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Review of Old Ways  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. The numbers at the top stress the breakup. Good job with the emotion. It seems to bounce from 'woe is me' to 'I couldn't care less'. That is a feeling teenagers with broken hearts have carried for centuries. I enjoyed this journey. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool prose. Where the mind goes instead of doing what you were intending to do. Thinking of socks. Good job with this. Could see sitting, and hating, the all-nighter. I enjoyed this journey. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel this is seeing thousands of lives. Each candle represents a life. This is an interesting poem that seems to bring forward a feeling of being alone. Good job causing the reader to think more of what is behind the lines. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. There is so much it could mean. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cute flash story. Has probably happened more times than we could say. I enjoyed this story, and have worked in restaurants myself. Good job making the characters real in 300 words. Thank you for sharing. keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It was such a wonderful, inspiring experience. It is wonderful to think of the seeds planted that night. Who knows where they will spring up? It was a good story, and it was a good write as well. I see no grammar issues or misspellings. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful poem with alternating rhyming. I love it! We all should be more accepting of others. A poem for just use 'elderly'. Thank you for the journey. I enjoyed reading this. Keep writing.

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Review of Brothers of Bond  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat war poem. It should be entered into the Veteran Contest here. Good rhyming, with a good tempo. I enjoyed reading this. I felt it was from one that had experienced such an event. Good job with this piece. It carries a lot of strong emotion with it. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of The Rock  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem about the strong leader of the family. Probably a father who does as a father does and takes on all issues. It's a good poem full of emotion. I can see that in many families today. Thank you for sharing. It's a good poem. Keep writing.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cute little free verse. You never know about the cats. They hold many secrets. Brooms aside, cats will be found anywhere. Love the story, the witch took care of the problem. Good job with this. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.

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Review of Feelings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice little poem of love. I translated it into English. If you love him. Good job with this piece. I hope it lost nothing in translation; it's a solid piece. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of Frustration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice little poem. I enjoyed reading this. The tempo seemed nice and smooth. The content is excellent, the feeling when we can do nothing for a loved one. Personally, I like to think the first thing would be to pray. But that's just an opinion. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this. Very clear. Keep writing.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A beautiful poem. It is amazing how often our loved furry ones reflect on ourselves sometimes. How they remind us of unconditional love. It is a very strong and emotional poem. I could see those brown eyes, and hear the whine as you would close the door. Thank you for sharing this piece. I enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Such a wonderful poem. Gaze, dream, and weep. Very easy to follow. Love the ending of each stanza. Good job with this piece, we all have a Squantz pond for our emotions I believe. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.


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Review of One By One  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
IMHO excellent short story. I have seen several versions of the train. I enjoyed reading this. It moved forward with no real bumps, and was easy to follow. We all should be so lucky to experience death like that. Good job with an emotional story. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of With love...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem. Good rhythm. I enjoyed reading this and finding the nugget at the end. Good job with stepping through with no indication of the end. An excellent poem with a nice little twist. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good flash story. I enjoyed reading this. Could feel the ride and see the crowd. Good job with switching the emotion from one to another. Tension build-up was ok, maybe been a little tighter, but good as it is. Thank you for sharing. I know of this feeling. Keep writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A neat poem of maybe a spectra, or ghost. I do see the weathered sand as 'sands of time' maybe. And the 4 am end of witching hour I suppose. Only to be searching for her again the next cool Halloween on a November day. Cool poem, I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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This is such a neat poem. So full of information, and I remember each and every one of those shirts. Probably had many of them. That was how we made a statement back then. I had one Pat Paulson for president was my favorite. The poem itself is very good and very descriptive for those not familiar with the era. Very well stated for those of us who are familiar. Thank you for the journey. Keep writing.

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Review of Divine Hug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. A problem brought forward and walk to the answer is described. Sometimes we are put in a position to see that we can't do it alone. Realization of that can be demoralizing. As the poem states we can need that Divine Hug. Been there, done that. Never want the hug to go away.
Good job, with this. Very clear in meaning, it's an encouraging piece. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of A Graveside Visit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Such a cool story. This was an enjoyable read. I hope you placed well in the contest. I could see the whole thing as you described it very well. I see no real grammar issues in this. The content is excellent and leads you through the story very well. Using Mr. Poe to collect a spirit, that is not a spirit yet. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a beautiful love poem. The free verse is good, and very clear in meaning. We all have loves, that sometimes it is hard to put into words. They seem so small to the emotional feelings we have. Good job. Emotion comes through very well. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of A Life Lived  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cool straight-forward poem. Tells a lot about a person's thoughts, sometimes. I suggest centering such a powerful, emotion-filled poem. Good job with this. Much is between the lines, leaving the reader with his/her own interpretation. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of The Devils Deal  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a good way to work things out—through a poem. I have been chased and bothered by the devil for many years. What I have found is that if he is chasing you, it means he hasn't gotten you yet. Good job with rhyming. It's a good poem, full of emotion. I suggest centering it and enlarging the font for readability.

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A beautiful poem of the sea and beach. This can be read two ways. My first was actually seeing the water and sand. The beach in front of me. The cool breeze and smell of saltwater. Second reading, the ocean is life we are facing, the cool breeze is anticipation. The treasures are what life gives us when we take time to see it as it really is. My suggestion is title it. Give the look it deserves. Good job, I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

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Review of The Gown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sad but beautiful story. Should have entered it into the Veterans Contest. Easy to read, easy to follow. Causes us to be careful of how we end conversations with loved ones. Good job, I could feel the strong emotion creeping through this. I would increase the font size is the only suggestion I have. Good job with this. Thank you for sharing.

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