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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*CupcakeO*My Comment: Such descriptive words takes the reader on the journey with you, contemplating their own thoughts and how they affect them.*CupcakeO*

*CupcakeO*Overall Impression: It is beautifully written with wotds that describe your experience, but not so much that it's overembellished; a pet peeve of mine. It sounds like a oeasceful place to ponder life. I'd love to physically go there!*CupcakeO*


*CupcakeO*As always, keep on writing!!*CupcakeO*



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Review of Mother Dear  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*CupcakeO*My Comment:I was very moved by this poem. It resonated with me as my mother is up in age, and I have no idea how much time she has less. On top of all of that, she has very serious problems and is in a lot of pain.*CupcakeO*

*CupcakeO*Overall Impression:It was beautifully written and made me sad. But, that was the point, wasn't it? Well, not the whole point. The end gives hope that you will be with her again and your absolute faith. I believe the same. My father is already in heaven, and I know one day she will be reunited with him. Still, it doesn't make it any easier. Thank you for a wonderful poem. You possess much talent!*CupcakeO*

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I enjoyed this piece immensely. Sci-Fi is one of my favorite genres to read. I can't write it, but I'll read it gladly. I love the mystery of it, yet I long to know what happens next. Perhaps you could expand on that? If you do, please forward it to me. You write very creatively with an easy flow engaging the reader. You describe some things, but not so much that it takes up an entire paragraph. I say that because I hate when stories or works of fiction are highly embellished just to describe their surroundings. You give just enough to give the reader a picture of it in your mind. I love that. You are very talented, and I would love to see how this story progresses if you have the interest in doing so. I thought it was really wonderfully written!!


As always, keep on writing!!

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Review of Blue  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. Welcome to this fabulous site. We're all so glad that you are here. I'm not much of a poetry writer or reader for that matter, but I thought this was adorable for kids.

Why I could relate to your work:

My suggestions: Since your goal is to see it in a book, I'd like to see you write a poetry books for children. Just a compilation of different poems like this. It could be like new nursery rhymes! I urge you to think about this. Put it together and self-publish on Amazon. I really think it would do very well. The hardest part is marketing to let people know it's there!

In Conclusion: There are so many resources and tools on this site to help you hone your skills and improve your writing. Everyone could always improve. Try to write everyday even if you don't feel like it. We all get writer's block at times, but you could even just jot some notes and ideas down as they come to you lest you forget! I find it so much easier to write that way than sitting down and saying to yourself, I will start and finish this now. There is no rush, just let it flow. You have the creativity and imagination to do it as proven by your piece. Don't ever be wary of reaching out to people here. Everyone is wonderful. We really are a family, because we all support each other and share the same passion. Writing!

Please understand that my review is just one voice among many points of view. Please take it with a grain of salt. They are only opinions, not absolute truth. We are all human and are all capable of making mistakes, so take what you think will help you and leave the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read your work!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. Welcome to this wonderful site! You will love it here. Your story was very powerful and resonated with me. I've had many years feeling that way. Thank God, it's changed. I wonder who the person is; you,friend or imaginary. It just rings so true for way too many people. We always feel like we're on the outside looking in. But, we don't realize people are feeling the same way. It's a paradox of some sort.

Why I could relate to your work: As stated above, I've felt that way during my younger years. Too many years those types of thoughts tormented me. I had to really come to terms what life really is.

In Conclusion: Your writing is accurate and flows so well. It's extremely easy to read, something that many readers look for. You make it engaging without embellished, uncommon words. But, the feelings are described beautifully. I'd love to known your genre preference. I myself prefer to write in the first person, and everything tends to be true stories from my life. That's the way I'm able to express myself. I hope you stick around as learning the site can be daunting and overwhelming. Keep at it and you'll get the hang of it. Trust me, I was there just 2 months ago. It does get easier. Keep writing everyday to hone your skills. Use the resources on WdC as they are vast. Your work was a joy to read!

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Review of Prince Group  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)


This idea is awesome! I love Prince as well! Loved the movie and his music. I know every single word for every song on the soundtrack! How do you earn the badge? Or do you just buy it? I may have to just buy it because he is aweome!! Let me know. I think this group is an excellent idea, but also shows our age! LOL. Oh well!



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Review of Fluffy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Well, I wasn't sure if fluffy was a cat, or if cassie was a cat or a monster! I got confused until the end and read the prompt. Nice imagination! I have no idea why I thought it was about a cat though. So, in the end, fluffy turns out to be real? I wonder if it ate her then too. It's a good story to expand on. I love fiction writers, but I'm horrible at writing fiction. I'm a non-fiction gal, but I'm trying to get tips from WdC on starting anyway. The more I read stories like yours, the more ideas I get.

I found it interesting that the girl called this big hairy monster fluffy. It was cute though. I would love to read a story where something like this happened, and the parents actually saw the monster too. Kids always get a bad rep. Have you thought of expanding on this or do you have other stories along the same lines? I love the supernatural genre. It's very intriguing. But, you have to have an incredible imagination to think of different monsters unless you get ideas from shows like Charmed and Supernatural (my personal faves)! You write very smoothly so the story flows and makes it engaging. great job!










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Review of Velvet night  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. Welcome to the best writing site on the web! You use very descriptive words to allow the reader to feel the feelings you are conveying.

My suggestions: Although you have an excellent command of vocabulary, I think the average reader may shy away from some of your words. I've never heard of some of them. Maybe change some of them to more reader-friendly words so that they're not turned off.

Any noticeable typos: Small plurals and absence of commas where necessary.

In Conclusion: You tell a story which has much meaning behind it. Again, it may not engage readers because of the terminology.

Please understand that my review is just one voice among many points of view. Please take it with a grain of salt. They are only opinions, not absolute truth. We are all human and are all capable of making mistakes, so take what you think will help you and leave the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read your work!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. I love that you write about the Bible and the recourse of Adam and Eve's decision.

Why I could relate to your work: Regardless of your religious denomination, I think all Christians familiar with the Bible can relate. What if they chose a different path? What if they obeyed? I often ponder on this.

In Conclusion: The way the world has been unfolding, it's clear it goes all the way back to the Garden. The first murder happened then. How can such consequences happen so soon after being kicked out of the Garden. You work forces people to really think about the negative results that have unfolded as a result on that ONE act. I often think why all of mankind was cursed because of this. But, I guess being made perfect yet still wanting more was a sign to God. It was a really great piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading!

Please understand that my review is just one voice among many points of view. Please take it with a grain of salt. They are only opinions, not absolute truth. We are all human and are all capable of making mistakes, so take what you think will help you and leave the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read your work!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello again!!
I love your fairy tale stories. You really did your research! I did know that the Grimm Brothers original stories were not so flowery and bright. It reminds me of Little Red Riding Hood. Not so child-friendly in my opinion. It also reminds me of nursery rhymes like ring around the roses and the one about Lizzy Borden. That's crazy. Who would think of such dark stories and rhymes. But, I did find your research to be very compelling and informative. I certainly learned things I had no clue about. I get the feeling that children is one of your favorite genres. I don't feel like I have that creativity.

I really need to start to step out of the box a bit, but it's been a challenge thus far. As usual, you use your talent and creativity to use appropriate descriptive words in a way that the reader can easily understand. I don't often enter contests because of what I call my lack of creativity. There are so many different styles out there, and you are a writer that can write about pretty much everything. I admire you for that!

Thanks for allowing me to read and review your work!









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Review of The Nature I Saw  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm not a poet, but I believe I understood your message. Please correct me if I'm wrong, but it's about hope. To change your thinking and realize that prayers can be answered if you open your heart and get that poisoned thinking out of your head.

I admire poets, because I am unable to write poetry. I've tried several times, but I don't know if they made sense, or if it even followed some guidelines of the "rules". I only enjoy reading it if I can come away with an understanding or at least an interpretation that makes sense to me.

You write poetry in a way that I can understand. Even if my interpretation is way off, from my understanding, it can be interpreted in different ways depending on the reader. Again, correct me if I'm wrong, but I found this piece to be well written with beautiful descriptive words.

I hope you take advantage of the tools available to you at WdC. We are here to help to improve your writing and just for support.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work! Good job and keep writing!










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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. I am very impressed by your creativity, imagination, and ability to accurately apply such descriptive words resulting in a extremely engaging story.

In Conclusion: Extraordinarily well written. I wonder, is this part of a novel you're working on, or flash fiction? It would make for a great novel if you have that type of patience. I, myself, don't, but I'm starting to expand and work outside of my comfort zone!

You will find amazing people here who are willing to help in any way they can. Please utilize all of the resources on the site. It's very daunting at first, but you will get the hang of it! Welcome again!

Please understand that my review is just one voice among many points of view. Please take it with a grain of salt. They are only opinions, not absolute truth. We are all human and are all capable of making mistakes, so take what you think will help you and leave the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read your work!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First, I'd like to relay to you what an amazing piece you've created. The way you've written it is outstanding. I've often heard this argument over the course of my 44 years. There are many theories that cannot be scientifically proven. This is about a belief system, in my opinion. You can argue indefinitely for or against God's existence.

I'd like to share a story with you. I believe in Heaven and Hell. I believe in angels and the Prince of Darkness. My dad died at the young age of 35 from cancer. He was in the hospital during his final days on earth and was frightened at the thought of death. One day, my mother had left the hospital room. When she returned, my dad had a very peaceful disposition. She observed this change and asked him about it. He proceeded to tell her that he had a vision. A vision of Jesus Christ laying his hand on my dad's. He said to him something along the lines of, "Don't worry, everything will be ok". My grandmother deciphered this as a sign of a miracle in the fact that he would get well. However, my dad knew this to be false. He told my grandmother, "No, I'm not going to get better, but, I'm now at peace and not frightened anymore". What an amazing story that I cling to everyday. I was only 6 at the time, so I couldn't fully understand what was happening to him. I wholeheartedly believe this story to be true. I don't view it as a drug-induced hallucination. But, can this be proven? Absolutely not. It's not about concrete proof. It's about belief which encompasses the entire supernatural realm.

Thank you for this piece of outstanding work!












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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What I Love about your work: Hi, my name is Mare. You have captured what it is to be on the outside lokking in and from the perspective of the victim. It's hard on everyone, not just the victim.

Why I could relate to your work: For personal reasons I won't dump onto you, but I had a similar experience when I was young. All those feelings and more surface.

My suggestions: I'd like to see a little more of the backstory. How did those 2 become friends. What kind of teammate was he to her brother? What happened eventually following the birth of the baby. It would give the readers a better perspective.

Any noticeable typos: Very little typos that wouldn't be noticed by the untrained eye.

In Conclusion: It was an emotional and difficult story to tell. I'm curious if it was an experience that you've related to or just creativity. No matter, but it was a good read with a positive ending:)

Please understand that my review is just one voice among many points of view. Please take it with a grain of salt. They are only opinions, not absolute truth. We are all human and are all capable of making mistakes, so take what you think will help you and leave the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read your work!

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Review of The Exodus  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You wrote about the exodus of the Jews from Egypt!! What a wonderful story to write about. Those Egyptians were so full of themselves and cocky. They thought nothing of them escaping, so confident they'd catch them. It must have been an awesome sight to see that sea part.

You know what bugs me though? After all of those miracles that these people witnessed; I mean really, how can you just throw aside the parting of a huge sea, they still wavered in their faith and didn't trust in God. That's something that I will never fathom. You've written it in such a way to display the perspective of the Egyptians and their overconfidence. It's refreshing to see writers so freely write about stories from the Bible. So many steer away from such a topic. Never talk about religion and politics, right?

I'd like to check out the rest of your port as well, which I will do as soon as I have the time. The GoT is taking up alot of my time! Great job and continue writing about such topics. I love to read them!









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Review of Cry of the Wolf  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I love reading and reviewing this genre. You have a very vivid imagination and creativity that's boundless. You have created a supernatural story that is very engaging and easily readable. It makes the reader want to read to the end to find out what happens. Who are these people? Where did they come from? Are they good or bad? What kind of family does Nicky come from? There are so many questions the reader wants answers to. That tells me it is an excellent piece of work. You have to engage your readers in the very beginning, or you'll lose them. Even if the rest of the story is worth reading, the person will not read enough of it to find out.

You've achieved that in the beginning, which is not easily done. Kudos. Very small typos that I've noticed, but not noticeable to the untrained eye. I would very much like to read the rest of the chapters. Is this part of a novel that you are writing? If so, you're off to a great start. I admire writers like you who can create such compelling characters. Keep up the awesome work!









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Review of I Love WdC  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your piece has hit a nerve for me. Your feelings about this site mirror mine exactly. I am a newbie, since I signed up on June 5. Just a little over a month. I hold those who lead this site in high-esteem as well. I can't even imagine organizing such an overwhelming site. I still make many mistakes posting. But, all I've ever received is support and help. Help that is truly gladly given.

I, like you, have expanded my writing just recently to include poetry. I never had respect for it, as I often didn't understand them. I have written very short poems myself since joining. I have also begun to delve into the genre of fiction. I've always written non-fiction, true to life stories. Stories that reflect my own personal experiences. It takes true creativity to write fiction and poetry, in my opinion. I try to tap into that everyday. I will never discontinue my membership either. There are too many benefits to overlook. I love meeting and interacting with such a wide array of writers. It's very inspirational.

I relate to your story 100%, and I'm thrilled to have come across this beautiful, poignant representation of WdC! Excellent job!










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Review of Subject to Change  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, my name is Mare, and first, I'd like to welcome you to WdC. You will find wonderful people here willing to help in any way. The tools and exercises really help you become a better writer!!

You captured the essence of Kaly's dilemma beautifully. It allowed the reader to engage and want to read to the end. Having a Behavioral Science Degree, I understand this scenario completely. It's a scenario that takes place all too often in this world. I commend you for the courage to write on this subject. I look forward to the rest of the story.

Being the field myself, that type of relationship affects the person and gives them a twisted mindset that it's their fault and they deserve to be treated in such a fashion. Only when you get even small things creep into your psyche is when you start to realize the truth. It's a huge step that sometimes is not followed through unless you have the strength and strong will to do so.

There are some small typos, that I'm sure if you read over, you will catch, but overall, it's very well written and engaging. keep up the great work. I find that writing from personal experiences gives you an edge to produce a very engaging piece.










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Review of Hyperbole  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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That is freaking hysterical! You're right about the hyperbole. Some don't know the meaning of it, but that's to be expected I think. You've summed it up very well. In in a comical way nonetheless!

The poem flowed so easily and was very engaging. I'm not a "poetry person" per se, but I'm able to follow and wanted to read it until the end.

Where did you get the idea for this subject in particular? I ask because, I'm trying mt literal hand at poetry. Very, very small to begin, and then hopefully start expanding into bigger pieces. But, I don't seem to have that sort of imagination. It's one thing for me to write an article about personal experiences or a particular subject, but it's another coming up with a idea for a poem and then write it in the proper way. To me, that;s true creativity.

I understand that many people have different genres that they are better at, but it's something that I'm starting to have an interest in, ever since joining WdC actually. That's how inspirational this site is for me.

I really enjoyed it. Keep using that creative imagination!












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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What a fabulous twist on Cinderella. I had no clue it was going to turn out that way.Cinderella wasn't even a thought in my mind up until the end. It seemed to me that Tansy could've been Cinderella, but that's not where you were going.

It was a truly engaging read, Readers will want to know the same things. Why wasn't Tansy or her sister going to be a princess. However, the way to told the story from the view of others that were at the ball. All those girls wished it could be them that he chose.

I've never thought of looking at it that way, What a brilliant idea. What did all the patrons think when first noticed Cinderella and left who he was with to dance with her. How enormously disappointed they must have been to witness that.

The writing flowed beautifully. It keeps the reader engaged to want to read it to the end. Although, since it's from another's perspective, you feel sad for them too because the story lets you meet them. They had to have the same wishes as all the girls did. Great Job!!









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Review of Starship Sentry  
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Wow! That story was amazing. It's a wonder you earned 1st place. I'm totally in to Sci-Fi, and it really appeared to be a sci-fi piece to the end. Only right at the end do you discover what "Sentry" really is. It's actually pretty hysterical, but so true to a dog's loyalty. I absolutely love that. Explaining the bond between human and dog in such a way was brilliant.

At first, I thought he was some sort of android, like Data on Star Trek. So, I read the story from the perspective of an android. However, you knocked me out with the end. It wasn't about spaceships or aliens at all. That's the true genius here.

So many thoughts ran through my head as I read it. When I read it was limited in its responses or something of the like, then I thought it couldn't be an android. Maybe something more primitive. You literally had me thinking throughout the story what the heck kind of being this was with telepathy and 3rd and 5th dimensions. It was a truly fantastic, amazingly well written story from what appears to be a very talented and imaginative writer.

Awesome job!!









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I love anything paranormal. This has caught my attention enough to read to the end. It's an excellent plot as many love all things paranormal. Nazi topics always attract readers as well.

It reminded me of the tv show Supernatural which is my favorite. Is he becoming a hunter or the hunted? I see it's a excerpt from a book you've written. I would certainly read the entire book.

If you are not part of the WDC published authors forum, you should definitely head there and plug your book. If you read others, they will read yours.

"Published Books of WdC Authors Forum " 

Also, the novel writer's room. "Invalid Item" 

There is so much help available on WdC. Use the resources. You definitely have talent. It's easily noticed in your writing. This genre is very popular. If this genre is your specialty, please continue. I would read any of your writings regarding the paranormal. It's fascinating, just as the excerpt from your book even. I will definitely check it out on Amazon.

Keep writing and doing the great job you already are doing!!











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I very much enjoyed this piece. I can actually understand it! I say that because I'm very new to poetry and I just can't understand all the metaphors in classic writings.

It's funny, the Phoenix reminded me of a show I watch call Supernatural. There was an episode where they had to kill "Eve", but the only way to do that is with the ashes of a Phoenix. Is it an actual extinct bird? I know nothing about it.

I love your style of AABB. It flows so naturally, which is what makes it easy for the reader. It certainly can be interpreted in different ways depending on the mythology and spirituality aspect. I interpret it as the life cycle of a Phoenix. Again, I could be totally off, and forgive me if I am. If I'm off the mark, I'd love to hear your intentions.

Do you always write in that manner, AABB? Or do you write metaphorically as well? I'm always searching for help with poetry, so if you have any tips, I'd love to hear them. I have written some. They're in my port, but they are very short. I'd love for you to look at them! You are very talented. Keep writing!












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I loved Cinderella ever since I was a child. The version I know and like best is the Disney animated movie. The one thing I didn't like was that the dress in the film and on the book was different than was described in the story. I didn't think there was anything special about the dress on the cover. Actually, I found it to be rather plain. I've never heard of the other versions.

Several years ago, they released a Cinderella type movie that to this day I adore. It is called Ever After. It was not animated and starred Drew Barrymore and a guy. I say I guy because I can't remember his real name. Something with Scott in it, I think. Anyway, it was done so well, that it actually could've happened. It was from the point of view of Cinderella's great-great granddaughter. It's a movie that I suggest you watch if you like Cinderella stories.

Your description of all three versions were easily readable, and I was engaged the entire time!

The one book that I do remember and is my favorite, has a dress that was pink and white with ribbons and other beautiful details. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and reviewing it as well.

Thank you for sharing it and great job!!












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*CupcakeO*My Comment:What can I possibly say? Beautiful words describing such a heartache. It must have been difficult to write.*CupcakeO*

*CupcakeO*Overall Impression:As with most poetry, I don't always understand all of the metaphors or meanings behind them. Of course, I unserstood some parts, but others escape me. When you said, fears the future, told me of her fear of dying. That's if I understand correctly. But, as usual, you've written it brilliantly and with passion behind those words.*CupcakeO*

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Write on!!




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