You sound nice and tired me too I think I will soon be going for the camper or the tiny home thing sooner than later. I seem not to be able to follow the rules of this world , I seem not to be able to amount to anything as far as the world says anyway. I am tired of trying to win there is no win at least not in this world.I guess I will wait for pie in the sky later even though I seem not to have a good relationship with the big man upstairs either but here's hoping I can get it right before my eye close because I've already lived Hell at least a few times here on earth already.Thanks for your share.
Interesting sounds like she was trying to kill herself, like she was fussing with herself and maybe even the forces of nature about the how and or maybe the why. I think she finally decided it was more worth it to die than to live been there here recently to recently made a date with the railroad track down below where I live, I was stopped of course, and TDO by person's who could care less really either I live or die that just want to say they tried to stop me, if.
Wow, that's one mean bird didn't know they were so pretty yet so mean. A lot of pretty things are like that somewhat dangerous, violent, and or mean. Got a sibling very similar to this bird very pretty to look at but mean as a snake. Well, I guess these birds need to be admired from afar just like that sibling of mines. I think my mom was right pretty is as pretty does wither it be a bird or a sibling or whatever.
I wanted a girl but I got what I needed a boy. Sometimes what you want and what you need can be two different things I've never regretted having a boy not once well if there's a next time just maybe it will be a girl.
This was pretty good and I am glad more people are writing about this it's needed. I wrote something about this awful event as well because this was just the senseless taking of a life. Maybe as more
people speak about the wrongs of this world may be finally somethings will be set right.
I am sorry but I don't fully agree with you because they have the best leader in all the world if they would just turn their hearts to him and repent of their sins. Christ is their leader really he is everyone's leader. These are the chosen people and God is their leader always has been always will be. There will come a time that God will redeem them in due season well most of them anyway. Human leaders and the arm of flesh will always fail if they don't let God lead and guide them and that's not just Israel but any where and everywhere as we can see by the state our world is in. Thanks for your share however.
Wow, interesting poem and it also maybe truer than you know. There will surely be a pay day for all the misdeeds man has done. We continue to do the same things we have always done so we will have a price to pay sooner or later. If we do something different or better than we can change the impact of any future calamity. I think there is a need for a change in direction but only time will tell if man can and will make better choices.
This story was cute a little been funny. It was not crack a rib funny but just kinda crack a small smile kind of funny. I like that the town's watermelon farmer became a hero of sorts by saving the train from crashing into the giant watermelon. I also like that the people on the train got to enjoy this summer treat as a snack as the train was passing through.
This is an interesting story you tell here it was pretty good. Good enough for me to check it out and do a little research. To me, you probably could have left out a lot of the info about the casinos. I still enjoyed the story and the information though. My mom loves the stuff a lot and mostly the kind that comes from the Virginia Beach area about 300 to 400 miles from where she lives. Thanks for the share.
Well okay, this story is a little weird or at least it seems to me. I guess though it may have been a little hard to come up with something given the choices. I do like however that you at least gave it a go. Thanks for your share and for trying to stretch yourself as a writer.
I see you have chosen to write about Judy Garland one of my most favorite actors. The Wizard of Oz is still my most favorite movie I've ever watched. I have seen almost every version of that great movie the good and the bad but none have surpassed the original version. The few good-times I remember as a child was surrounded by our times watching this movie me ,my siblings, and my dad every year it came on channel 7 for most of my childhood. Mom never liked it, nor did my siblings really care for it as I thought so after dad left I pretty much watched it alone. Thanks for sharing keep writing.
This was a pretty good poem about your feelings about the pandemic.I think many people are having a hard-time in this pandemic. However so many good things are happening to me in this pandemic along with some bad.I am trying to count it a joy in the Lord because he is seeing me through this pandemic one day at a time. I am learning to be alone and as long as God is with me I am and will be okay.I was the kind of person before this that believed that I couldn't be alone and be okay let alone happy but God has proven to me that's not so.Thanks for your share!
Okay so I take it you don't like spring too much but I feel there are some blessings in every season. I think also we need every season ,there's a need for every season God gives. Maybe you can find a med that will help this year has been bad for allergies for many, my eyes have been close to swelling closed a few times this year in the spring and summer. I have had one of the worst allergy seasons I have ever had in my life I think but God has kept me. Thanks for your share it was interesting and a different point of view from what is usually said about spring and from what you think will be said.
Interesting, I think I might like this I am completely sure. I think this is more than just about a puppet boy. It's about how most people are just puppets to or so it seems to me. Yes, he did need some love but also maybe some of the ones playing with him were showing love the best way they knew how? Maybe they played with him because they loved him at least a little. I guess if they had truly hated him they wouldn't have played with him at all. Thanks for the share.
Not really sure what to think of this writing but I like its rhythm. This seems like you took your time to write this piece trying to give someone who maybe feels weak a dose of confidence. I will have to sit with this one awhile I think. Thanks for your share and keep writing.
I like this I like Christmas snow as well even though I haven't seen any in a long while. Well made this will be the year I see some. It sounds like winter brings into your life so many things you hold dear so I am glad you shared. It was a nice pick me up which I need today and Christmas is one of my favorite holidays for sure.
Hummmmm interesting writing not sure if I agree with it all but I thank you for sharing. I must explain what I mean I truly believe the only person we truly need more than anything or anyone is Christ. I think we think we need certain things or even a certain person but I don't think we truly won't go on living if we don't have that person or that thing. Can't prove it for sure I guess other than to say there have been many things I thought I had to have and even a person or two I thought at the time I couldn't live without but that always proved untrue in time. At some point, something happened and I wasn't around that person any more whether they moved on, I moved on, or they died. Things too have been removed from me I thought I had to have. I was no worse for wear when it was all said and done and life went on. I did sooner or later learn that I would be okay even in the person's absence or without whatever I so treasured.
So sorry you seem to be hurting. I can just let you know that it doesn't have to be that way you matter and are needed in this world, the real you. Yes, some may not like you but some will if given the chance to know the real you. We are all a little messed up so who can truly judge anyone. Only you can choose to step out of the darkness and into the light. You will never truly be happy hiding I can tell you from experience this is true. I heard you today so see you can be heard and it does matter what you have to say. I've said a prayer for you that you may find a way to be set free, I would say try the Lord but then I am just one person and this is just my point of view. I have tried the Lord though and know him to be a strong tower and a help in time of need.
Okay, this is a very interesting poem you write. It sounds like you took much delight in writing this poem. There is joy in writing and this poem seems like you really enjoyed writing this. Keep writing and sharing your joy of writing with others for you never know where this joy may lead.
Pretty good poem and it seems you are sharing a lesson you learned the hard so others may not have to go through the same thing you went through. Sometimes the lessons we learn the hard way are the ones that stick with us the longest or forever. Hope all is well with you in that area now that you know how to love a little better.Thanks for sharing.
Okay not sure what to think of this but I do get the picture, yes I do and would rather not. I like blue cheese depending on how it's used and or what it's used for. But you could always just not put blue cheese on a salad I guess or ask that it not be put on yours in a restaurant type of setting.I can say this was very detailed for sure.
That is too cute.I never saw that ending coming you must be a cat -lover. Cats and animals period or smarter than we can ever truly know I do believe and thank goodness for us they can't talk sometimes I guess.I do wonder what would they say to us if they could talk so we could understand them?I think animals surely talk we just can't understand them and that's because they are too smart or we are too dumb even though I think we think it's because we are so much smarter.
Oh, how sad this tale is. Did the cat kill the little baby seems so and what was done to the cat inquiring minds want to know? Well hopefully the cage will be put out of the cat's reach or it can be trained not to mess with it in the first place because yes cat's can and do open doors. Thanks for sharing.
Okay, this is a very interesting story. Life as scary as it can be is best lived out of the box as long as you choose to walk in God's glorious light that is or that's how I see it anyway. Keep writing and sharing the experiences you have, you have far to go and much to learn as you go because you are yet so young, happy writing.
Neat, chipper, and upbeat I like but this is also my favorite time of year so maybe I am a little bias. I like how you describe things like the plexiglass bird feeders which where I am from we have non I know of but maybe one day I will see one. The warmer days of spring are nice I enjoyed this read so keep writing.
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