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Talking to myself, as usual…

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Just some thoughts in an effort to make sense out of minor senselessness.

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Review of Arrogance

Review by MushPurTayTur

Rated: E | (5.0)

This is really good. It's simple, short, sweet, and that twist at the end is brilliant. Fantastic, definitely a favourite!

Keep writing.
Mush

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Review of Our song

Review by MushPurTayTur

Rated: 13+ | (3.5)

This is adorable. Paints a solid image in my mind of how upset the narrator is, and you capture the bittersweet nature of a breakup very well.

I find, however, that your structure is a little all over the place, and it lends to a difficult to follow piece.

Overall, I really liked it.

Mush

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