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635 Public Reviews Given
635 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Encouraging but helpful. Most of the review will be about how good/what i liked about your writing, but i will point out flaws if i see any! :)
I'm good at...
Short Stories
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Sports, Romance
Least Favorite Genres
Murder Mysteries
I will not review...
I will review pretty much anything
Public Reviews
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice to meet you, shaun! how old are you?! The website is a great place to get started on your writing. people here give REALLY good reviews: i've gotten quite a few of them. don't be scared to talk to me or ask me for a review: i'll do it for sure! :)
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Review of Journey's End  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E
that was very good! i loved the way you slanted the words just a bit-that is a very nice touch. The poem was great too! :)
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Review of Gift for Natalie  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
W-O-W! That is insaying!!!! Poor Paul, Natale doesn't recognize him! :/ Great writing, it was very dramatic. The beginning scene was funny: "
“Well, aren’t these beautiful?” Shelly, my coworker said, moving the smooth petals between her fingers. “Someone’s lucky!”

“You mean someone’s getting lucky,” Tyler teased, reaching over her for the box of donuts." LOL!!! Leave her alone, Tyler! :)
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Review of Torment  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WWOOOWWW!!! that was intense!!!!! this is kind of how i felt at school: trapped with no where else to go! thanx for recommending this! i liked it!!!!! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this part was funny! Poor G was so flustered! LOL!!!! i loved the detail you used to describe her: i could picture her in my minds eye. Great Job!!!! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i like it so far! just curious, were you a math teacher at one part? Because you have a lot of numbers in your story! i will definatly read more! you used a lot of detail and, as a fellow writer (even though i'm so much younger than you) detail is very important in the story! i like how you went into great detail about where he was-that's a great start!!!
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Review of GHOSTS  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I was getting shivers up my spine reading this!! I know it's a poem, not a story, but still... you're a good writer! I can assume you've been writing for a while because your writing is good! I loved the emotion in this poem-it seemed intense and creepy! Great Job on this!!! :)
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Review of G. H. DAY  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
this was funny! Great Job!!!! :)
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Review of My Love is ……  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is AMAZING! it was beautiful... it's the way love SHOULD be! "A raindrop that evaporates before it ever kisses the earth. A song that is sung but never heard." those two lines were my favorites! Keep up the good work! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
AWWWWW!! this was sad but really good at the same time! i teared up a little bit, which is not something i do that often. I'm sorry about your loss! :(
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Review of Sheaves of Grain  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a wonderful poem! it's like a poem for anyone who lives out in country... it's a very country related poem. Good Job!!! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was really good! As a Catholic, i learned about this when i was real little. My favorite line was: "He dwells upon high and rules over all,

All of nature answers his call." Keep it up and God Bless You! :)
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Review of The Memorable Day  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, Ken that was great yet sad at the same time. People do stupid things and look what happens to them! I thought that was cute that his last words were "I Love You!" Keep writing and keep reviewing! ;)
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Review of Moon and Stars  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVED YOUR POEM!!! I like the way you mixed the red and the blue lettering, that was quite clever. Keep up the good work! ;) BTW, if you got a chance, could you review my stories too?! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
IT WAS A DOG THIS WHOLE TIME?! OMG THAT'S HILARIOUS!!! GREAT JOB! :)
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Review of The mammon Land  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was great! i could pictures all the plans and cars and the hot desert as i read it! Keep it up!!
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Review of My Pet Theory  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
LOL!!! This was great and funny! keep it up! ;)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E
Nice story! whenever I read poems, I like seeing the story behind it. Great Job!!
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Review of Irish Limericks  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I LOVED IT!! I'm 50% Irish on my mom's side, so this was great! Keep it up!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love Cinderella! one of my favorite stories!!! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was beautiful! I loved the fact that you described God's creations. *Heart*
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Review of Epiphany  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
that was great! I liked how you use letters of the word as your starting letter. GREAT IDEA! :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
God bless you! My grandmother had cancer back in 2007 so I know what its like to have a loved one with cancer. Keep up the good work and please, if you can, review my stories too!!! :)
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Review of I Love You  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OH MY GOSH!!! my heart was melting when I read it. Such a good poem! Keep it up!!! :D
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Review of Just One Time  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cuuuuuuuttttttttteeeeeeeee!!!!
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