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635 Public Reviews Given
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Encouraging but helpful. Most of the review will be about how good/what i liked about your writing, but i will point out flaws if i see any! :)
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Short Stories
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Sports, Romance
Least Favorite Genres
Murder Mysteries
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I will review pretty much anything
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Review of WHY I LIVE?  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
This sounds like someone who tried to...ah...end their life would write. It seems like something I would write for sure, since I tried to end my life eariler this year.

I loved that you included your children in there! Children are so important to everyone.

Keep writing, please! :)
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Review of i was here  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
"They rip, tear and shred (with ease)
language and definition
and make all things different
and do time’s job of change"

I just love this line in the poem. It reminds me of everyday life. Like life tears you down but it's up to you to build yourself back up. Good job with this!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
I JUST REVIEWED A DICTONARY! I'VE NEVER DONE THAT BEFORE!

This is very helpful to the people who don't know poetry very well, like myself. I used to write poems but I didn't know all the terms and stuff that went with it. Thank you sooo much for sharing this with us!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Aww, wow, I wish I could be like this lady! She sounds amazing!

Anyone who takes their job and makes happy times out of it is a good person. I hope to be like that when I eventually get a job. That's not for a long way off yet.

I saw no spelling errors in your story. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this article a lot. I remember writing when I was in grade school (or elementary school) and being really excited about it. I've been writing since I was seven years old and I still write to this day!

Back then, I didn't worry about commas or spelling. I didn't care. I just wanted to write and write until I couldn't anymore. And that has all payed off.

Thanks for sharing this article with us! :)
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Review of 07/03/08  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Is this based off your life? I'm not sure if it's a love poem or just a poem about life and being careful about who you trust? Very mysterious, indeed.

"You wonder· who's really your friend· .

a laugh· . . .

a look· . . .

a glance avoided."

I know this verse like the back of my hand! Ugh, it's so true!

Thank you for writing! Keep at it!
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Review of Hoover Hicks  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
OH MY GOD I'M LAUGHING PLEASE THIS IS SO CUTE CONTINUE ON WITH THIS STORY!

The only thing I will tell you is to space out your paragraphs a little bit more. Just so that it's easier to read! :)

Otherwise, 10/10. I want to read the next part
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Review of Valdyrin  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting story here. Very interesting.

Mistake: You should space out your paragraphs. I could read it just fine,but other people might not be able to.

I had to laugh at the character's banter. For someone who was stuck on a war-prision ship, these two are mightly lively.

Do write another part to this story. I'd love to read it.
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Review of A Declaration  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow! This was amazing!

Before reading your poem, I never really understood the clash of the genders.....of being two different genders. Now, I do.

Is this based on your life, just curious? Because if it is, then good luck to you, young one.

Please write more poems! They are very enjoyable.
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Review of January 26th  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, was this written based on a true story? I'd love to hear what happened here!

I was scared/sad reading this poem. I could hear the terror in your words. I could feel the emotional pain in your words.

I liked that you chose a simple date for your title. It points to a specific event.

I'm glad you found someone that treats you like gold! That is very important!
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Review of Enterprise 789 BC  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Is this a poem or a story? I cannot tell here!

My friend would have loved this! he loves star-trek!

Please keep writing, my friend. All of us, including you and me, will be better each time we write. You have a lot of potential ahead of you. Keep it up!
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Review of Satan in Disguise  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awe I found myself smiling at this. The imagine, I mean. IT's cute.

It's also sad at the same time. I had a friend who I thought was an "angel" in a way and it turned out she was just mean and didn't care for me.

Please keep writing! You can only get better in time.
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Review of The Stain  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO GOOD BNQOVKLAJLFG

I didn't realize this was a horror story oh my goodness. Oh my goodness.

You did a good job keeping me in the dark thinking that it was just some food stain and then the end was a big shocker!

Keep writing, please.
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Review of Facebook Photos  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
oh my god this had be laughing and now I have tears in my eyes how EMBARRASSING oh my goodness.

I've done some embarrassing thing, but I never had anyone expose what I've done like this. *shudders* UGH! How that poor teacher must feel.

I've meet a few kids like the one in this story and they don't seem like the type I'd want to hang around with.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is all one big paragraph! You need to space things out more so I can read it better.

This isn't poetry, either. Poems don't write like this. I'd call this a word blub.

This is nonsensical writing and I love it. You write about things that aren't real. Cheers to you, my friend.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your wife is your muse? Awe, that's so sweet! *heart eyes*

I love how you can go into another world to write. When I write, I get lost in my stories, so much sometimes that I jump when I hear another person's voice.

Keep writing, please. I'd love to read more about you.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The greatest gift you can give to people you love is to lay down your life. That is what this queen does here.

I felt sad that Qura had to die. I wish she had Hood had been given a life of happily ever after. But, they sadly didn't.

Keep writing, please. I adore your stories!
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Review of Trying to be  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
aw, this is based off a real person you dated? This is such a cute poem!

I like how you described her different personalities. How she could be one person one day and a totally different person the next day.

I wish I had someone who'd write something like this about me.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Is this a poem condeeming humanity? It sounds like it is!

Perfect length for a poem. I like my poems short. Save the long lengths for stories.

I think my favorite line was this one: "Asses would rather have strow than gold.
We choice the asses instead of the persons
Who, with a smile, themselves sold.
The nature of fool have many versions."
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Review of City Affair  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Um.........this got shivers down my spine. Wow, great job setting the mood.

What is this supposed to be a dark story about? A haunted town? That would be cool to read about!

Did you win the contest you wrote this for?

Keep on writing! I really enjoyed this piece of art!
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Review of Holiday Sweaters  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
what mother would fool their child into thinking that their father is still alive? I'd call that mental abuse! that's so mean.

I love the idea of Holiday Sweaters. Makes me wish I had a sweater like that. Sadly, I don't.

Keep up the great writing! I enjoyed this story!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wish everyone would learn this lesson! Ugh, bullying. It's a nasty thing.

If you don't help someone out when you get the chance too, when you're in need of help, someone might not help you!

I hope you will keep writing poems like these. Lord knows we need them in this day and age!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh no this was so sad :( Poor Jimmy, losing a brother like that!

I liked how you kept using that monkey as a scare tactic. That was clever. Seeing a face that isn't there? That sent chills down my spine.

Are you going to write more? I want to know who Timmy is!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, thanks for sharing this with me! I hope your anxiety gets better.

This sounds like me. I have anxiety and this too me is exactly what my thought process is. I sympathize with you on that point.

Please keep writing and share more of these wonderful stories.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
oh wow.......um.........this was interesting.

I've always heard of hypmotizing and wondered if it was real. Well, it still don't think it's real, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy it!

Is there another part to this that you are thinking of writing up? Please write another session.
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