|Before I get into the "wow" factor of this poem, the fact that you use such creative language is amazing! Yes, I love learning new words I haven't heard before.
Alright, now, onto what I liked about this poem:
The two stanzas before the last one of the poem really stood out to me. I love that you make rain seem like a real person. Human-like, I should say.
"Rain touches emotions." Yes! Yes, it does. Most days when it's rainy outside, I feel sad or tired. It's the change in weather, I swear!
As I read each word, I have a clear, clear picture in my mind of what you're writing! It's so good!