Fine, fantastic!
Realistic and appreciable thoughts about living, you have cherished to live in and move on to and live in for as well breathe in to living confidently and comfortably as you have decided to live forgetting about the past and live in the present and go beyond making a new future set and live in crossing the future within the present.
You have now learnt how to live henceforth, you will stand tall and make yourself free of you from yourself and make the living and feel that nothing from your present or from your past has control out to the future, and you are determined to go, go and go forward in the present.
You have learned, experienced enough, so you think you must burn down the past and will destroy the present in order to know, learn, see, feel and experience everything new, whatever and howsoever anything might appear impossible to others, without bothering others who may scream for you to come back, you will continue to go, even at the price of dreams of others, dismantling their bridges of hopes and dreams, dismantling all the connections of them, you will continue to go and go and go away from them, without regret and without concern, you will have to go beyond life, and go beyond death.
I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the philosophy of living, attitude toward living, mission for living, appreciation of living, and the free flow of thoughts, the word imagery, the word visuals, the free flow of thoughts, the monologue flavour of appreciation of living, the rhythms of thoughts for living, and visions for living.
I think you have reflected the essence of your thoughts in the following lines, now the lines have been my favourite:
I have to step beyond life
Beyond death
Transcend the idea of what “is”
For the uncertainty of what can “be”
I must risk it all
My absolute everything
Only then will I stand tall
Only then will I be free
Of myself and all that my life
Has come to be
Only then will I know
That nothing from my present
Or from my past has control
Out to the future
I must go
Edit:
Out To The Future
(Out to the Future)
Edit:
A short poem about moving beyond the past and the present into my own defined future.
(A poem tells about moving beyond the past and the present into my own defined future.)
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Beyond here
Beyond now
This very moment
Of space and time
Out to the future
I must be willing to go
I cannot hold back
No longer can I
Remain in the past
Never again will I step back
As I bravely move forward
(Beyond here
beyond now
this very moment
of space and time
out to the future
I must be willing to go.)
(I cannot hold back
and no longer can I
remain in the past.
(Never again will I step back
as I bravely move forward.)
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Way beyond what I have become
Increasingly bothered with
I must burn down the past
And by doing so destroy the present
I must lay waste to all that I know
In order to find something new
Something impossible to those
Who know my terrifying truth
Selfish this will all seem
Many will scream for me
To come back
To hold them ever so close
But above all I must let go
I must set them free
Even at the price of their dreams
I must dismantle their bridges
All of their connections to me
So that once I am gone
Once time no longer holds me
I, as well as them
Will be absolutely free
Out to the future
Beyond here
Beyond now
I must go
Without regret
Without concern
(Way beyond what I have become
increasingly bothered with.)
(I must burn down the past
and by doing so destroy the present.)
(I must lay waste to all that I know
in order to find something new
and something impossible to those
who know my terrifying truth.)
(Selfish this will all seem
as many will scream for me
to come back
to hold them ever so close.)
(But, above all I must let go
I must set them free
even at the price of their dreams.)
(I must dismantle their bridges
all of their connections to me
so that once I am gone
once time no longer holds me
I, as well as them
will be absolutely free
out to the future
beyond here, beyond now
I must go
without regret, without concern.)
Comments:
I have changed the lines of the poem and tried to make them more expressive and easier to read, enjoy, appreciate and understand.
You are free to reject any of the edits (given in the brackets) and comments.
Great, I do feel happy, well inspired and glad to write a review and I send this sixth (6th) review of your poem which you created and posted on public read and review for about 7 years ago in August, 2012.
Thank you for sharing your excellent poem of living a life with us.
Keep on writing.
by Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber
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