Description: A quartain with four stanzas showing the character becoming more introspective as he gets matured.
Meaning/Expression: A sapient message from someone that has first played freely as a child and as a grown person fought injustices. The author finally realizes it is of more honor and worth to fight the evil within.
Mood: Amusing, Inspirational
Tone: Instructive and Earnest
Style: Written in the ballad stanza format, excellent flow, simple vocabulary!
A quartet with three stanzas, this poem expresses autumn blessings through colors. Beautifully written with a nice fellow.
Surprising in the sense which the writer chose what each of the colors represent. Such as red standing for faithfulness instead of the usual fire and blood or energy. And Yellow representing praise instead of the usual freshness of caution. The author also uses a few words in repetition such as brilliant/brilliance. The repeated use of 'blessing' is quite rhythmical.
A poem that comes in three stanzas with no punctuation, dives into the fear of being left alone by the one's lover. The Rhythm flows nicely!
Abstract ideas such as special moments are mirrored with images of garden of silences where the lovers speak to their fullest.
The writer alternates between the counteractive and the good in terms of the need to never be left alone. In a couple of lines, we are shown the character can't take care of him/herself, is afraid of dying alone 'buried beneath the dark sand'. We are also shown the struggle to not let all the feelings and tears out. On the not so gloomy side, we are painted the picture of sun rises and holding hands.
A poem about uncertainties of life, making us drifters without a choice! The writer also draws our attention to the extremities of life again and again. The final line indicates acceptance of the workings of the universe. Excellent flow, easy vocabulary!
The poem portrays a numbness, hoplessness and may be depression that is felt due to a break-up. The way it is redundant and plain, letting the reader sink into the numb and bare ugly feeling!
Nostalgic, deep, strong vocabulary! I wonder if the 12th line beginning with 'Moonrise too' has a spelling error with 'too', or just a double and deeper meaning.
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