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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have expressed your thoughts so rich and artistic; I liked this work, but I did not enjoy the read, for I am so weak in the language, as I have poor power of comprehension, I did not find rhymes, it has just been a work expressed and you must have enjoyed composing this so rich with nice imagery; may be you do not like a reader of my stature should also get a pleasant read; well said, well done; keep writing.
324 w/14/09/12/21

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Rated: E | (5.0)
May the name of the place is queer, but I think you may find their Nature is rich, green and comforting to make a good environment, nice atmosphere and everything for good state3 of living, you could make the house there a real happy and sweet home; well said, well done; keep writing. Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber W 342/12/09/12/21




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Review of New Year Dreaming  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Your dreams of a joyous New Year in general are well explored and expressed; your dream of earth as one country is most humane thought and humanity is earth’s citizens working together, is a mere dream, for it is hard, if not impossible, but how is a matter of making and propagating and moulding man to bring this dream into reality, only in thought it is so easy to think and express and making it real is so tough, time consuming and a matter of great teaching, learning, appreciation and understanding man’s role for working together; and your dream of having one species in the world is again a common thought but it is toughest to practice, since million years, man has been trying for this, but it is still in anomaly; Well said, well done; keep writing. w/822.11/09/12/21


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Rated: E | (5.0)
None on earth is perfect. If you were only perfect, you can be a role model, and if you were only perfect, you would have been a queen, and if you were only perfect, you would not be the love of the poet’s life; how great is the wish, reason and declaration about love and perfection and the true meaning and state of perfection is well conveyed. Well said, well done; keep writing. w 423/ 10/12/21


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Truly expressed, you are a lover, you know what is romancing and loving, why love is important in life and where there is love to share; at your heart love is there and it enrich soul, you wish to share and enrich your soul and making your lover rich in love for happiness and be there in heavens; well said, well done; keep writing. 375 w/09/09/12/21

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You find the trees are screaming, they have cried enough, you remember how much they served you people and others, today you are unhappy at their screaming sound and signs of death; your heart crushes; Well said, well done; keep writing. 270 w/ 08/09/12/21

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Review of My Son  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a pride! You wish to remain a proud father of your son; Now your son is bright, strong, stout, skilled and he must have been wise, you compare his child state of living with his living these days; now, he is tall and can climb a hill and descent from the hill safe; nice. Well said, well done; keep writing. 339 w/ 06/09/12/21


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Review of Peacock Smiles  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ankit tried his best to make his mother happy, and he did by painting and placing the same before his mother on his mother’s happy birthday, but his mother noticed no emotion for two years ago on the same day his father disappeared, and in 2 years his mother spoke only one sentence “Is dad home?” I enjoyed the read; it seems a true story expressed; title is significant and appropriate, I enjoyed the read; well said, well done; keep writing. 468 w/04/09/12/21


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Review of Pineapple Party  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Indeed, you think and speak the right concept, when we try making a parody of an existing song, as you have stated, it does not come out as one expect, for it is a matter of wisdom, or skill and experience, even then one cannot do it perfect, for none is perfect, copying or imitating or thinking alike is not feasible, though it is said, wise men think alike, still there is always a difference, may be God has gifted the power of forgetting, so I think, we forget and cannot make anything perfect; anyway, I like your thought; moreover, as we think, we dream and so we find, see, experience or feel the same; nice. ;Well said, well done; keep writing. 678 w/03/09/12/2021

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Review of price  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In this poem you have fairly thought of and worded that we pay price for living, as we pay so we get; as in law of contract, there is no contract without consideration, that means no consideration, no contract, though our life does not require to make a contract, with none, but idea is the same, as we pay the price so we get or make our living, for example, price of love is sacrifice, the price of beauty is jealous eyes, but price of life is terrible life, though I think, the word ‘terrible’ is not appropriate, better ‘immortal living’ or the like; there is a mistake here, you gotta have to paid, the correct expression is you gotta have to pay; well said, well done; keep writing. 731 w/02/09/12/2021


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Relationship Poetry speaks about believing in love in course of living here on earth, and thanking your sweet love, and you experience belief in love, forbearance and righteousness often leads to victory; well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, glad reviewing this, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, rare (good) my dear writer, God Bless You, I, DR, wrote 114 books. Words: 441 / 10/ 23/11/2021/T


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Review of A passion  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Inspirational Poetry speaks like an ode to the painter’s passion, love and fire for painting and passing moments in all types of painting performance and activities and you ever get inspiratioin from his painting act, action and activities; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, glad reviewing this, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, rare (good) my dear writer, God Bless You, I, DR, wrote 114 books. Words: 474 / 09 /23/11/2021/T


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Review of Lonely Times  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Religious Poetry speaks about lonely times when you are in times of dismay and none is there beside you when you only pray someone beside you; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, glad reviewing this, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, rare (good) my dear writer, God Bless You, I, DR, wrote 114 books. Words:375 /06/23/11/2021/Tue


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Haiku contest Poetry entry speaks about peace in Nature, new dawn rises over battle fields; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, glad reviewing this, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, rare (good) my dear writer, God Bless You, I, DR, wrote 114 books. Words: 330 /05/23/11/2021/Tue


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Tragedy Poetry speaks about someone who ended up shattering your heart, you say he broke you, first; you still say him your arms are his shelter, and will protect him with all your might; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, glad reviewing this, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, rare (good) my dear writer, God Bless You, I, DR, wrote 114 books. Words:423/03/23/11/2021/Tue


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Review of Addicted  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Tanka Poem speaks about your addiction, nature and order of addiction helps relieving your pains for your addiction is creative, innovative and causal of happiness through your expression of words to fight with your own demons that causes you pains; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 474 /12/19/11/2021


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This How To/ Advice Thesis speaks how to hook the readers, how to earn attention of the readers by satisfying their curiosity, nice, prompt, appreciable points given how to attract the readers to read, answering questions to help readers to hook to the beginning of the writing and more questions answered well in many other dimensions to make the readers naturally hook to the expression; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 627/11/19/11/2021


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Nature Poetry speaks about whispering wooded forest; you heard hushed cries of mourning in the morning as if the anguished pines have broken limbs of faith; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 399/09/19/11/2021


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Review of CATHERINE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Relationship Poetry speaks an acrostic order of poem dedicated to your wife of 36 years; this acrostic poem you have composed using Catherine, the name of your wife is so lovable, respectable for her humane and lovely personality; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 471/06/19/11/2021/Prophet Guru Nanak's Birthday/Fri

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks a little negligence can cause harm or bring in losses as the salesgirl did, she lost a customer; it proves the salesgirl is not efficient and she is psychologically not trained, sometimes motherly treat and deal may be important to make a sale; a customer may be treated psychologically and behaviourally else a sale is not effected; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 582/03/19/11/2021

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Review of Injected  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Dark Poetry speaks what your head wants, so you wish not to go for let your darkness go or consumed by the demons for you wish to be injected; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 381/01/19/11/2021

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Review of Déjà vu  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Romance Poetry speaks teenage strange romantic feelings like that of watching a dream; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. 333 Words: 03/18/11/2021



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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Poetry speaks how plant is growing from a seed via your weird mind of course, after the cataclysm raining down, as you have observed how the life of a plant grows as you have tried to learn the art of living and you have tried to compare your state of living experienced from Nature after the event; ;well said, well done; thanks4sharing this, happy reviewing this, keep reading-writing-posting more, fast, time’s precious-limited, dr writer, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Law, Truth. Words: 540 02/18/11/2021

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Rated: E | (4.0)
This Holiday Poetry speaks we make new resolutions every New Year and mostly we forget to upkeep, promote our such resolutions, rather we forget and break the resolutions, we do not make honest endeavour to our motivation, muse regeneration; so our resolutions remain futile; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, my dr writer, keep writing, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth.
519 words/03/14/11/2021/sun

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Review of New Day  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This Senryu speaks dawn thoughts about a gift of a new day, at dawn chant God’s greatest name, the darkness before the dawn vanishes and the morn appears; I think this is not a Senryu in clear term, for I wish to have your clarification, for you have mentioned, a Senryu theme essentially concerns humanity, the individual, or community; well said, thank you for sharing this, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, keep writing more, fast, time’s precious-limited, my dr writer, keep writing, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. Words: 585/02/14/11/2021/sun


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