out your feelings. Hope you are much at peace with life and is surrounded by things and people who make you feel happy and content.

Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing more!!

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Review of Sun Rays  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Sun Rays on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This is a sweet poem. I like the story. It felt like an epic poem to me. I like the way the poet put her hearts deepest feelings.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: It wrote with perfect emotion that gives the readers a good feeling when they read it. The fonts are appropriate. The last lines express the desires of the poets.

“He walked towards me, kissed my forehead, and there I knew,
I am thankful that I can still walk with you, in this world full of pain and truth."

The tone I found is cheerful and soothing.

It's pleasure to know someone like you. Keep writing more!!!

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "One Busy Night in Chicago on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

I just read your detective story about a Girl and a Gangster and I think I will read some other stories of Lou Ryan’s .

I like the setting of the story how you described the surroundings. Dialogues flowed beautifully. You described the fight with accurate and believable actions. I liked the range of problems and the way you solved the mystery. Especially the lines “I opened all the pigeon cages and spooked the birds until they flew off the roof making a racket. A nervous Vinny looked up at all those birds flying wildly “.

Great write and so thoughtful!!

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Review of Wall of Tears  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a beautiful poem and inspirational. I appreciate and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title Wall of Tears fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem written with lively voice and vivid descriptions. “the memories of aging, fragmented,
broken into segments of ground forgotten”. I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.


*Bee* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end. I like the line “Fly home to rest, little bird
No tears to echo off the wall will fall in your honor”


*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

Beautifully written and told . The readers could imagine the scene where they were. The ending of the story is brilliant.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Stars and Other Poems on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a beautiful nature poems. You have captured the natures unique moments so beautifully. I appreciate the thoughts woven in this poem. Yes, Beautiful nature could cherish our heart always.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “Orange is the dusk
Before they start to shine
Opening the night
A magnificent design”.


*Thumbsup* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poems. It’s well written.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "To my pains surrender from read and review page on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good poem. I like the way you put your feelings out. I like the thoughts woven in this poem. It’s really true that poetry help us express how we feel by writing a poem from deep down within the heart and mind. But I think inner peace is within us. The rhyming is beautiful. I like the lines

"I've been broken down in pieces
My hearts been ripped in two.
I've tried to regain composure
But I just couldn't see It through."

Keep writing more !!!

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Review of How Silent  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "How Silent on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a sweet poem full with wonderful thoughts. I like the way the poet wrote it with illustrated feelings. I like the lines "Every piece of music sounds like your favorite song
How silent my world would be without you."

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of The Golden Pool  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Golden Pool on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: Wonderfully told. The readers will get pulled into the witch's world.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialog floated beautifully between the characters. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Mordon”. You crafted her so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Your Eyes are my Favourite Colour on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of your poem “If you could see how it feels when you dive into deep and you're so light and the water's so blue, you just want to get lost in it” . I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.

*BulbO* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*BulbP* SUGGESTIONS:I feel that the sixth line of your poem is a little longer. I like the repeated line “That's what colour it would be”

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

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Review of A hero *  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's my pleasure to review this story"A hero *.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is a good piece of write and yet so informative. The image that comes to my mind is the effects of war. You paint beautifully a perfect scene of war . It’s sad that human don’t think what will happen to our new generation. It seems you wrote these from personal views and experience and it looks great. It expressed the feeling, rights, and change etc.

Keep Writing!!

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's been a pleasure to review your story "On Butterfly Wings on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I appreciate the philosophical thoughts and the emotions portrayed in this poem.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind.

I like the lines “When two loving hearts collide
Honoring equality in all things
With mutual respect and care
They'll soar on butterfly wings ”.

I like the thoughts evokes in this poem. It reflects the thoughts of all of us. This poem tells us to embrace life fully. The last second stanza is my favorite.

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.
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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Laughter of the Gargoyle on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate the simplicity, and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title of the poem fits for the contest.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of a mythological character gargoyle you have painted here. The poet imagined a gargoyle and he could watched what was taking place below. The descriptions are well written and very vivid. There was a comic touch to everything that would make the readers want to take a ride through Gargoyle‘s world

*Bulletg* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has nice rhythm.

*Bulletg* FAVORITE LINES: As I sit in my spot, one final thought
Theses loony souls, just need to be taught



*Bulletg* STRUCTURE & FORM:you have beautiful thoughts inside every line. I like how each lines breaks.

*Bulletg* THEME: I enjoy the images, colors and sounds this poem.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

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Review of Tanya  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Tanya on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told with third person. I especially liked the suspense of your story.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogues floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Tanya”. You crafted her so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

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Review of Art  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First I want to welcome you in WDC. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Art on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* TITLE:The title “Art” caught my attention. I think the title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* THE POEM: This poem has lovely romantic thoughts. I like the emotions portrayed in this poem. The poet beautifully expressed her feelings.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully. The rhyming scheme a,a,a,a makes this poem beautiful.

*Bulletg* THEME:I like the theme.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

Keep writing!!
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Review of 10 Days of Spring  
for entry "Bracelet of a Queen
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully described the bracelet of a Queen.
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