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#4877430

Review of Cushion Fort

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi J D

Impression: I don't know what is the funniest part about this clip art. The obvious gag in the image, how the characters are drawn are hilarious or the fact that the line in the clip art about the cushion fort is so relatable! lol I built them as a kid. So did my husband.

What I loved: Everything about this clip art is great! The imagery used, the funny gag line from the speaker off camera...this is classic brilliance in all of its glory.

What needs work: I did not see anything that needed rework or editing.

Final thoughts: Fantastic image and perfect for many uses. Very much enjoyed viewing this work.

Can't wait to view more work from you.

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#4877241

Review of Class Exercise

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi J D

Impression: This review is for the hilarious submission of a child's paper submitted to a teacher the child didn't "get along with" and the roasts from this child are inspired comedy gold.
The beginning leads with a simple "name three types" exercise that ends in "ool" and this cheeky child just cannot hold back their cynicism in this entire piece. Solid well crafted and a joy to read...can't get enough, that's for sure.

What I loved: I loved this child's complete honesty and the everlasting roast of his teacher is one for the FUNNY books! I laughed so much out loud that, I hope, others will ask me what is making me "roll" with joy and I this was just a fantastic single layered writing. It is a great time when you can read through a work and just laugh and laugh. I am sure that whoever is in charge will adjust their lives just to interact with one another more.

What needs work:Nothing needs rework or editing.

Final thoughts: What a fun, cheeky laugh out loud fest for the eyes and minds as we head into the end of this week. The child’s “honest” answers—like listing the six words already printed on the worksheet—land as a perfect little wink to anyone who's ever dealt with literal thinkers. And when asked to use one of the words in a sentence, his bold declaration that “my teacher is a fool” is the kind of cheeky punchline that makes the whole setup worth it. He technically earns a perfect score, but that after‑class meeting says everything. Great comedy clip!

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#4877003

Review of Mining Strovon

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

Hi PureSciFi

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry is being reviewed for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: This story of a Punk feeling world where coal or other precious metals are mined on the dystopian planet of Strovon, where the harder you work, the work only gets harder and your family gains little from your work, it felt a bit hopeless in a hopeful world.

You’ve got the bones of a compelling story here, and honestly, the setting alone does a lot of heavy When I read, “It’s very hard living on Stovon” this immediately signaled a world that’s unforgiving, maybe even a little bleak, and that really catches the eyes. But the real emotional anchor is the miner with a family. That detail shifts the idea from a general hardship to a personal one, and that’s where your story shines, though their "leaders", the Comnons are irrational and heartless.

Mining already carries connotations of danger, exhaustion, and sacrifice. Put that on a planet like Stovon—harsh climate, unstable ground, maybe corporate exploitation—and you’ve got a pressure cooker. The family element adds stakes beyond survival: relationships strained by long shifts, missed milestones, the constant fear never mining enough metals with leaders who won't help though they know their help is necessary.

Let the planet feel like a character—one that pushes back. That tension between human determination and planetary hostility could make your narrative unforgettable.

What I loved: What works especially well is the simplicity of the premise. The Strovons were overworked and refused to work in a dangerous conditions. They basically put their lives on the line daily for the minerals, and it became the same threat they stood upon when they refused to work. Help us, as you promised or we refuse to work in these conditions. I felt the insistence for fairness in a world where fairness failed to exist.

What needs work: I did not see any place where your writing needed improvement.

Final thoughts: Your story really tapped into a bleak place where honest themes and family were no longer respected or upheld. That tension between human determination and planetary hostility really worked to make your story memorable for me.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4877002

Review of Traitor - 女叛客

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi LightinMind

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "Traitor", is being reviewed for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: In your story where the main protagonist Xiao Tian lives by the montage: the best way to stay hidden is to look completely normal. She lived by this and thrived day by day. Until today. This tense interactions in a Punk themed world where death is always hiding in plain sight, it already carries that gritty punk pulse.

A female with enhancements fighting desperately not to get caught in “the web” — that phrase really catches the mood of this story. It feels like a world where surveillance is practically a religion, and stepping out of line makes you instantly disposable.

Labeling her a “TRAITOR” the moment they “see” her gives the story a built‑in urgency. Readers can feel the chase before it even begins. I felt so tense as I read through this short foray into this awful world.

What works especially well is the emotional tension baked into the premise. She’s not only just running from danger; she’s running from a system that wants to erase her. That’s classic punk storytelling: rebellion against a machine that insists on conformity.

You also have room to explore her internal world. Does she have enhancements that make her a threat, or is she simply different in a way the system can’t tolerate?

What I loved: The idea of being “tracked for death” once identified adds a brutal clarity to the stakes. There’s no courtroom, no negotiation — just a target on her back. That kind of simplicity can make the narrative punchy and fast, which fits the genre beautifully. You really leaned into this idea for the genre prompt and never let go. I really enjoyed this!

What needs work: There is no part of your story that needs rework or editing.

Final thoughts: This story really fleshed out the cyberpunk/biopunk theme and never strayed away from it. Punk stories thrive on characters who refuse to be flattened, and she definitely was like someone who’d rather burn out than bow down. She realized at the end her fate but this was the life she'd chosen to be in.

This was definitely one of the best versions of the theme for me.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4877001

Review of Atomic Miracle

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi damonnomad

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "Atomic Miracle", is being reviewed for the"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month. Thanks for entering!

Impression: Your story felt as though it immersed itself into the time that mirrored the Punk genre and embraced it for its own. It's the story of man who lives a successful life chasing the dreams,achieving the impossible all due to his grandfather's training and influence.

The heart of the idea — a young man raised on his grandfather’s wild tales of a real‑time past‑capturing time machine — already gives the story emotional weight. It’s not just about technology; it’s about legacy, belief, and the blurry line between myth and invention.

The moment he learns of his grandfather’s passing and his inheritance on the same day is a strong narrative pivot. It’s a gut punch paired with a spark of possibility. Readers will feel that mix of grief and curiosity right alongside him. That’s a powerful emotional cocktail, and it sets the stage for a story that can explore both loss and discovery without ever slowing down.

What I loved: What works especially well is the central question: Was the old man a dreamer or a genius? That tension the reader to muse over this as part of the world you've created. You’ve also built in a natural character arc — the young man must decide whether to dismiss the stories he grew up on or step into them. This is the real theme for this story and you really leaned into expertly from start to finish.Great job!

What needs work: No part of your story needs rework or editing.

Final thoughts:This story really stood out to me as one of the better uses of the Punk theme from the submissions. I really enjoyed the idea of holding on, even so lightly, to the ideas from a brilliant grandparent that filled their grandchild's head with time travel dreams that could come true.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4877000

Review of The Brass King.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi kadenkoker is Jon Snow

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "The Brass King", is being reviewed for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.

Thanks for entering!

Impression: This story has excitement and mystery from the beginning. With the frightened cry, "The Brass King is Dead!" you are drawn into this harrowing story of metal, mechanics and intrigue.

What I loved: I loved the stoic vision of the main protagonist, Dakmund, as he navigated through rampage of an mobile array of machinery that never left its place in the depths beneath the city. Now, this machinery, called the Brass King, is suddenly animated and has a mind to destroy the town it protected with its entire existence. When the Master Engineer Beldrin is found dead in front of the Brass king, not a mark upon his person, and you know that this story is really going places.

I really was enamored with excitement, in its silent cry, as this energized this story for me

What needs work: I did not see many areas that needed rework in this story.

Final thoughts: In a world of engineers, machinists and laborers, this has to be such a tongue in cheek story where the most obvious answer evades while chaos reigns. How quiet and deliberate is sensibility in calmness of mind, and this truly reigned in the end. I thought this story made great work with the idea of the theme of Punk throughout the story. I felt as though I were in a grey, dystopian place where the drink was always liquor and the air filled with steam.

I truly your work and wish you well in the contest.

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

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#4876999

Review of By A Thread

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Sumojo

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "By A Thread", is being reviewed for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: This story was written and never lost sight of the theme Punk throughout the story.

What I loved: Zak, as an old Punk devotee, is instantly compelling. He’s someone who lived the movement when it was raw, loud, and unapologetically messy, and now he’s trying to figure out whether Punk still has a pulse or if it’s just nostalgia keeping the lights on.

The story’s emotional engine is Zak’s uncertainty. That quiet ache of wondering whether the world moved on without him gives the narrative a relatable, almost tender edge. Punk is supposed to be loud, but Zak’s doubt is quiet — and that contrast works beautifully. Zak finds comfort in his community of Punk devotees and this keeps him moving forward.

I loved the use of a young girl dancing alone at a Punk party as she symbolizes the energy of the movement. This is a smart choice. She’s not a lecture, she’s not a symbol shoved in the reader’s face; she’s just a moment. A flash of energy. The kind of thing that makes someone like Zak stop and think, Maybe it’s not dead. Maybe it just looks different now. The documenting of her in photographs is part preservation, part hope, part proof that the culture is still alive and kicking.

What needs work: There is nothing from your story that needs rework or editing.

Final thoughts: What a wonderful take on the Punk theme and really adding to the thoughtful side of this theme with some love of life theme and a loving air of defiance maintained with thoughtful cultivation. I truly enjoyed your story!

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4876997

Review of Imagination

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi D. Reed Whittaker

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "Imagination", is being reviewed for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: Your story really leans into the idea of Punk and all things that this thing holds dear and true. I was truly impressed with the idea as it melded with this story prompt.

What works especially well is how the Punk theme threads through the idea. Punk isn’t just leather jackets and loud guitars; it’s defiance, questioning systems, pushing against limits.

Here, the “system” is the boundary between human creativity and machine logic. The professor is the old‑school rebel, still believing in chaos, dreams, and contradiction. The AI is the new generation, hungry for something it was never built to have.

Their dynamic feels like a quiet, intellectual version of a mosh pit — ideas colliding, boundaries shaking.

The story also raises great questions about what imagination even is. The assistant can process everything, analyze everything, recall everything — but it can’t leap. It can’t wander.

What I loved: A professor tasked with “giving” imagination to his AI assistant is already a compelling setup, but the emotional core really lands in that exchange where the assistant asks, Why can’t I dream? That question hits with surprising weight, and it echoes beautifully through the rest of the story. The professor's response when asked why the AI was incapable of doing a certain thing and the professor's response of "I wasn't smart enough to give this to you" is both heartbreaking and humble at the same time.

What needs work: Nothing from your story needs rework or editing.

Final thoughts: This story is wonderful in that it blends thought provoking concepts here that weigh philosophy, rebellion and a touch of melancholy at the same time. It truly is wonderful to read.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4876995

Review of The Hive

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hi Stumpy

"Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "The Hive", is being reviewed for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" [E] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: This story ended on the idea that was posed from start to finish: This is exactly the kind of energy a Punk‑themed story thrives on: pushing back against limits and refusing to be grounded. These women knew they had the skills and the grit necessary, so they ended up helping with the war effort.

The idea of four women chosen and trained by another woman during the war effort is rich with narrative potential. It’s not just about aviation; it’s about empowerment in a time when women were expected to stay on the ground. The twist that only one of them actually learns to operate the drone adds a nice layer of realism — skill doesn’t always distribute evenly — but the fact that all of them learn to fly keeps the emotional arc intact.

They grow together, they rise together, and they contribute in ways the world never expected.

What I loved: As long as you have your wings, you will always be pilots! I thought this was a brilliant touch and it really resonates with this idea that "once you ride a bike, you always know how to ride" and these women will never have this knowledge removed no matter where life lead them. They know this now for the rest of their lives.

What needs work: Nothing from your story needs editing or rework.

Final thoughts:This story worked so well because it is the blend of courage and vulnerability. These women aren’t superheroes; they’re determined, scared, hopeful, and stubborn — which makes them feel wonderfully human. They're rebels, leaders, pilots and whatever their lives chose to lead them to. What a great story and I am so pleased you shared this for the contest.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4849124

Review of Secret Santa Cnotes

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi, Legerdemain

This is just a quick review for your Secret Santa CNote service!

Impression: This is a great Secret Santa C note service! I thought the images used a festive and fit nicely with the holiday season.

It’s an excellent option for anyone who wants to send meaningful holiday greetings while saving time and personalizing the template provided by Leger's C-note service.

I greatly appreciate the ease of use and would definitely point others to Leger's Secret Santa every year for the best service around!

What I loved: These C notes offer a surprisingly heartfelt way to share holiday cheer without the usual stress of searching through other Christmas Cnote shops; yours is the best of the lot. What stands out most is how easy it is to create something that feels personal. I usually shy away from sending Cnote but yours are easy to use and the cost to value ratio is very high.

What needs work: There isn't anything in this CNote shop that requires editing or rework. Very enjoyable CNote service.

Final thoughts: The result is a simple, elegant, and surprisingly personal way to stay connected during the Christmas season. I'm so glad that I stopped your Cnote shop and used this service to send a Christmas Cnote to a friend.

Thank you and Merry Christmas!

Adore lol♥

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#4831371

Review of FROM JELEE'S JOURNAL

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | (4.0)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi Apondia

"I am reviewing your story, "From Jelee's Journal, as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

.Thanks for entering!"

Impression: Your short story is a very interesting take on the idea of a revolution. There is the idea of some abuse of the horse families and the efforts to recover from these environmental disruptions. When the three horse families looked at the efforts to curtail this abuse, they found the answer in the form of a humanoid name Jelee. By commandeering her from one planet to the next, they can turn the entire stiuation around: revolution. Unconventional use but it works for this very expansive take on the idea.

What I loved: I love a surprise and I think this story is full of surprises and a twist or two.

What needs work: There is nothing that needs rework in this story.

Final thoughts: The answer to where's Jelee is hidden within the story, within her journal and I hope you don't blush when you find the answer there.
Great story and all the best for the contest.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4831369

Review of In the Jaws of the Dragon

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi LightinMind

"I am reviewing your story as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

]. Thanks for entering!"

Impression: For your new short story submission, the tale of Chinese Empress whose army fought to retain Chinese rule when Christian missionaries attempted to infiltrate China with their Western ways and ideals, was fought against with desperate energy as her China changed, the old ways whimpered into a ghost breeze.

What I loved: I really enjoyed detail in the character descriptions, as the scene was set for the revolution to commence. In various places, different players all attempt to assuage the flood pushed the revolution forward and the Empress left her country never to rule again.

What needs work: Nothing in this story needs rework.

Final thoughts: The momentum that pushed the Chinese church forward and upward was stalwart and strong. The desire for change and the manpower involved supported the upheaval that revolutionized a nation at the turn of the century. Wonderful story that truly evoked all elements of revolution for this contest.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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Adore lol♥

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#4831368

Review of Revolution Starts Now

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi Angdea Macabre Shalom

"I am reviewing your story," Revolution Starts Now", as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

]. Thanks for entering!"

Impression: This is the story of a young girl Daisy who is frustrated at a life that seems to repeat itself with nothing different taking place. One day, she thinks she reads the words, "Revolution starts now", in the sky, prompting her to think on revolting to take not only her life but the lives of those who were enslaved by factory work. She decides to do things with changes, and the rest is history.

What I loved: I love the story where a little bit of change just reverses a lot of damage and time. There is so much hope in that thought to me.

What needs work: There is nothing that needs rework in this story.

Final thoughts: Daisy knows she might be the impetus to change for those around her, if she just decides to do things differently. What a wonderful thought and with that, a hopeful story for this contest.

Best wishes for the contest!

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4831367

Review of A Quiet Revolution

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi Sumojo

"I am reviewing your story, "A Quiet Revolution", as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

]. Thanks for entering!"

Impression: For your story which tells the story of a character named Russell who embarks on his own quiet revolution that changes so much in his life. His life is carrying on without a real direction or sense of meaning when one day, this changes for the better.

What I loved: I loved this from the last line in this story: "It's despair that is ruining our community." When a group sees no way out, then they begin to doubt why do anything if none of it amounts to any good? The story shifted when Russell found friend, which meant friendship and camaraderie, not solitude. There's a reason God said in the Garden "it's not good for Man to be alone".

What needs work: There is nothing in this story that needs rework.

Final thoughts: Main thoughts of hold on to hope and don't despair over you life, and you will continue on. You might, even, start a revolution of one.

Great story and best wishes for the contest.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4831365

Review of The Day the Paint Ran

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Rated: E | (4.5)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi WriterRick

"I am reviewing your story as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

]. Thanks for entering!"

Impression: For your short story, you introduce the idea of revolution that grew, as a slow, quiet burn, from many years of broken promises, community dreams left unrealized, hopes for a better tomorrow, only for a few, that rises slowly from the quiet push of solidarity towards a united design. And all from painted words on an abandoned business to an aim that continued to grow.

What I loved: I really enjoyed the dialogue between the two main characters, both who casually knew one another from high school; lives that touched but never intertwined until it really mattered.

What needs work: There is nothing in this story that needs rework.

Final thoughts: The goal seems daunting but the insistence towards a better place to call home through shared action just thrills the soul. It is wonderful to not only talk about an idea but to change where you live through your own actions for good.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4831362

Review of YaVont's Bovic

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
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Hi PureSciFi

"I am reviewing your story, "YaVont's Bovic", as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

]. Thanks for entering!"

Impression: In your short story a Leader called YaVont on an alternate planet, not Earth, uses harsh methods to maintain control and dominance over Bovicians. Once this character learned of talk of revolution, he used harsh methods to quell talks of revolution and also to ensure he'd remain in power. WillLina, his right hand, confirmed with him that they exercised a "show of power" no one would ever try to remove them from their powerful positions.

What I loved: I loved how you used the story prompt with ease in your story body and as the theme throughout this tale.

What needs work: Nothing needs rework in this story.

Final thoughts: When you want to drive any possible contenders back, all you need is to show how powerful you really are and they won't test the electric fence again. The electric fence shocks the hands, and its a shock you're not soon to forget.
Really enjoyed your story and best wishes in the contest.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4831361

Review of In the Garden of the Heart... a Dream.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

Hi Kåre เลียม Enga

"I am reviewing your story, "In the Garden of the Heart...a Dream", as a judge for

"Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

].Thanks for entering!"

Impression: What is great about your story is how it outlines the thoughts, metaphorically, of not the person, but a place where a revolution of spirit and community comes together in the midst of a history of death and destruction.

What I loved: I loved the seemingly effortless manner in which this is conveyed to the reader through interspersed highlights of the various community member's contribution to insisting on a peaceful gathering.

What needs work: I really didn't see any part that needed work.

Final thoughts: This short story really has a good hold on the idea of revolution but not the kind that stirs up war or active defiance. It's the revolution of community, understanding, and a peaceful togetherness.

Evil cannot stand against good, and this truly shows it.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4803935

Review of I Hope You Dance

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

Hi Thankful Sonali Happy 26 WDC!

I am reviewing your entry, "I Hope you Dance" as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: Well, for starters, I must congratulate you on your Dear Me 2025 entry as this is a difficult thing for many to do, myself included, and here you are with this thoughtful ,and encouraging reflection on your life's movement from 2024 and onward.

What I loved: You know, to take on this idea that you should keep mirth in your life, and dance, not a literal interpretation but just to keep enjoying your life as you live it, dance through the hills and the valleys of your life, well, this is a great idea. And I think you are definitely on track to achieve the goals you've set for this coming year too!

What needs work: Nothing needs rework in this letter.

Final thoughts: Life has thrown you a few curveballs this past year, as you self disclosed but you are staying focused and have a sharp focus on staying on goal. How important this is to the achieving the success of these goals you outlined for this year, but I think you totally understand this to be true.

Cheers to you, and hope you continue to dance!

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#4803931

Review of Dear Me 2025

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi ♥tHiNg♥

I am reviewing your entry, "Dear Me 2025" as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
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Impression: I am struck by this amazing feeling that I am in the presence of age and wisdom as I read your Dear Me 2025 letter.

I wished to congratulate you on your entry but I understand that this is a necessary part of moving daily and positively in your life. Because of this necessity, we gain on the other side with so much insight in the truths of our lives.

It is true you cannot plan to far as you age because life tends to rear its head and a wave will wash your plans so far off shore that you are just grateful that you remain once you can get your bearings.

What I loved: Your ten item list is a gift in its simplicity and brevity. Though it seem short, it is encompasses a large portion of the daily repitions of life. I think that this is so important and you outline this in a great and achievable way.

What needs work: Nothing in this work needs editing.

Final thoughts: I am truly encouraged by your willingness to continue to do in the face of loss, impactful loss in your life. You've chosen to move and do, while you could choose the alternative, and be in your right to do so. Yet, again, I am encouraged, and I do believe others will be, through your insistance to live and do.

I do appreciate you!♥

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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Review of Dear Me 2025!

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Spirit^Writer 🦋📜

I am reviewing your entry, "Dear Me 2025", as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: To begin, I would like to congratulate you on your successful entry to the Dear Me New Year letter to ones self, which I see as an achievement in itself. I'd also want to say that I love the energy and clarity in your goal setting letter. You've nailed the balance between ambition and practicality, which is so key for sticking with goals over time.

What I loved: Your letter outlines some specific items to focus on, some writing you must do to reach your self imposed deadline and by giving end dates, there is specificity to the goals. These are sure to be reached this year...with laser focus and the will to complete.

What needs work: There is nothing in your entry that needs rework.

Final thoughts: You've built a roadmap for success that is structured and defined. This will be a transformative year for you. Remember, progress aims at perfection but if a goal slips, adjust the timeline for added needs - it is YOUR plan.

I'm cheering for you that you will make 2025 that productive year that you spoke of in your letter.

And remember, I appreciate you!

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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#4803925

Review of Dear Me

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi GERVIC

I am reviewing your entry, "Dear Me", as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: Let me begin with offering my congrats to you for your Dear Me 2025 entry. Major kudos to you for putting together this thoughtful plan - it's clear you're putting together your plan with intention and heart. This important step moved you in a definite direction for starting your goals completion for 2025.

What I loved: I enjoyed how you focusing on health and balance in your goal setting. And with hydration and sleep in your plan - it's the Chef's kiss. Your future self will thank you for those 7 - 8 hours rest.
Now, on to spiritual health. This part really impacted me. Carving out the time for reflection, meditation, or whatever fills your soul is so important. Next, we talk about finanacial health. Budgeting and saving can really feel daunting but you're already winning by naming this a priority. Also remember, small steps lead up.

What needs work: There is no need for rework.

Final thoughts: Your letter to you sounds confident and self sufficient, and I'm here for it! My advice though is celebrate tiny wins. Oh, and win life gets chaotic (because it will), revisit this letter. It's your North Star.

Go back and remember how you got here and celebrate the journey.

Oh, yes...I appreciate you!

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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#4803922

Review of Resolution of Reimagination

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi Elisa the Melting Stik

I am reviewing your entry, "Resolution of Reimagination", as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: Let me begin sending a congrats your way for your Dear Me 2025 entry for the contest. That is one of the first steps to establishing some thought towards goals that need outlining and a dates for start/end. Your 2025 goals - this plan is like a cozy blanket of intentionally maixed with a dash of ambition. Love this vibe so much!

You've got some strategic goals that involve your cybersecurity and networking expertise and how to continuously stay up to date on these rapid changes within this ever evolving field. Your social media goals while aiming for intended engagement without the mindless scrolling that can eat up so much of your time (and energy). You're going for progress, not perfection.

What I loved: What I loved was your insistence in more community engagement here at Writing.com. As you manage many different activities, always keep track of your limits and set up gentle boundaries to guard against this in your journey.

Make sure you listen to your energy levels and stay mindful of when you need to decline any more duties.

What needs work:

Final thoughts: Your 2025 blueprint is all about growth without grind. It's okay to adjust as you go - life's a draft, nothing is chistled in stone. Keep your curiosity alive, lean into what lights you up, and trust that small steps add up.

Here's to a year of learning, creating and thriving - on your own terms.

Know this...I appreciate you.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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#4803917

Review of Dear Me 2025

Review by Adore lol♥

In affiliation with The Soundtrackers Group

Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi StephBee

I am reviewing your entry, "Dear Me 2025", as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: I just want to start with a congrats for your 2025 Dear Me entry for this year's contest. You know you entered, and not many people delved in, and organized thoughts to arrange a idea for their letter but you did. And what a creative turn your story took! :D

So, let's take a peek at your 2025 goals - because, wow, you've packed into this with ambition, growth, and a whole lot of heart. I'm already cheering for you.

We'll begin with personal growth - Keep rocking that progress with your weight loss journey, one healthy choice at a time. Remember, it's not about perfection - it's about consistency. Celebrate the small wins (hello, veggie-packed meals and post-walk endorphins). Remember to treat yourself with the kindness you deserve.

Spiritual goals- Carve out moments for spiritual reflection, prayer, or whatever fuels your soul. Think of it as mental yoga - stretching your spirit to stay grounded, grateful and ready to shine.

Cryto Currency goals - Time to geek out on blockchain basics. Dive into the podcasts, YouTube tutorials, or a beginner's course. No pressure - just soak up the knowledge and enjoy the ride.

5 Book Challenge - Whether it's a swoon worthy Shana Galen romance or a memoir that makes you laugh/cry, let those pages transport you to hidden places for adventure.

Writing.com goals - Daily visits, forum fun, Anniversary and Angel Army reviews, Newsletter goals for adding more value to your interactions on Writing.com, you plan to fill up most of your days with work, community and connections.

There are publication goals for 2025 that involve you finishing final edits, publishing those edited works, going over a nearly finished work and utilizing more marketing infomation to broaden your knowledge base to make you even more formidable.

What I loved: I loved that you stacked your goal sheet so much that even a summary of the goal list with a few words is just a small glimpse into the workload you are setting up for yourself. But it will definitely keep your life full and fun.

What needs work: Nothing from your writing needs rework.

Final thoughts: This is your year to grow, to create and to thrive. Some days will feel effortless; others might need a little extra coffee (or chocolate). But remember, - every tiny step counts. You're building a life you love, one goal at a time. I can feel it. You're going so far this year.

And remember...I appreciate you.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

I enjoyed reading and reviewing your work today. Take or leave what you wish. Keep writing.

Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4803914

Review of Dear Me

Review by Adore lol♥

In affiliation with The Soundtrackers Group

Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Marvelous Friend

I am reviewing your entry, "Dear Me", as a judge for

"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

. Thanks for entering!

Impression: I just want to begin with a congratulations on your Dear Me 2025 entry, as this is a start of a journey into new things. Just want to give you a high five for setting such thoughtful, meaningful goals for 2025. Healthier eating, daily movement, along with dedicating time to reflect through your journals? You're not just building healthier habits - you're investing in a happier, more balanced version of yourself. That just sounds like fantastic goal setting.

What I loved: I just loved that you observed that you needed to eat healthir and set out to develop a goal for the new year that would address this in your life. And you identified that you wanted to start the habit of daily exercise. By beginning it now, in June of this year, you will be surely in a six month stretch of improved physical health.
When you create your diet journal, it will help to document the development of change in your life and it will show the journey you've made along the months to better health.
Lastly, I love the prayer journal. Whether its gratitude, reflection or spiritual connection, a prayer journal is a heart to heart with yourself (and maybe a higher power). It's a space to air out your concerns, celebrate the joys or just to breathe. Little moments of mindfulness add up to big inner peace.

What needs work: There is nothing in this entry that needs rework.

Final thoughts: I really think you are definitely on the right path to success this year. But remember: if you get off track, don't consider this a failure; they are part of the journey. Forgive yourself. Adjust what isn't working and know that with a steady focus, you'll get back on track.

You're not just making resolutions - you're building a lifestyle change. And that is worth cheering for. Here's to your year of growth, grace...cheers to your best year yet!

And know that I appreciate you!

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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#4788077

Review of Voices

Review by Adore lol♥

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi Thankful Sonali Happy 26 WDC!

"Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"
Official Judge's Review

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Your entry, "Voices", is being reviewed for the "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" [ASR] contest for this month.
Thanks for entering!

Impression: Your short story of a woman who chooses to live alone and has been alone since both parents passed on at age 17, she's grown used to the quiet. However, she doesn't mind if she adds mechanical sounds, just noises to help fill the void, the space while she lives in her home. After she is alone, on her first night, some weird things start happening..but she sees a trend, a theme from a movie seen by millions of families. She will unmask whoever is pranking her house, invading her life...and the game is afoot.

What I loved: I thought this story did a good job with showing a differnt minded woman who won't be driven from the home she's bought but only has a mind to unmask the offender. Good going for her!

What needs work: Nothing needs rework.

Final thoughts: I definitely found myself on the sofa cheering for this character and I'm sure instead of running screaming away, the ghost or person who is trying to drive her away will find themselves homeless instead. This determined story will be a great read that I hope you enjoy as much as I did.

"Noticing Newbies" [13+]

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Thanks for your entry and best wishes in the contest.

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