|Quite enganging. Got me curious when someone had to die. I'm wondering though, why does the charecter have no gender ? If the charecter is telling the story , does that mean they didn't die ? Is he (May make him male?) now a ghost, telling others how he died? hahahhah! That would be awesome!
I love your wrting style . I felt a bit of what he must've felt. The terror of being forever traped in a grave until he dies . Awareof his situation. I can't think of a worse torture .
What if , it was what the government wanted all along though? It's the government , they've done worse! LOL Okay, so you've left me with a lot of theories now , thank you , that ought to keep my brain busy. I'm honestly not sure how I feel about how this left me hanging. But that shows you're good, if you can get your reader's emotions involved like that.
carefl though , not everyone wants to read a story with an uncertain ending . Most read because they'd like to know the ending because they are uncertain about their own . So they go and read about someone else's
Overall good work though.