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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thoughtful! Realistic!

In just 4 lines you have composed a nice poem, I like and have enjoyed the read, and the philosophy.

You have stated a true experience, in span of time; we may find things appear irrelevant.

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The chamber of words
(The Chamber of Words)

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Things can be irrelevant through the moment.
(Things may appear irrelevant in moments of time.)

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I form bridges that will never hold weight;
Hysterically at first, I’m riddled with anger and hate.

(I form bridges that will never hold weight.
Hysterically, at first, I am riddled with anger and hate.)

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Anxiety works different through my brain:
hard to recall, faint with pain.

(Anxiety works different through my brain.
It is hard to recall, faint with pain.)

Comments:
Lines were not so expressive; I have tried to make them more expressive.

You are free to accept or reject any of the edits and comments.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this first (1st) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review recently.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Wishful Dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely! Wonderful!

Dreamy! True!

“Wishful Dreams”, composed by you, is an excellent contest entry, I like, indeed, and have enjoyed the simple, easy, true expressive work of art in 3 lines, the read, and the taletelling.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this third (3rd) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 4 years ago in September, 2015.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

I congratulate you for the win in the contest.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Celebration of glory of a season.

In 16 lines, you have composed a nice poem “The Glory of the Fall”; I like and have enjoyed the read, the word imagery, the taletelling, the word visuals, the free flow of thoughts, the rhythms of thoughts about celebration of the season.


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The Glory Of The Fall
(The Glory of the Fall)


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A poem to celebrate Autumn's glory.
(A poem celebrates autumn's glory.)


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Here, beneath the trees so tall,
Breathtaking is the view,
The golden glory of the Fall,
Displayed for me and you.

(Here, beneath the trees so tall
breathtaking is the view
the golden glory of the Fall
displayed for you and me, anew.)


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Her leaves of red and russet hues
Like flags are all around,
And, scrunching now beneath my shoes,
Rich carpet on the ground.

(Her leaves of red and russet hues
like flags are all around
and, scrunching now beneath my shoes
a rich carpet is there on the ground.)


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Of all the Seasons, I love true
This time of amber light,
When everything is painted new,
In tones so clear and bright.

(Of all the seasons, I love true
this time of amber light
when everything is painted new
in tones so clear and bright.)


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Before the Winter's chill sets in,
And snowdrifts cover all,
Let Nature's yearly show begin:
The glory of the Fall.

(Before a winter’s chill sets in
and snowdrifts cover all
let Nature's yearly show begin
the glory of the Fall.)


Comments:
The stanzas are not so expressive, so I have tried to make each one more expressive.

You are free to accept or reject any of the edits (in the brackets) and or comments.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this eleventh (11th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 17 years ago in October, 2002.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Review of FINAL PLUNGE  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Memories never end before death!

“Final Plunge” a 16 line in 8-8-8-8 abcb format, is a nice poem composed by you.

You cannot escape memories of her, she has gone long, but her memories of pain still come to you every day, you think it is impossible, you think you will have no memories of pain of losing her once you die and join her above. So, you want to plunge into death and wish to die.

I like and have enjoyed the read.


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FINAL PLUNGE
(Final Plunge)


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Don’t ask me why I end this life.
For me now it is of no use.
I hope that for this act of mine

(Don’t ask me why I end this life?
For me, now it is of no use.
I hope this for the act of mine.)


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My life knew no pleasure or pain
Save your meeting and departing;
But now you are gone for ever

(My life knows no pleasure or pain
save your meeting and departing
but, now you are gone forever.)


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As I now take the final plunge,
A happy thought does me enthrall.

(As I now take the final plunge
a happy thought does me enthrall.)


Comments:
Title of a poem is generally not written in all capital letters, in certain cases, especially writing an acrostic poem, we may write the title of an acrostic poem in all capital letters, for more information about that you may click the link "Invalid Item" .

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I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fourth (4th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 10 years ago in January, 2009.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Review of YOUR MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tears witness memories!

“Your Memories” is a 16 line good poem by you.

You never understand why she is lost, and why she and all they have left you, why you are bound to cry, and why memories come out as tears, maybe it because of relation, as it is not easy forgetting relations, and you are etched in your heart.

I like and have enjoyed the read, everything well said and well done about relations.

Edit:
YOUR MEMORIES
(Your Memories)

Comments:
A title of a poem is generally not written in all capital letters, but I find it is your habit.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this second (2nd) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 12 years ago in June, 2007.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Review of Time for Bed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Time for bed - mother means for her children!

‘Time for Bed’ is a simple and good poem; children know what their mother would say, the same word of love, ‘it is time for bed’ and by saying so, she means for you, you still remember her words and habits.

I like and have enjoyed the read.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fourth (4th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 3 years ago in September, 2016.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Review of B as in book  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A book talks!

Fantastic!
The book is there feeling unchained lying on a wood bookshelf, now it is speaking to you, it is there untouched or unread since long, B for book under alphabet, it requests you now for it is prepared to talk to you and you may listen to.


Edit:
B as in book
(B As in Book)

I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word visuals and word imagery.
I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this eighth (8th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 14 years ago in December, 2005.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Gender issues!

I like and enjoyed the read of this series of five lune poems, the state and status of endless strife between man and woman, and the presentation of the issues in an impartial mode of appreciation.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this second (2nd) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 12 years ago in June, 2007.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us. I congratulate you for winning an award in the contest.

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Review of The Home Sampler  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mystery unveiled!

I like and enjoyed the read, the pathetic taletelling and comical end in appreciation, the mystic, interfering and natural act of a Bipolar Disorder patient, the word imagery, and the word visuals.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this sixty-sixth (66th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 10 years ago in September, 2009.

Thank you for sharing this excellent melodramatic poem with us.

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Review of Teeth  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Erotic! A story specific!

I like and have enjoyed the read, the metaphoric use of ‘teeth’; the taletelling, the story of the lovers trapped in an old hunting lodge in frozen cold winter, the word imagery, the word visuals, the free flow of thoughts, the reality progression of the thoughts, good lovers turned daring in romantic manifestation.


Edit:
18+ An erotic poem about two lovers trapped in a old hunting lodge for the winter.
(18+ An erotic poem about two lovers trapped in an old hunting lodge for the winter.)


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I am your everything in this frozen nothing
That you could never hope to escape.

(I am everything to you in this frozen nothing
that you could never hope to escape.)


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Beyond this place, his brethren sing along
The wind carries their calls across the valley

(Beyond this place, his wolf brethren sing along
the wind carries their calls across the valley.)


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Seemingly we are trapped in a timeless state.
(Seemingly, we are trapped in a timeless state.)


I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this sixth (6th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 7 years ago in August, 2012.

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Review of Stuck in School  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Schooling!

Wonderful!

I like this Petrarchan (Italian) sonnet in 14 lines; I have enjoyed the rhymes, the free flow of thoughts, the octave and sestet of the sonnet, the taletelling, a generalized viewpoint about school and learning.


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Who wants to be here in this class
I swear to you that I do not
School however is everybody''s lot
To me its so stupid and crass

(Who wants to be here in this class?
I swear to you that I do not.
School, however, is everybody’s lot.
To me it is so stupid and crass.)


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She often give me some bad looks
Similar to my old preacher

(She often gives me some bad looks
similar to my old preacher.)


Edit:
My best time for now though is noon.
(My best time for now though, is noon.)

You are free to accept or reject any of my edits.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fourth (4th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 3 years ago in January, 2017.

Thank you for sharing this excellent sonnet with us.

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Review of Guns  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent concept! Nice endeavour!

I like and have enjoyed the read as I find you have produced a good work of Senryu, it has been a good Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five morae and I see you have typically treat the theme of human foibles expressed in an ironic or satirical tone.

Though, I think guns do not kill, as it is a common sense, man can kill by using guns, and it is true that polices need not be policed by anybody for the polices are independent organs or institutions work in a state and a state governs the polices as the polices are governed by the laws for the policemen, and I think, there is no need of thinking policing the polices; however, I understand you have used the concept ironically or satirically using poetic licence.

However, I do not think there is anything proverbial in this Senryu.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this second (2nd) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 4 years ago in July, 2015.

Thank you for sharing this excellent Senryu with us.

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Review of Little Doubt  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem that speaks the present state of affairs across the world and the poet is not much worried as scientists and technocrats and people have started taking appropriate actions to save this world, so the poet has little doubt about any more losses to cause to the earth for the poet thinks people worldwide already know about the issues.

I like and enjoyed the read.


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Crime and vioence abide
(Crime and violence abide)


Edit:
It's man's inhumanity to man.
(It is man's inhumanity to man.)


Edit:
Green house gases are on the rise
(Greenhouse gases are on the rise)


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Then finally some smart Aleck builds the Bomb
(Then, finally some smart Aleck builds the bomb)


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Who will push the detonator
(Who will push the detonator?)


Edit:
Just some ramblings
(This speaks just some rambling.)


Comments:
You have not used Author’s Notes about lesser use of punctuation in your work.

You may accept or reject any of the edits and comments.


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Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.


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Review of Fatherhood  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fatherhood glory!

This poem speaks about the glory and tells more about the new babe and his future courses of living in extension of the generation in dimensions.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the story of generation in comedy flavour of appreciation, the taletelling, the free flow of thoughts, the word visuals and the word imagery.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this seventh (7th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 13 years ago in July, 2007.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us. I congratulate you for winning the contest.

Keep on writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Adventure visit to the Moon, sleep breaks soon!

The joy and excitement, the feeling and heavenly emotion, indescribable everything about the step to the moon, but all in dream, vision, glow, real life movement all disappear with the break of the dream; I like the story.

Edit:
First steps on the Moon
(First Steps on the Moon)

I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the visual imagery and free flow of thoughts.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this two (2nd) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 17 months ago in July, 2018.

Thank you for sharing this fantastic poem with us.

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Review of Spring Is Sprung  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spring is here, snow is there!

Winter goes, spring comes, birds migrated are coming back, no more snow, warmth will boost energy to work more, rain may pour each flower, a season to cheer.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word imagery, free flow of thoughts, word visuals.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fifth (5th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 9 months ago in March, 2019.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
They serve people!

You praise the soldiers, say how by duty they serve people like slaves, fight and defend nations from morning till dusk, but sometime people and government do not think much of their pay and comforts.

I like and have enjoyed the sonnet, the octave and the sestet and the resolution and the word visuals and word imagery.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this sixth (6th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 6 years ago in June, 2013.

Thank you for sharing this excellent sonnet with us.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
One side love, labour lost love!

Fantastic! Love specific!

You know what love is, you freely flow in love, but all love from one side, you think love is not fulfilling to the tune of your expectation for you never appreciated love from other end for you think it is a one-side love.

I like and enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the monologue flavour of appreciation of love, the word visuals, and the word imagery.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem of tragedy in love with us.

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Review of Transition  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Colour of transition incessant here and there!

Haikus in piece with a transition kiss!


I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling about the seasonal transition, state of living afterlife, the satori.


I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this eleventh (11th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 11 years ago in December, 2008.


Thank you for sharing this series of haiku poems with us.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ghosts promise better days!

Fantastic!

You feel and find, believe and see ghosts at dawns everywhere around you; their spirits are clean; they call your name, you can see their light and they promise for better days.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the metaphoric use of thoughtful appreciation, the word imagery, the word visuals, free flow of thoughts, the rhymes and the story of ghosts.

Edit:
Ghosts At Dawn.
(Ghosts at Dawn)

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fifth (5th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 21 months ago in March, 2018.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A singing heart lives a living smart!


You believe life is for living in singing; and you live life singing life for a living, doing everything, keeping relation, hoping for making life for a righteous living, saving, protecting, and securing life through a living in singing the meaning of life in living.


I like and enjoyed the read, the taletelling the essence and fibers of living through singing the living clue heartily by giving hopes and keeping hopes for living and helping through writing.


I enjoyed the word visuals, the word imagery, the free flow of thoughts, the rhythms of thoughts for living a life happily and cheerfully, manifesting life for a living in singing, living for achieving the meaning and aims for living in singing positively.


Edit:
A Song to Sing Is the Living Clue
(A Song to Sing is the Living Clue)


I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fifth (5th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 3 years ago in March, 2017.


Thank you for sharing this excellent poem about singing a living with us.


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Review of silent huntress  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bird tells own character!

Wonderful! Excellent!

You have maintained all the requirements of the prompt, so well; you know how hard nut to crack, your poetic craft is appreciable.

Bird speaks of her power, strength, ability and art of survival.

I like the poem, and I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word visuals, the word imagery, the state and status of a bird’s living, the free flow of thoughts, monologue flavour of own personality revelation in appreciation, the rhythms of thoughts and the art of using words.

Edit:
silent huntress
(Silent Huntress)

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this fifth (5th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 4 years ago in September, 2015.

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Review of Honor Bound  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Patriotic Honour Appreciation!

Poet comes, visits and stands at the glorious place, and feels and remembers the strength of his great land, valour of the soldiers, light of the wars, soldiers’ duty and protection of the right of the land’s freedom.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the story, the taletelling, the essence of the story of honour, glory and power and freedom of the land, the word visuals, the word imagery, the free flow of thoughts, patriotic spirit of the story.

I am happy, inspired and glad to write and send this eleventh (11th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 6 years ago in August, 2013.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Righteous!

This speaks the story in a fair view about the family, the cause and effect of the birth of a jihadi, the righteous taletelling of the child in Iraq who vows to become a Jihadi and goes to avenge his father’s suffering in the then political, economic, religious, cultural environment in the background of the story, I like.

I have enjoyed the read, the dialogues, the diction, the story, the discussion of the issue.

Edit:
THE BIRTH OF A JIHADI
(The Birth of a Jihadi)

Comments:
I do not like a title of a poem is written all in capital letters; but I know, it is your habit, so you love writing title of a poem in capital letters.

I am happy to write this third (3rd) review of your biographical poem which was posted on public read and review about 12 years ago in January, 2008.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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#1937699 by Dave

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fantastic!


What a description of the story of the riders of the moon! How finely, naturally the environment is expressed, the speed, the movement, the scene, the song, the melody, the tree, the snow, the light the sound, the scent, the blend, all describe the riders of the moon are free and fresh.


I like and have enjoyed the read, the story, the taletelling, the word visuals, the word imagery, the free flow of thoughts, the rhythms of thoughts, the glow and beauty in Nature, concordance of man and Nature, the rhymes and the metrical pattern, the ultimate symbol of freedom in manifestation, the diction and the art of expression.


I am happy to write this sixteenth (16th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 11 years ago in June, 2009.


Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
by Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber
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#1937699 by Dave

1470 /Tuesday 26112019


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