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Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw a demonstration of gravity on Youtube.
A bowling ball and a feather were dropped at the same height
inside a room with no oxygen. The bowling ball and feather hit
the floor at the same time.
There was another demonstration with an elderly man.
A weight lifting bar with 300 pounds was spun a rod and the elderly man
picked it up and held it with one arm.

Gravity reminds me of Star Wars "Force."

Fun topic

for entry "Aliens are Here!
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A lot of stuff is happening in Antarctica ..
There is volcanic activity and large chunk of ice broke off
which is heading for Australia ..
A Pyramid has been discovered. Thousands of years ago there was
a green Egyptian culture there.
Could this be Alien?

Fun topic!

Review of Calling in Sick  
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
"a seal rockery." ?
You wrote. I've never heard of this.
Maggie had a slimy tongue in your story.
Is she human? Why is this detail your story?
A strange tale ending in violence ...

I'd like to see more detail in the narrative.

Is Maggie a seal?

Keep writing!

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Eugenics and the field of genetic engineering is fun!
Imagine real Angelic humans with miraculous powers.
Or, a dictatorship ruled by Super Humans(The Wrath of Khan).
I've often wondered how women feel about their
reproductive cycle. Do they feel they are a slave
to their bodies?
Scary fact about North Korea, they have human guinea pigs.
There are no human rights in North Korea.
They brag about breading citizens for excellence.
And who can stop them from cloning babies?

Fun topic!

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (4.5)
It looks like you've done your home work.
But, we haven't been back to the Moon in 20 years.
What the core is made of is not known..
And for that matter the Earths core is unknown as well.
Some believe in a hollow Earth, such as, H.G.Wells'
Journey to the Center of Earth.
Some of the Moon rocks had gold in them.

Good topic!
Keep writing!

Review of Devil's Veil  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This reminds me of the sci-fi BLOB flick.
Did you know United Poultry Concerns, INC.,
has declared the month of May:
International Respect for Chickens Month?
They are a vegan organization that believes
the life of a chicken is just as valid as
human life.
Order posters & brochures at

The problem with eating is what you eat.

Fun yarn!

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ezekiel's wheel might be a UFO.
The prophet Ezekiel saw a bright wheel in the sky.
It dropped a ladder down to him.
He climbed up inside and talked with God.

Fun topic!

Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The Philosopher Democritus said, "Politics is for the landowners."
Only property owners could vote in the early Colonial States of America.
And most of the founding fathers, including the writer of the constitution
of the Colonial American States, were slave owners.
The economy of America in 1776 was based largely on slavery.
The swamp around the Capital White House in Washington D.C. was filled
by African slaves. Their bones still lay under the foundation of the
White House.
Is it not ironic that most agricultural labor is undocumented?
And since they are undocumented Mexico will not take them back.
Will these Mexican slaves be used to build President Trump's wall?
Will they be kept on plantations or concentration camps?
Mexico refuses to repatriate undocumented immigrants..
They could be Columbian ..
There is always a need for slaves in a Democracy.


Review of Writer's Block  
Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That's awesome writers block.
"like flails." did you mean flaying?
That was a form of extreme interrogation.
This free verse is very vivid.
Do muse about the wipper willow?
There is only the now.
Do not fear the winds of the world's end...

Everything written on the internet travel through
ethos unto countless dimensions..

Vertago <^>

Review of Strength Escapes  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe humans are the only animals that cry.
My dad scolded me for crying.
"You must be strong." he said.
A bone stuck out of my arm.
I had fallen from a tree.
I felt I had disappointed dad.
But, he hugged me.
I like your bare simple verse.
There are days when I feel all is lost.
But, I will not cry.
Let us pray our President can.

Keep writing!
Review of The Land Of Ons  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (4.5)
There is a Moron tribe in Maine.
Along with the Huron and Iraquoi tribes,
the Moron tribe is closer to Canada ...
I have dealt with hiring issues on tribal
tattoos, which can be on the face ..
Exposed tattoos can be unexceptable in the
food industry. A blood test maybe required
to exclude hepatitis...
Nevertheless, the ending to this liliputing
muse was amusing.

Keep writing!

Review of Silence Comes  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
Birth causes death.
But, what will you do in between?
I knew a girl, who had cancer.
She asked me to marry her.
We were both kids in Children's Hospital.
I did not have a life threatening decease.
But, we made our vows.
Well, I got through my chest surgery and
she had many more treatments..
She died. .. That is the life process.

Good writing!

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (4.5)
Shape shifting can be found in all religions
and our DNA has all of the animal kingdom in it.
I like the idea of a school for young gods.
I've often wondered where God learned to be omnipotent.
Some scientist think the universe popped out of nothing.
That is too fantastic for me to believe... ..
But, that doesn't mean its impossible.

My dad told me that we live in the mind of God.
Does that means life is a dream?

You have some grammar mistakes~"Josh uestioned."
I like to read my stories aloud.
The inner voice is hypnotic.

Keep writing!

Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (1.5)
Story Mistress sent me an e-male : My address on file was incorrect and deleted.
My address is P.O.Box 821, Kittery, Maine 03904.

I hope that clarifies my mailing address.
Oddly, I have received my mail from Writing.com
at this address: P.O.Box 821, Kittery, Maine 03904.

Does Story Mistress have the right address on her file?

Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Ghost stories are fun
and this one falls into the lady by the road
Never pick up the lady by the road.
In these ghost stories there is an apparent
moral, but it is lost in fear.

There is a syntex issue,
"Her hair blew in a wind we had not known."
what kind of wind is unknown?

But I enjoyed the ending.

Keep writing!

Review of An Enigma  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (4.5)

To fight for a Heavenly cause..
no matter how far.
no matter how hopeless..

Why do we aspire?
Most animals are content.
Humans want more.
Strange little monkeys.

Your Enigma is intriguing ..
How do we know light?
We perceive it with our senses
and interpret.

Keep writing!

for entry "Thoughts
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I'm reminded of a night drive
with my dad. He was 83.
His night vision was not good.
"I can see the headlights." dad remarked
as he drove up the elevated 95 in Boston.
"Pull over!" I pleaded.
"Do you believe in Jesus?" he smiled
as he turned onto an off ramp to
At that moment I believed in miracles.

Nice piece.

Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It always amazes me to what extent
people will go to suppress free speech.
There really isn't free speech.
But, we kid ourselves out of complacency.
George Carlin remarked, "Nothing is free."
And then he went on to list the obscene words
which must never be spoken.
It's really just a matter of opinion.

Good topic!

Review of Hard Cold Facts  
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well, if your going to tell a lie,
tell a big lie.
There is a statue of limitation to prevent
endless lawsuits ..
But, is legitimate to ask the question,
why so many women have accused Bill Cosby.
By definition getting someone drunk to have sex
with them is rape.
Sharing a drugs for sex is also rape, even if both
parties are high.
Bill Cosby made a deposition statement under penalty
of perjury that he gave women drugs without their knowledge.
But, there is a statue of limitation..

I'm not certain he will go to prison.
He is disgraced.

Good article.

Review of Pokegirl Quest  
Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Harry Potter is an odd witch.
Firstly, he makes incantation,
but there is no understanding
of what he is invoking.
Who or what power is he calling
I don't see many Latino students
at Hogwarts.
It seems very Anglo.
Just my take.
Pokémon is a simple familiar ..
To enchant someone you must get
their attention, usually with a
shiny object.

What I like is a mystery who done it.
The BBC has many British actors, some
Latino that give excellent performances
and there is no gun play ..
Strange how American TV loves gun fights?

Any who,
keep writing!

And do not be ashamed.

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very well written.
You use the other senses to
describe a color to a blind person.
I remember witnessing a blind woman
get hit by a delivery truck in
Harvard Square.
She had heard the walk bell at the
crossing lines, but the driver didn't
see her. The truck was red.

Keep a dream journal
and write what you feel.

Review by bob county
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think it was Archie Bunker,
who said, "I do my best thinking
on the toilet."
Donald Trump is the Beaver,
"Gee. Wally I guess girls
are okay too in pants."
The Don even squints when
he talks, like the Beaver.

Your introspective on
complacency made me ponder
Yes, there is a theory that
something came from nothing.
"Bubbling nothingness."
Richard Dawkins remarked.
Physicist Klause Lawrence
has written a book on nothingness.
I forget the tittle ...
Well, it's probably nothing.

Any who,
your writing intrigues me.

Review by bob county
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You sound like a Buddhist.
But, then again, aren't we all living
in the mind of God?
I believe the biggest obstacle to peace
is ignorance.
Humanity creates all the evil in the
world from prejudice..
Should have, could have, maybe next year
will resolve our mess...
Or maybe not.

Nice work!

Review of Day 10 - 2.5.13  
Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
This reminds me of Yeats, "The Dead."
Very tight lines full of meaning and
Maybe a bit post Apocalyptic;
Ourselves alone?
"It is forbidden to cross the great
river and look upon the Place of God
this most strictly forbidden.
We do not say its name though we know
its name." By the Waters of Babylon,
Stephen Vincent Benet.

Very well written.

Review by bob county
Rated: E | (5.0)
My mother told me not to talk to strangers.
Is this prejudice?
There was an old German man renting a room in my
My mother told me not talk to that NAZI.
I talked to him.
He was a very nice man and we played chess.

His landlady said he was a soldier in the NAZI army.
I asked him about that.
He said, "Hitler made everyone sign a loyalty act.
Anyone who did not sign was arrested."
He said he never killed a Jew.
I didn't mention my mother was Jewish.
My dad was a redheaded Irish Catholic.
I didn't want a confrontation.
We continued to play chess in the afternoon.

Was I prejudice?

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