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Review of More Lysol!  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Okay thanks for your share it’s interesting for sure even if it’s not my cup of tea. Keep writing I am sure many liked this poem quite a bit and for others not so much. I guess it stands to say you have a very good imagination a little twisted but a good one.


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Review of School Blues  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for the share and reminding us that some don’t look forward to the first day of school and for reminding us that parents can help with that some. Thanks for sharing your poem with us it was nice and had a good flow.


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Review of Is Faith Failure?  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Interesting story however failure is apart of the human experience ,even in science it just is. However the young Seth is a bit of a jerk and so is Miss Cain to me. The one is no better than the other as far as I am concerned. Failure is apart of not only life but also learning,growing,understanding and being successful . I wouldn’t listen to a man/ woman that has claims they have never failed ,let alone a scientist who has claimed to never have failed or doesn’t know it’s importance.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting you little rhythm or pose says a lot about you.Thanks for sharing it’s been an interesting run through the alphabet.Keep writing and sharing about you because we are all a work in progress. Thanks also for your honesty.


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Review of Broken Mirrors  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is an odd but interesting story of sorts,sounds like addiction to me. I am not sure how addiction it’s a kill and this sounds like the story one of many of addiction. Addiction takes you further than you want to go and keeps you way longer than you want to be kept if it doesn’t kill that is. Just like sin it always takes you further than you want to go and keeps you longer than you want to be kept unless it kills you of course. Thanks for sharing your story. I wonder does it really matter at all about the mirrors?


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Review of Illusion at Best  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting is life an Illusion or a dream or a nightmare I guess it depends on who your asking or does it? Looking up the meaning of illusion I don’t think it can be an illusion really however that just one lady’s thoughts on the matter and maybe this all is some weird illusion or reality or something. I guess anyway it something to ponder maybe? Thanks for your share.


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Review of Mittens  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was pretty good if you could get past the grammatical errors.I think this piece needs a little more work however not bad ,not bad at all. It’s a little hard to read because in some places and the story’s not as clear as it could be however maybe that’s just the grammatical errors. Reread and write this maybe with help of a friend or family member and see where it goes. I would love to see a rewrite. Keep writing a good story is in there I do believe.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Enjoy your day
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Review of I Like Ike  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow that was such an interesting thing you wrote and I find we like some of the same things and dislike some of the same things small world huh.As different as we are as people we aren’t thanks for you share.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.0)
I am glad you shared your work with me and I don’t take that lightly.You are a good writer I think ,however I think you can get in your own way and you try too hard. I think with this one you tried to hard this was a hard read it felt like homework and not the fun kind.Keep trying and keep writing and write for the bright intellectual and the dimwit and everyone in between.


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Review of The Snow Fence  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for sharing your work it reads well and flows nice.It is very interesting to hear someone else view on creation.Seems like you gave this poem lots of thought.The piece is short and sweet which I also like.
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Review of Fall  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for sharing your love of Fall and all the good things you believe that come with it.You can tell that you fully enjoy the season and all it has to offer.Your story is very detailed and filled with the love for the season.


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Review of The Door  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting short and sweet hummm very interesting can send the mind pondering,imagining,wondering.I think I like it very different.The mind could go so many places with this writing.Thanks for sharing your thoughts and work.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Well this is gloomy for sure not sure that I agree because I believe we all matter to this world you see in some small way you and I matter and we are loved and needed.Not by everyone true however by some we matter an awful lot and those are the ones that matter.We live ,we love we hurt and are hurt true however that all apart of going around this earth or sun.It will be worth it for most I think or at least in the end for those that truly choose to live and give life their all.Thanks for your share because how you feel matters.


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Review of Scrambled Eggs  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a very interesting read I not sure how I feel about it really can’t say for sure I have to think on it a little bit more. I not sure of the ending and where the man being put to death thought he was ending up where there was going to be a better breakfast home,Heaven ,Hell?Although I guess it depends on if he made his peace with the Lord and was ready to meet him would determine he’s final location where he would be spending his thereafter . I not sure any of the locations would have a good breakfast really home,Heaven or Hell hummmm not sure never been don’t know?I would say his home maybe there’s a chance if the folks are still there and able to cook ,in Heaven there maybe a chance if they have breakfasts there and in Hell there is no chance of a good breakfast ever.Oh well maybe I am letting my imagination get away from me.Thanks for your share.


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Review of That Chair There  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.0)
Okay nice try it’s something different for sure and over-all it’s pretty good.It seems to be missing something it’s not all that exciting really it kind of heads in the right direction and then however it kind of lets you down a little as it builds toward the end.Maybe because we can clearly see what’s coming and there’s no real build up or surprise,she just tells him not to cross the line and why and he does it anyway and turns into a chair.Keep working on this it could be really good if you can include a good element of surprise .


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Review of Revenge Feeding  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Not bad a pretty good read it has a few mistakes here and there very few however it has a good flow and it’s an understandable read for many.Thanks for your share keep writing many teens and young women need to know that it’s okay to be a little larger.Although it’s not okay to seek out revenge at least the young lady knows how it feels to walk in someone else’s shoes.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for this share I like how even though this is short and sweet it explains how a writer was born.I also like how the child was encouraged to use their imagination and also to learn to wait and why both are important .


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for your share living in reality is very important for sure.Facing life on life’s terms can be hard however it is need in today sometimes I feel like the younger generation try and make their own reality.It important to face the truth and live in the true reality you are faced with no matter how hard.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was a very interesting story.Not everyone of Santa’s helpers has to like him I guess.Being so kind and giving has to piss off someone just because I guess.No one is liked by everyone so why couldn’t Santa have helpers who have beef with him as well.


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Review of My God  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for your share and sharing with us what your God means to you.You can hear the respect and admiration in this writing that you have for him.This kind of love needs to be known by the world and his children always need a reminder of this love,his love.


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Review of Joshua  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was a cute story the romantic in me says right on the realist says nope that story is not possible no matter how much I might want it to be.I do like that the writer seems to believe in love and happily ever after though.Thanks for your share.


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Review of soothing water  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for your share this is a pretty good poem it does have some soothing qualities as you read it. These days we need all the soothing things to read and to think on. Keep writing and sharing soothing thoughts with the world.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Short and sweet thoughts about what Thanksgiving is to you.Thanks for your share a lot of people see it just like that so your poem is very relatable for sure. I hope your Thanksgiving is a good one filled with good things to eat for your and yours because in the days and times we live in that is truly a blessing.


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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
I thank you for this share it is very interesting, it seems to be about Christmas and not really Thanksgiving,however, it still works I guess. I however like to not skip over Thanksgiving and go straight to Christmas but at least there's a small hint of thanksgiving in your story so that's something.


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