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Review of Things Were Good  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great alternate rhyme poem. The vocabulary is simple, the flow is smooth and the message well passed!!
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Review of New Age Terms  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting collection of terms here! It is well written, the only feedback I have is on the title as it can be misleading. New age refers to an alternative spiritual movement to the traditional western religion. I thought the terms would be 'Gaia' or 'consciousness'. Millenial terms may be more suited.


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Review of CONQUER THE SELF  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings,

I am reviewing your poem: 'CONQUER THE SELF'

Description: A quartain with four stanzas showing the character becoming more introspective as he gets matured.

Meaning/Expression: A sapient message from someone that has first played freely as a child and as a grown person fought injustices. The author finally realizes it is of more honor and worth to fight the evil within.

Mood: Amusing, Inspirational

Tone: Instructive and Earnest

Style: Written in the ballad stanza format, excellent flow, simple vocabulary!


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Review of The Warrior  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.5)
Description: Beautifully written free verse poem!

Meaning/Expression: A battle between a warrioress and the character which ends in the character losing and his heart changing to evil.

Tone: Serious and mournful

Style: Personification of the characters as warriors and demon. Great balance of abstraction and imagery!



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Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.0)
Description: An emotional quartet with two stanzas

The meaning: is hard to say! Incredible beauty being washed away through time and forgetfulness and becoming ill favored.

Vocabulary and tools: The poet uses rather poetic and at times difficult vocabulary such as 'tootlish child' which seems to serve some sort of Simile.

Tone: Regretful!

Theme: Beauty


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Review of Autumn Blessings  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A quartet with three stanzas, this poem expresses autumn blessings through colors. Beautifully written with a nice fellow.

Surprising in the sense which the writer chose what each of the colors represent. Such as red standing for faithfulness instead of the usual fire and blood or energy. And Yellow representing praise instead of the usual freshness of caution. The author also uses a few words in repetition such as brilliant/brilliance. The repeated use of 'blessing' is quite rhythmical.


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Review of Scared Soul  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.5)
A poem that comes in three stanzas with no punctuation, dives into the fear of being left alone by the one's lover. The Rhythm flows nicely!

Abstract ideas such as special moments are mirrored with images of garden of silences where the lovers speak to their fullest.

The writer alternates between the counteractive and the good in terms of the need to never be left alone. In a couple of lines, we are shown the character can't take care of him/herself, is afraid of dying alone 'buried beneath the dark sand'. We are also shown the struggle to not let all the feelings and tears out. On the not so gloomy side, we are painted the picture of sun rises and holding hands.


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Review of All of me  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.5)
A poem about uncertainties of life, making us drifters without a choice! The writer also draws our attention to the extremities of life again and again. The final line indicates acceptance of the workings of the universe. Excellent flow, easy vocabulary!


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Review of Nothing  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem portrays a numbness, hoplessness and may be depression that is felt due to a break-up. The way it is redundant and plain, letting the reader sink into the numb and bare ugly feeling!


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Review of Forgotten dreams  
Review by Naferet Hotep
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nostalgic, deep, strong vocabulary! I wonder if the 12th line beginning with 'Moonrise too' has a spelling error with 'too', or just a double and deeper meaning.
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