|Short, but well-written and interesting. A strange, yet fascinating, little tale. I really enjoyed this story. I did find a few errors and I showed the fixes in red below:
"Yes, Sir! I killed Ms. Marple, the hooker, on my birthday. I've murdered one person
"Yes, Father, in fact, every one of my victims shared my birthday, which was the only thing we had in common."
"Why a mass murderer would want to give closure to the families of his victims?"
I'm not your ordinary mass murderer.
know if your loved one is dead or alive. You see, my little sister, Amy, was kidnapped and murdered on her fifth birthday.