Hmm, I could have sworn I already rated and reviewed this but it's showing that I didn't. So, I guess I'll do it again. Still a great story! Love the ending.
LOL! I love this. This is exactly the conversation I would have with the Grim Reaper if he showed up. Or close too it, at any rate. I'd be more likely to be reading one of your stories than writing one of my own.
Creepy and fun! Very well-written. I'm not sure if you were serious about not wanting gps, so I'm not including any this time. I guess you can always donate the ones I've already sent
As you requested I only gave you half a star, but while it was pretty bad, mostly due to unnecessary repetition, it wasn't horrible. It was a cute, fun little story.
Very well said. Luckily I live in Minnesota, so we still greet strangers with a "Morning, beautiful weather isn't it?" Or, recently, "I'm so sick of this snow, how about you?" But we smile at each other and we pet strangers' dogs and I am so glad I'm not in a bigger city these days. We're under 28,000 with 2 universities and I think having a lot of college kids is actually a good thing. Kids these days are fed up with what the older generations have done to the planet and actually want to fix things, from what I've seen. So, I still have hope! Thanks for writing this, hopefully it will encourage more people to be kind.
Fantastic little story. I loved it. That coin sure would come in handy! I love the ending where the dog's wishes are coming true. Very adorable! Great job!
An interesting little piece. It does make you think. I agree that a lot of people only socialize on their phones these days. It makes me angry when you're visiting with people in person, playing a game or whatever, and someone has their head buried in their phone. If you don't want to spend time and hang out with me, fine, but then just stay home and chat on your phone. I find it so rude. Luckily my closest friends agree and we put our phones away if we're spending time together in person. (Unless we have to Google something, haha) I can't help but wonder if Terminator 3 is how we all die.
Oh my! How big was that spider? Very well-written, wonderful attention to detail. Do you really know this much about spiders or did you have to do some research? You painted an excellent picture either way. Very creepy!
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