Mare ~ extended hiatus's (msromoski71) Reviews

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I will provide constructive criticism and praise whenever necessary. I will always review with a positive message. There's no room for rude comments or feedback in my reviews.

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Favorite Genres

Fantasy, Sci-fi, Romance and Horror

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Poetry, children's, music

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Flash fiction, short stories, non-fiction especially animals, folklore/romance

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#4276358

Review of Crystals and Gems:Quiz

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Yay!! I was not expecting to get all of them right. I love gemstones and I know a lot about them, but some of the questions stumped me!! Well done!!

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#4275877

Review of A Tree Of Love

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A We've Got Talent Review!
Dedicated to the Seasoned Members of WdC!

Initial Thoughts: I absolutely love this idea of a storoem. How imaginative.

Conclusion: This piece tugged at my heart like nothing has in quite a while. What a beautiful story of a couple who's weathered an entire, full life together. We can only hope to have such a relationship...it's so rare these days. Thank you for this lovely piece.

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#4273089

Review of SuperNova Afterglow: End Of Days

for entry "Our Future?"

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

He's a pathological liar and a true narcissist.

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#4272741

Review of 1: Memories

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A review from the WdC Angel Army!

Initial Thoughts: I read the prologue, and now I've read the subsequent parts. I love this story. I love the plot, the characters, and the questions it raises.

Conclusion: You engage the reader to want to read more, and to continue reading the next chapters. It is a very well written story with descriptive language without over embellishment. That turns readers off in my opinion. They want to get to the juicy parts without having to read through a bunch of fluff that don't need to be there. I plan to continue reading the next chapters as I'm dying to know what happens. You cover everything so well, which allows the reader to understand completely. Again, extremely well written. Keep going!

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#4272673

Review of Lucifer: Prologue

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A review from the WdC Angel Army!

Initial Thoughts: I absolutely love stories like these, so I'll tell you straight up that I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Conclusion: I am anxious to see what happens. Something tells me that Damien has some kind of supernatural gifts or something with that necklace. I don't know yet, as I haven't read the other parts. I thought it was very well written. I know you don't particularly care about grammar, but all I noticed was a word missing in a statement (they are, I believe should have been (there they are). But, again, that has nothing to do with the compelling story. The prologue gave just enough information as to what the readers should expect from the rest of the story. You have engaged the reader and make them want to keep reading to the end. that's what makes for a good story and plot. Nothing is unclear to me. It left me wondering of course, but that the point of an introduction to a series. The reader wants to find out about the rest of the story. I feel that you did an excellent job with this piece. As I've said, this is my favorite genre, so I am very familiar with what makes a good story. You sucked me in, and I look forward to the rest. Really great job!!

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#4272269

Review of Reflection

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A review from the WdC Angel Army!

Initial Thoughts Your dedication to a person who's in the darkest of depths in her soul was beautifully written.

Conclusion: I enjoyed the way you chose to describe a person in such torment. The literal hole in her heart with her broken heart on the floor. I interpret it as a metaphorical description of those who suffer from deep depression and hopelessness. I would suggest to break it into paragraphs to make it easier for the reader. It's a bit overwhelming reading it without any breaks. Readers are more likely to become engaged when they first view the piece, and it looks easy to read. I see you are very new to the site, and I welcome you!! Please use all of the tools here. You will find them most helpful. Get involved with the community, and you'll find your experiences on this site so much more positive. Please don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions! Welcome!!

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#4272133

Review of She Talks with Me

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

Initial Thoughts: Such a beautiful dedication to your daughter's teenage years. Something that resonated with me.

Conclusion: I am not a father, but a mother to a daughter. The fact that she will openly talk with you about such things is really a blessing. My daughter has difficulty expressing herself. I've told her that she can tell me anything without repercussions, but this has been a problem her entire life. I keep trying though. You express your feelings about your daughter so beautifully, and you're right when you say that you are really blessed. I hope that continues for you! Good luck in Rising Stars. We all have to support each other!

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#4271902

Review of Sleeping Partner

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

Initial Thoughts: The story compelled me to continue reading. The first few lines made me read to the end.

Conclusion: I liked the premise of the story. But, I have so many questions! Who was this creature and how did it appear? It didn't seem like he wanted to harm her, so what could it be? Did Harold conjure something? It was a compelling story, and I love this genre. I'd love to see you expand on this because I want to know what happens! LOL Great job!

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#4271245

Review of Some predictions

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Initial Thoughts: I don't know why, but I immediately thought of Trump.

This poem reminds me of so many things. People like Trump who feel they have the right to do whatever they please. Established authors who exploit young writers by trying to sell them "the answer". Pay for my program and you can make $5,000/week. Seriously? That's a huge pet peeve of mine; exploitation. I even wrote an ebook about it. But, this piece is well written in my opinion. I'm not a poet, so I'm unfamiliar with structure and form. But, if I can interpret it, then I think it's a good piece. Just my perspective of course. Use the tools here on WdC to help you improve. Everyone improves their writing after being on here for a bit. You've joined an excellent and supportive community. Don't hesitate to contact me if you have any question! Keep writing!

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#4270555

Review of The People Upstairs

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

A simply positive review!

Initial Thoughts: I have to say, this story is very well written. Grammar and punctuation are excellent!

Suggestions: I would suggest that you make the premise of the story a little clearer. I understood about the grandmother having these supernatural encounters, but I'm not sure why she died.

Conclusion: I noticed the ratings you received were a little on the lower side, but as you know, everyone reviews differently, and I'm certainly not saying that they weren't warranted. But, from my perspective, I think some of the supernatural aspects could have been more of a focus. Why was Sully in a position with Hugh? It's not clear to me. You have a very good plot here. Maybe revising it by including a little more background on the characters. Other than that, it was a VERY well written story. Feel free to contact me or request another review if you decide to do that! Great job overall.

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#4269002

Review of My College Application

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

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Initial Thoughts: This, I assume, is the essay part of the application. Some things should be taken out, in my opinion. Tell an essay why you want to take your major, which sounds like psychology or something along those lines. I have a BS degree in Behavioral Science. Instead of the actual dialogue in the beginning, just give the summary of the backstory in the first person. In other words, it's not necessary to give an actual example of one situation. Just explain about problems with your mother and how that has given you the desire to help others. Elaborate on your personal feelings and other reasons you'd want to major in the field.

Suggestions: Take out the dialogue explaining that one situation. Just sum up your childhood without dialogue. Personal essays are written in the first person without dialogue.

Conclusion: Sit and really think what the other reasons are you want to help people. Your feelings about others and what you hope to accomplish in your eventual career. Take "bad person" out and replace it with some different type of a professional disorder per se. For example, you could use "dysfunctional people" or those with other mental health issues that could include alcoholism too. Do you want to work primarily with adults or children as well. Look at yourself and picture what you'd be doing in ten years or so. If you have difficulty with any of the feedback I suggested, please don't hesitate to contact me!! Welcome and keep writing!

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#4268642

Review of The Silken Fan of Kaori

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

Initial Thoughts: What a sad story. It was compelling and engaging to the end.

Conclusion: I loved this story, although the ending was even sadder than the beginning. Did her husband have her tied up and repeatedly rape her? And the fact that she killed her love. I could see something like that happening to her; suicide instead. Your writing is very descriptive allowing it to flow without too much embellishment. I don't like over-embellished stories. The premise was clearly understood, and I thought you did a great job with this story. It's not easy to come up with a completely fresh set of names and plot in this kind of genre. Great job!

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#4268621

Review of The Beautiful Voice

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

Initial Thoughts: I don't know why, but I thought at first that she was blind. I guess because of the title "A Beautiful Voice".

Conclusion: It's such a lovely story. She showed absolutely no prejudice towards a handicapped guy as I found out at the end. I love the ending. I'm assuming she took him home for a more intimate rendezvous! It was very compelling and extremely engaging. It's obvious you have a gift for these types of fictional stories! Great job!

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#4268560

Review of No Time To Scream

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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Initial Thoughts: One of my favorite genres to review! First, I want to know what this beast is. A werewolf? Although, I thought they only ate hearts. But, it kept talking about the moon. And, what happens if it doesn't eat enough before the moon goes away? Just some questions I had.

Conclusion: I love this type of supernatural feel to this piece. Reminds me of something Sam and Dean would hunt on Supernatural, my favorite show! It was very well written with a clear premise making the reader want to read more. It is an engaging piece, which is something you strive to do in any piece. I thought you did a great job with this. I couldn't find your book in the link you sent though! Great job!

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#4268347

Review of Reap of Sowing

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

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Initial Thoughts: I love anything that deals with the supernatural. I find it to be very engaging.

Suggestions: Just some typos that you should be aware of.
Blood trickles down my head as two boys; Richy and Damien laugh at my predicament. There should be a comma after boys instead of a semi-colon and then another comma after Damien.
“They are jerks; do you plan on snitching them out to the teacher?” I'd put a period after jerks. Break them up into 2 sentences.
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I'd change the wording to something like "she practiced witchcraft". The sentence there doesn't make sense.

Conclusion: Other than those suggestions, the story was very engaging and makes the reader want to find out how it plays out. I love your premise with the witch and how she takes over Birsha's body. It was a very well written story that flowed! Don't hesitate to contact me at anytime! And welcome again!

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#4267860

Review of A huge step into the unknown at WdC

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

What a beautiful description of your journey! Well, both of ours I guess! It is quite an honor considering we are so new to WdC. I wish you the best of luck in the upcoming 8 months. I think we can all learn from each other!! We'll be bumping into each other constantly! Awesome!

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#4267648

Review of Granddad Did His Best

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Rated: 13+

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A simply positive review!

This was a very sweet poem about a girl and her grandfather and the special bond they shared. As a disclaimer, I am not a poet by any stretch of the imagination. I write nonfiction. I enjoyed the story behind it, but I had a difficult time reading it, because, when I read poems, I expect them to flow. The ABAB format. You did have the rhyming, but again, to me it did not flow. BUT, again, I do not understand poetry at all. My rating is based on my ability to read it only. I could be way off base here, so please do not take offense. I know there's some poems out there that are completely foreign to me, because I'm unable to interpret them. I fully understood the story behind this, though. Just wanted you to know that it's an endearing story, but the genre is out of my realm.

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#4267412

Review of Greeting the Ex-

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Rated: 13+

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~A Rising Star's M2M Review~

What I Love about your work: You get straight to the point without too much embellishment and allow the reader to want to read to the end.

Typos?: Just one! Me should be my!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for this wonderful piece of work.

In Conclusion: This story reminds me of so many battered women who finally do fight back. Unfortunately, it doesn't happen enough. You set the stage so brilliantly for the reader. It's an excellent piece of writing that speaks to a large audience on a very fragile subject. You've done a great job with this short story. Such short stories are very hard, because you have to get the point across in so few words. You have the ability to do this! Congrats on being a rising star as well!!

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#4267268

Review of Kita of Midnight Clan

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Rated: 13+

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Welcome to WDC from me and the "Invalid Item"

I liked your story and wanted to share some thoughts with you about it. I am seriously blown away by this story. To write from the view of the kitten was brilliant.

Why I could relate to your work: I love animals so much, especially kittens, and I was hooked to the end.

In Conclusion: What a compelling story you've written. You are extremely talented and creative. Know that! You do have a gift, and I encourage you to use it everyday! I want to know what happens in this story. Please expand on it! It was very hard to read this because of my feelings for animals, and your descriptive words you used were unbelievable and gave me such a vivid picture of what she-cat was doing. It was so sad for me. Again, continue writing and expanding on this story. I think it's excellent!! Really. Contact me whenever you need to!!

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#4267154

Review of THE DEVIL AND ME (part 1)

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Rated: 13+

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Welcome to WDC from me and the "Invalid Item"

What I Love about your work: You are able to metaphorically describe depression in a creative way.

My suggestions: I know you are brand new, and I welcome you!! Use the tools on WdC. They really improve your writing. We all need to improve. I improve everyday, so utilize everything available to you. Also, when you have cursing like you did in this story, be sure to filter it correctly. When you create an item, it asks you right below the title whether it's suitable for everyone. In this case you would put not suitable for everyone. Then as you scroll down, it will ask you the rating. Just so you know, because there are many young kids on this site.

Any noticeable typos: I'm going to forewarn you. I'm a Grammar Nazi, so I always comment on typos. There were many in this piece. Just be sure to proofread everything before you finish. Although, the creativity must be there, which it is here, to allow for a good story. You have that creativity.

In Conclusion: It was a very compelling story. I do hope you will expand on it as I would love to know what happens. The message and the way you relayed it to the reader was brilliant. Keep using tools and always keep writing! Good job! If you have any questions at all navigating this site (it's very overwhelming), don't hesitate to contact me. Put my address in your book in emails!

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Review of love rips

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Rated: E

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Aha! That slimy ghost. She used that poor guy to get a new apprentice. She promised to love him. Typical I guess considering what she really is. It was a very creative story. I'm starting to love folklore, and I see you have a great talent for it. You should enter my contest! The only thing I would suggest is to fix the typos. But, I'm a Grammar Nazi, so I had to say that! But typos aside, because quite frankly they don't pertain to your creative mind, I think you have a gift for this genre. It's interesting how everybody knows about the lore and the existence of ghosts (because of the reporters). That's where the real creativity comes in. So many stories I read are where the "audience" doesn't believe or aren't aware of the existence of the supernatural. You may have called it just for fun, but I loved it. Great job! Enter it!!!

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Review of Sugar Doughnuts on a Sleepy Sunday

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

What I Love about your work: You make the reader think the story is about something completely different! Then, BAM, and you have to suck in your breath.

In Conclusion: What a moving story. That poor little girl. That will torment her the rest of her life. You have engaged the reader from beginning to end. You have an amazing talent for writing. I do hope you continue with this wonderful gift you possess. Happy Anniversary!

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#4264100

Review of Not Without Sight

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Rated: E

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A simply positive review!

What I Love about your work: You engage the reader so much so that we are able to feel like Wendy, and imagine how blindness could affect us.

In Conclusion: The story is so different from your average "girl keeps a diary". Because she is blind, so many factors come into play. And, she's so accepting and trusting of her grandparents. The ending was beautiful. Her grandmother taught her right so that if anything happened to her, which it did, they would be ok without her. Thank you for such a beautiful and different story.

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Review of The Question

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Rated: E

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

What I Love about your work: Your descriptive ability to allow the reader to feel the emotions present.

In Conclusion: This poem resonated with me. It was very moving and touches everyone who reads it. Is the boyfriend dying, I assume? What a horrible situation. A situation that you have absolutely no control of. the only thing you can do is pray. Your words are beautiful, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Happy Anniversary!

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#4263464

Review of Calling All Insomniacs

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Rated: E

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

What I Love about your work: It's so funny that I come across this poem. The title sucked me in, because I am an insomniac. Have been for years.

In Conclusion: Again, as your other poems, you so ceatively get your message across. It amazes me how these words come to you. And they are so clear; not on the cusp of maybe understanding or not. I have to take medication at night or I'd never sleep. I think one of the worst things to endure is insomnia. I hope you have found a solution! Happy Anniversary again!

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