I am reviewing your poem: 'CONQUER THE SELF'
Description: A quartain with four stanzas showing the character becoming more introspective as he gets matured.
Meaning/Expression: A sapient message from someone that has first played freely as a child and as a grown person fought injustices. The author finally realizes it is of more honor and worth to fight the evil within.
Mood: Amusing, Inspirational
Tone: Instructive and Earnest
Style: Written in the ballad stanza format, excellent flow, simple vocabulary!