Nicely written. There is no such thing as a bad writer, if you ask me. Writing is a reflection of a person's ideas and views. If I don't agree with those views, it doesn't mean that the writer is incapable. This can be motivation for every budding writer. One should never leave writing, ever!
I'll not comment on the technicalities of the poem, because I'm not worthy to make such comments. I like the idea of this poem, the element of choice is there, or is it? If you ask me, choice is usually no more than an illusion. In majority of our decisions, there is no choice. That's just my opinion, but I like the way you have presented yours!
I get the feeling that you didn't proofread your work. There are a few grammatical errors (I think).
Overall, it's a good effort. I had fun reading this. Cheers :)
A good read overall. Being an introvert myself, I can relate to quite a bit of happenings in the text. I completely agree with the happenings in the first two paragraphs. The third paragraph, I feel, goes a bit too far. In my opinion, introverts are not dependent on an individual to the extent which has been represented here. Some introverts try to keep distance from even their best friends, because they like solitude more. Also, in my opinion, introverts never show their dependence on an individual, even if it exists. Therefore, I feel that the third paragraph is a bit...dramatic. Other than that, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
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