I shall say a very different topic choosen for a story.
A well versed story of young people messed up due to drugs.
I beleive that your narrative and characterization is quiet impressive and you can make it more better.You have very carefully dwelled in the lives and thinking process of drug addicts.
Anyways very nice story and kept it up.
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