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Review of Paradise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Spiritual Poetry speaks about paradise, to take the poet to the place of his dreams, there is a garden where nightingale sing, where roses and hyacinths bloom, beside fountains of fresh water and honey bees sing their sweet tune; he will listen to the chant of the breeze, intoning Mother Earth’s gratitude for the blessing of God; well said, well done; thanks 4 sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, Keep writing more, fast, time precious, dear good writer, worship month November 534 words/10/03/11/2021/Wed

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Community Prose speaks about DWG Monkeying around, Ninja monkeys and DWG fundraiser team, the work is in progress with a request to stay tuned for more information; well said, well done; thanks 4 sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, Keep writing more, fast, time precious, dear good writer, worship month November 363 Words/04/03/11/2021/Wed

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This 6 Line Poem speaks about journal your entry E: Time of autumn and speaks about autumn the most wonderful time of the year, time for Nature to change colour around, green leaves disappear and leaves of yellow and brown fall to the ground and the beautiful carpet of leaves swirl around and children’s laughter throw them around; well said, well done; thanks 4 sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, Keep writing more, fast, time precious, dear good writer, worship month November
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OT Autumn Write a journal WDC progect 4 (Autumn Write a Journal WdC Project 4 / Write a Journal: Autumn: A WDC Project 4) 690 words/03/11/2021/Wed

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Review of Running  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Poetry speaks experience in living, about feeling of running in state of moments in living, too familiar or common state of mind, man keeps thinking while every moment is running as we feel, as if we keep our mind running, thinking, planning, memorizing events in living; well said, well done; thanks 4 sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, Keep writing more, fast, time precious, dear good writer, worship month November 462 words/02/03/11/2021/Wed


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Review of Lost In My Head  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Poetry speaks about ramblings of a stressed mind, and speaks in a free flow of thoughts about lost in your head, as you lay for sleep in bed, you think at the midnight that you lost many memories, time goes on, season changes, time flies and you continue feel the same state of mind, you fail to keep everything in memories; well said, well done; thanks 4 sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, Keep writing more, fast, time precious, dear good writer, worship month November 525 words/01/03/11/2021/Wed

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Review of The Red Leaf  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Love Poem speaks about red leaf of your heart, for you think, red is like a rose for a prince, so you love red like a red rose of May, red is gentle, red can rest upon grass; well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November
 375 Words/09/02/11/2021/Tue
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Review of The Fool  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This Love Poetry speaks about the fool, a cinquain for all the fools of April out there (Cramp entry for 04/01/2012), like a fool he tricks and pranks not even sparing Ann and on the April Fools’ Day he loses his love forever; well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November
423 words/08/02/11/2021/Tue

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Review of A Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poetry speaks about relationship, learning the unknown, God’s greatest gift to man is learning the mystery of a woman and in the ways to love her in course of living; well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November
354 words/07/02/11/2021/Tue

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem speaks who really needs heels anyway; today you do not feel the need of heels on your feet for you do not need to tug for you are happy with your height as too tall is not required like a new fawn, you do not need to stand slant; well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November
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1) Closer To The Ground ( Closer to the Ground)
513 words/06/02/11/2021/Tue

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Review of Mr keshine  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This educational assignment write up speaks you are a professional writer who is result oriented as you can work with tight deadlines, your teaching methodologies are interactive and inquiry based teaching methods to help your assignments, articles; well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November 456 words/05/02/11/2021/Tue

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Review of Beautiful view  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This community poetry speaks beautiful view as you are sitting at a beautiful view and you expect to make the rest of your lives as beautiful for you view whatever looking at is stunning really, well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November
375 words/04/02/11/2021/Tue

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This dark fiction speaks the experience of living in a visual sign, we all live for moons as there is a dream of death and how you escaped the sign for living that raised a question in your mind for it is true we ignore so many things and our relation with the moons, well said, well done; thank you for sharing, happy reviewing this, God Bless You, dear good writer, write more, fast, keep writing, time precious, November 447 words/01/02/11/2021/Tue

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Review of Marriage  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Family Poetry speaks you never realized how revolting you were until you got married, truly worded in a free flow of thoughts; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..
345 words/03/31/10/21/Sun


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Comedy Poetry speaks about the enemy of the word, a writer’s worst enemy, mostly written for fun; and promises the writer will ever be adrift on a wave with the verb to b; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..

words 376/02/31/10/21/Sun


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Review of Ritual of Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This philosophical poem speaks about ritual of life, simply how a 7 year old attempt penning thought unleashed behind glassy eyes, nothing is permanent, nothing lasts forever, change is compulsory, so is the state of living; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..
435 w/01/31/10/2021/Sun/WL Day

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Right, the philosophy of politics and practice of adult suffrage, voting, right or wrong the tug of wars between the Titans go on and the effect or result continues; Well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 01/30/10/2021 Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Contest Entry Comedy Poetry speaks about a different kind of horse, a horse of a different colour, undoubtedly, you certainly know green would be a different colour for a horse anyway; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..


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A Horse Of A Different Color (A Horse of a Different Color)


501 w/12/29/10/2021/Fri/WLDay
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Review of I Vote  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This political poetry speaks where we all stand in politics, you vote, vote for change, vote for hate, you vote for something you do not know well about, but you vote like all others do, for you know you all are in the same grave, and elect a lie you will defend to keep truth at bay; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..

501 w/11/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day

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Review of Turkey  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Thanksgiving (holiday) Poem speaks about Turkey a bird that waits for thanksgiving in its life and now it is being smelled good for it is being baked in the oven, death fulfils desire; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..


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And it is now smelling good (And it smells good now / And now it smells good)


519 w/10/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day

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Review of Lost in my Mind  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This writing speaks about lost in your mind and you wish to evaluate and self-judge your activities, even if you know living in the past is never anything good, you know and believe you must learn living by your past experience, still you know how hard it is to make a smooth living and you believe you may not come back to reality, and you know reliving in past love is not always good; you know lesson that helps you maintaining a good state of living is good; well said, thank you for sharing this; God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..



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1) Lost in my Mind (Lost in My Mind)

2) my thoughts on minds, please don't be to rough. (My thoughts on mind please do not be too rough.)

3) been so lost in you're mind (been so lost in your mind)

4) its not always safe (it’s not always safe)

5) Everyone gets trapped in there minds, (Everyone gets trapped in his/her mind,)

6) but you yourself is the only one that can control wither it's good or bad. (but you yourself are the only one that can control whether it is good or bad./ control whether or not it’s good or bad.)

1170 w/09/29/10/2021/Wed/WL Day

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Review of Wandering Thought  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This Fantasy Poem speaks eloquently about wandering thought, if a thought could be seen, you could paint a picture as you express in words, often you see and find how life is a challenging task for a living; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..
423 w/08/29/10/21/Fri/WL Day


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This dark dramatic poem speaks you are not a suicidal person, for you are not depressed and you never lay in bed at night imagining ways to end your life and you confidently speak you are neith4r happy nor sad for sometimes you like your own life, still you would rather die, though it is just a feeling of no self-confidence in living and I think you are doubtful about your living a gifted life; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 615 w/07/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This love poem speaks you to be yourself with the poet (he/she) again, for he will hide his feelings for if both of you can just have what you had, and you speak boldly and confidently if you talk to the poet, he will pretend he does not get drunk on just your touch, and he is not affected with your laugh or joke; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 534 w/06/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day

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Review of A Sea of Words  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks about a sea of words, the poet finds his muse in the sea, and appreciates the activities of the sea in appreciation; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious..

04/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day
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Review of love and love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This Love Poem speaks a type of love, love of admiration of something pretty like how people admire the ocean and all its pretty colours and you love her and her pretty colours, though he does not really love her, so he guesses his love is something different as he explains, his love is love though it may be different in explanation; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this; happy to review this, God bless you, my dear writer, wish to read more, keep writing more, more and fast, time is precious.. 555 w/03/29/10/2021/Fri/WL Day


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