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Review of the complexity of simplicity.  

Review by nadhila_adaniMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Marion!

I like the title of your poem. Very interesting.
Oh, And I like these lines:Life is only the perception of life;
life doesn’t exist if you don’t believe in it.
I totally agree!

But I don't quite understand what you mean by:so in turn the smartest people are the ones who fail.

And I think the ending needs to be put a little more surprising (or catchy) words.
Because I couldn't really catch the feeling of the last line..

But overall, I liked it.
You really have the potential..

Write On!