Mr Mudogo Shilenje's (mshilenje) Reviews

Mr Mudogo Shilenje

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#4723247

Review of My Dream

Review by Mr Mudogo Shilenje

Rated: E | (3.5)

Good poetry. Since this is a poem it would have been good if you made sure the last sentence in every paragraph was the same. It would have helped with the rhythm of your poem and would have put more emphasis on your message

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#4723246

Review of Transformations

Review by Mr Mudogo Shilenje

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Your story was brief and to the point. It is as if you were summarizing. Good work

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#4570228

Review of Hiroshima, 6 Aug. 1945

Review by Mr Mudogo Shilenje

Rated: E | (3.0)

I really did not understand very well your message. I don't know if this was the beginning of your story? I would have to say that I have viewed this as a poem. If you would have written it as a poem it would have been better.Good work.

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