Very nicely put! It's amazing how very little words can say so much, and you have just reminded me of that! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us, I found it to be very accurate and it evoked feelings of familiarity and peacefulness inside me. Sometimes I feel like one person during the day and another one during the night. Both of those people however agree that your passage is great! Keep up the good work!
I loved reading about your experience with braces for I too had to wear them for a while! My teeth were growing over each other and the work done to bring them down and next to each other instead, was awfully painful so I feel for you! On almost everything you said I thought: 'Yep, exactly how I felt!' You did a wonderful job making a not-so-pleasant experience into a great story that would compel the real image and feelings even in the minds of those who haven't had a chance to live with a silver smile! Keep up the good work!
Oh and by the way: I think it's really cool that you're mastering in Psychology
I absolutely loved reading your beautiful poem! I couldn't help but let the words play with my mind evoking deep feelings. Very good descriptions and amazing metaphors. Oh, and an awesome and creative title. Keep up the good work!
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