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Review of Dogs and Canes  
Review by Mr. Z
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Cute story, but no real mystery, especially for anyone who has handled dogs. I actually remember seeing a similar story line in a Columbo movie years ago. Still, it's always good to see someone using a murder weapon other than a gun. Keep writing, I especially liked the first paragraph and the description of the cane.

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Review by Mr. Z
Rated: ASR | (2.0)
While I like the idea of a puzzle, it's very confusing. I can't seem to figure out any of the clues, and I'm usually fairly good at this kind of stuff. I would also be interested in finding out the answers and the method of logic one should use to solve this puzzle. That information is not available.

I like the idea of the story. The facts were clearly laid out. Still, it's more of a puzzle without any way of finding an answer, which leaves me feeling cheated for reading a mystery without a solution. A good idea, but probably a few more clues to guide the reader would improve the story.
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Review by Mr. Z
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the gumshoe style and thought parts of it were good. It seemed more like a parody than anything else. But I had no connection to any of the characters, no empathy. There was no real mystery for me, nothing to challenge me or tempt to try to figure out who was the killer. It was okay, but just not my cup of tea.
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