There is a house in New Orleans they call the "Rising Sun."
Many folk get angry with God, because the God thing isn't cutting it.
But all that God is-is in you. Where do you think you can from?
Every living thing is connected and was formed on this planet.
GIA, Zeus, Odin, these are words for the Source of Life.
Typically, when Christians question their faith they slip off into
demonology. If your told that any other faith is evil, what else could
you believe? I like Zen. It doesn't judge a tsunami .. It excepts it.
Do you believe God wants to destroy the world? Why? It is all God.
Obviously, your poem needs no grammar correction.
I, however, question its motives.
Hell, according to Nordic Myth is a place to be reborn after death.