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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This Nonsense Fiction speaks a brief look at how humans and birds interact on the coast, about Symbiosis on the docks, still the theme is not expressive, I think, even the genre is nonsense writing, but the purpose of writing is not achieved, just I could not make out the theme, three lines are not comprehensible; but I find you have endeavoured well; thank you for sharing this; God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 534 w. 02/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day Guru

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Review of The Mona Lisa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks a tribute to enigmatic, La Gioconda, and you are Mona Lisa painted by Da Vinci, your beauty is questioned even doubted by many, people think of you so many things about your character and physical beauty, you are still an enigma, you have cryptic aura; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. Guru
489 w, 01/20/10/2021/Friday/WL Day

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Review of Spring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Acrostic Poem (with acrostic letters in beginning and end of each line of the poem, I do not know name of this type of acrostic)speaks about spring and its state of attraction of the season and with comparative analysis of spring with other seasons; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 471 w. (1) 27/10/2010, Wed, WL Day Guru Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This quote and word of wisdom speaks a good quote that what hitches bring to test the efficacy of persuasive prowess; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. Guru - 336 w, 26/10/2021 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Review of love or lust?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Haiku speaks three questions on love or lust; which is it anyway – love or lust, is it heaven or hell but the poet raises the third question – why can’t it be both; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. Guru - 388 w, 26/10/2021
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Review of Aisle Love You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Hint Fiction in 14 words speaks theme is guessable though I have no knowledge about a hint fiction; I like this presentation, this has a visual imagery striking words to make a fiction as one could think; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. Guru Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber 427 w Guru 26/10/2010


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Senryu poem from Saint Peter’s point of view speaks vividly stopping man to build a church on a rock and the rock speaks further to call him Simon, the misuse of Nature and place or space in Nature is well highlighted; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. 342 w. Guru, 25-10-2021, Mon, WL Day


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Review of Prison  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This family poem speaks you visited for the first time a prison wherein your beloved youngest brother was captivated, you carried fear with you to see him first ever in as prison; you saw life hidden in a box; you felt as if hate in things in the environment, but in the Nature love was evident; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. 414 w. Guru, 25/10/2021, Mon, WL Day
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Review of Rain Dogs Howl  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks clearly in series and steps your power, decisiveness and power of writing or expression even when, others in general cannot, you know and find yourself way down in the darkness of your head, and ideas you manage and you try write and express candidly, though you are conscious of your troubled course of living in all dimensions of breathing for a good state of living, you are able now, rather habituated, to say, you have equipped yourself for a good state of living as and whenever rain dogs howl and dismantle your state of head; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. 657 GURU, 25-10-21, Mon, WL Day



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You mean time is time, for your explanation about time is in approximation, as you state time is a concept, time is this moment, time is now; it is not easy to define satisfactorily, scientifically that would be accepted as concrete, full, whole and perfect or appreciable like science, the truth, so your conceptual viewpoint about time is appreciable even if it is not scientific; I do appreciate and find it is good enough to understand and feel a bit about time; well said; thank you for sharing this. Keep writing. 573 w.

Guru, 25-10-2021, Mon, WL Day
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Any day, anytime, anywhere, anyhow anything can happen, there is no scientific explanation, as Maddison is a 9 year old, and one day, you were at her house, when you shrunk to the size of a doll, this is not an incident you mention from your memory or this is nothing about a past happening; because you shrunk one day, this does not refer to a future event; I think this is not miracle, if this just a thought, it may appear utopia or dream; anyway, I enjoyed the thought; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. 585 w
Guru, 25-10-21, Mon, WL Day



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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This poem speaks naturally in rhymes about the animals high above, a sky full of animals, clouds take the shapes of animals in vision from the visible shape of clouds as animals, and you know they cannot be marooned for they appear animals like beautifully shaped animals; though they changed their shape instantly; you can see different tales they show like pictures on silver screens; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing.
Guru 24/10/2021 Sunday night WL Day Cloudy and rainy day 528 w

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Review of Lights  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks a spiritual flavour and appreciation of colour as passionately to you, the lights of the season are one of the greatest parts of the holidays; you sit right there for the lights are white and the brightness of white in bliss, so well expressed, I like this order of thought and expression; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. 375 words.
Guru 24/10/2021 Sunday Dead Night WL Day

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Review of was it love?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have raised a common question, a doubtful question indeed, you are not sure of the sentiment, feeling or experiences, but in general, anyone would mark it a casual event not even an affair to concern, frankly speaking, as a reader, I think, AI may be wrong, it is not love, for I think, love is not something like such event to be counted as; anyway, there is likeness, even you have criticized about the person, it means there is the first step to go a long way to love, love is realizable by heart and not head always, love is sacrifice and more, but there is n mention of anything you can mark it a love, well you know and understand the truth; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. I like your taletelling. Guru 24/10/2021 Sunday WL Day 769 w

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You have truly tried to express your sweet-tragic thoughtful action, view, experience in a few words, obviously what poet can tell, none others can do; the rash or life-taking driving speaks how man has been unconscious of life; that’s why your last word of the poem speaks the matter so concerning; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Keep writing. Guru 24/10/21 Sunday, WL Day 414 w
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Review of O' Aurora  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks the power, grace, grandeur, gravity and grandness of Aurora (Goddess of dawn, for you have left not a word on author notes, so being a reader I had to guess or assume as per my weak amount of limited knowledge, and I think it is not wise to keep theme so secret, I think it is good to give just a word like ‘Goddess’ expected, anyway, it is a good practice, I appreciate), though the theme is not so expressive, I had to guess, but I enjoyed and liked; well done; you would appreciate today, readers may not invest time making guesswork; thanks for sharing this. Guru 24/10/2010, Sunday.
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Review of Summertime Joys  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem about summer speaks how you enjoy summertime joys by swimming, biking and singing a song and playing in the sand with all you toys, vacation with the family on the road and seeing the mountains and wildlife and you keep waiting for about a year when time goes by; well said, well done. GURU 23/10/2021
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Review of Words of Wisdom  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem Words of wisdom speaks when we show gratitude to people we learn patience, peace and happiness and helps us to trust ourselves and we also learn how to stay positive and trust ourselves and others positive, and indeed trusting oneself makes one to bloom creatively; well said, well done. Guru 23/10/2021
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
We are not pleased at our actions, activities or performance for we think and try hard to maintain perfection but it is not so easy thing, that is why are not pleased at our activities, though this is good for those who may achieve perfection at each step of activity, you have not touched this point; well said, well done. Guru 21/10/2021


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Review of Valentine's Day  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Here, on this Valentine's Day, you are sure about Kelley, your valentine, you know, as you believe, it is not easy to escape, she is covered in red paper valentines, you think, the paper valentines are stuck to her with her own blood, you are happy, thoughtfully you do feel happy on this special day. Guru 21/10/2021 Thursday dead Night.


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Review of NEBRASKA  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have mentioned rightly feeling about Nebraska, it is truly endless for you have seen the ending of Kansas, it is rememberable for you have stretched the horizons endlessly; rightly and well said; Keep writing. GURU 19/10/2021 myguruvalmiki@writing.com


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Review of The Fight  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This speaks the fight between head and heart, for head goes with words, reason and logic, but heart does not; sometimes logic defeats and sometimes heart, where there is love, heart goes right for love or like is beyond logic or thoughts always; well done; keep writing. GURU 19/10/2021


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Review of Pain  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem speaks a feeling about hurts and pains; pain is compulsory or inevitable in struggling for survival, though, we know pain is not always permanent, but we wish to get instant relief or we wish to live without pains, like a stupid we get hurt as we feel it so; as we want happiness at each of our activities, as such we feel hurt even after trying when we fail, for some pains or hurts are not real, but we feel it in our imagination; the theme is well expressed.

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I hurt
I want to cry
I want to scream, yell, hit and destroy
anything that would make the pain go away.

I wish I could give in to the willful ignorance
that I see so many others engage.
But, I cannot, my mind craves clarity.

It is evident that I am not as worthless as I believe.
But, I am stuck.

Evidently, I am not as inadequate as I feel.
But, I have nothing.

So, I fight
not to win
not for glory
to survive.

But, for what
I do not know.

I wish I did, I wish I had answers.
I wish I knew how to be better.
But, I fail
I fall
and I get up again.
But why, it hurts?

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Edit includes grammatical correction, change in words and replacing words, in order to help your public readers to appreciate the poem easy and read the poem more expressively and enjoy read more pleasantly.

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Keep writing great poems.

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Review of Anticipation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good Rictameter poem that speaks about anticipation of happening a future course of action.

I do not think the poem has neither clearly told nor explicitly shown anything to express that love is a waiting game.

Edited the description of the poem:
This Rictameter poem tells love is a waiting game.

Edited 3 of this 9 line poem:
dawns bright and clear

like a half-eaten donut waiting for

or, I wait for you to


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Review of Out of Tears  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem tells clearly how fast tears can dry, when one has completely run out of tears.

Edited the description of the poem:
This poem tells tears are needed to get down.

Edited the entire poem:
It is incredible
how fast tears can dry.
One moment, they are streaming
down my face, choking
me, blurring my vision.

The next, they are dried
on my cheeks, salty lines
on cracked skin leaving
my eyelashes stiff and crusted.

My red eyes itch
from the sudden dryness.

My nose is stuffed
and empty at the same time.

It is incredible
how fast tears can dry
when you have completely
run out of them.

Comments:
I have added spaces in between lines of the poem to make the poem to read easier and more pleasant.

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Thank you for sharing this poem.
Keep writing great poems.
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