Hummm sounds like this once was a beautiful city that is no longer beautiful because someone wrecks it or tried to destroy it and the writer sounds very upset about this fact and wants revenge although the best revenge maybe to build and store the city butter than ever before.Thanks for your share.
So far so good liking it hope it gets more dramatic and interesting in the reads to follow. You definitely got my attention and I am invested enough where I want to see what happens next.The imagery in the story is done well you get a pretty view in your minds eye of what’s taking place.Thanks for your share.
Like it it’s a good start to what could be a great story,thanks for your share.I think I want to find out what happens your writing made that possible.I like the fantasy stuff anyway so this was kind of a easy read because the interest is there.This was an enjoyable read.
Again goof flow easy read kept you interested and wanting to read on.So it will be interesting to see if the dragons are really as trust worthy as they seem all of them because of course we know there is always on selfish individual that makes it hard on all and to see if the queen lived or not.Thanks for sharing keep writing.
Good flow, good read interesting kept you wanting to keep reading.Thanks for your share if nothing elseI would read another part to the story just to see if the kid gets his revenge or learns to forgive and let go.Also the hunter coming out of retirement to help the boy could go many a way or will he come out?
Moving is such a chore I have done a lot of moving off and on throughout my life can never say I enjoys it much.Moving does unpack many a memory both god and bad.Sounds like this move did this for you as well.Thanks for your share hoped your child liked her new room.
Thanks for your share yes we must never ever forget what happened that day,once in a while I wonder are we destine for a repeat and the answer is yes if we have not learned everything we needed to learn we will repeat this senseless tragedies or ones far worse.
This was good and making the dragon the supposed bad guy the good guy and the villagers this bad was a good touch not that it’s never been done but you did it quite skillfully none the less.Keep writing and sharing this was worth the read for sure.
She meant a lot to a lot of people I wonder however would she have been happier and safer if she had stayed a waitress I think she was?The world however wouldn’t have got to know her and love her and her boys would not have ever come into play either.Well the world will never know.Thanks for your share.
I like this this was a great first poem you should maybe write more poems. Love poems and writings about God.Yours is good and true with a nice flow.Poems maybe your thing you seem to be a natural or at least as far as I am concerned ,keep writing.
Like the flow of these piece and the effortless way it seems to go from pass memories to present memories.Thanks for your share things have changed a lot in our world since you where that carefree girl or even that senior hoping to get your dream man’s ring.Summer oh the many memories we have.
Like your poem it is a sober reminder that playing war and real war is to different things.Playing dead and really being dead is also quiet different of course but as kids many times we are so unaware of this.Sometimes even as adults we can be very unaware of the horrors of what real war is like.Thanks for your share.
Interesting,short and sweet you are choosing to keep it positive .Photos are interesting and they can tell stories about us,they can empower us,make us think,envoke emotion pictures can be powerful.Thanks for your share on profile pictures .
Thanks for your share this seemed like you enjoyed writing this ,however it was still hard to write.It seems like at least once in your lifetime you have known real love and for that yourself blessed.Never have now this kinda love of which you have shared but I know it must have been grand.
Interesting share I don’t agree at all and I know without a doubt my bible will back me up.I do agree that we shouldn’t be fighting over this because God can defend himself. Of course we should speak boldly about what we believe and be able to defend what we believe and why,however we shouldn’t be fighting,killing,fussing with others about these matters because that never helps.
Oh,wow didn’t see that coming it kinda of made me smile a little thanks for your share that could be a whole other store the alien in my room pretending to be a caterpillar .Well unless you choose to write more about this caterpillar I guess we will never know or will we ?
Wow,this is a powerful poem and no most young ones will not enjoy this.You give a good description of fear it can’t be out run but it can be overcome if one is brave enough to do the hard work required.It can be conquered and made to behavior I had to do this work from time to time and it is never easy but can be done.
Thanks for your share I am sure all the fans will like this share.There are lessons to be learned here if one looks.We all ha e to deal with death of loved ones ,grief and sometimes becoming a single parent because of the death of a loved one.This story reminds us not all can take grief well.
Very interesting piece it's very hard at times to see us the real us. Even more so when the real us is a jerk, addict, bully. screw-up etc. We can only make lasting change when we first choose to see the man in the mirror and do something about what we see. Conquering us sometimes can be really really hard but I think with Christ it is possible.
I like it thanks for this share it was brave and shows the awesomeness ofGod.It is also a great reminder of the blessings we already have like being able to see,hear,walk and talk.So glad you shared your story and gave us all this great reminder about true thankfulness .
This was short, sweet, and cute. It's clear the writer tries not to take themselves too seriously and that can be a good thing. This could possibly make a good short story too not sure if you thought about it but I hope you will at least consider it. Thanks for your share.
Wow, so powerful not feeling it at the moment, however, it did bright my thoughts if only for a moment thanks for your share. Sometime today I will try and think on some of the things and cheer up some just not right now at this moment.Keep writing and sharing your sunshine.
Thanks for the brave share I am a recovering addict from a small town who was sexually abused myself so it's a small world. Many times we as the human race are not so different from one another. Even if some folk don't agree with your lifestyle choice you are a human being first and that's what should matter the most. We just have to live the best life we can and as we learn and grow do better in the areas that need changing or improvement.
Oh, this story was so cute, different, and original not sure if I agree with everything stated in the story but I do agree with its overall point that everyone should try and be the best them they can be. Thanks for the share it made me smile a little.
This was a very interesting share and this story did not start or end in the way I thought it would at all.It did however get me to thinking about writing one of my own stories about walking in someone else’s shoes.Thanks for your share.