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Review of Returned  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
That is too cute.I never saw that ending coming you must be a cat -lover. Cats and animals period or smarter than we can ever truly know I do believe and thank goodness for us they can't talk sometimes I guess.I do wonder what would they say to us if they could talk so we could understand them?I think animals surely talk we just can't understand them and that's because they are too smart or we are too dumb even though I think we think it's because we are so much smarter.


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Review of Outside the Box  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Okay, this is a very interesting story. Life as scary as it can be is best lived out of the box as long as you choose to walk in God's glorious light that is or that's how I see it anyway. Keep writing and sharing the experiences you have, you have far to go and much to learn as you go because you are yet so young, happy writing.


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Review of Ease of Spring  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Neat, chipper, and upbeat I like but this is also my favorite time of year so maybe I am a little bias. I like how you describe things like the plexiglass bird feeders which where I am from we have non I know of but maybe one day I will see one. The warmer days of spring are nice I enjoyed this read so keep writing.
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Review of Surprise!  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow, neat story it was interesting but what a waste of a chocolate cake. The birthday person had to have had a good sense of humor not sure I would have had one. I am a chocoholic so I would have surely wanted to eat it not get sprayed with it. I am sure that this story will be told for a long time to come and that the birthday boy will never ever forget this day most likely.
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Review of Dixie  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
A very sweet and moving story of a woman that stepped up to be a mother figure when your birth mom dropped the ball.Glad you had her so many wards can't say that, it sounds like you gave her as much joy as she gave you. It takes a really good person to step up and love like that when the child isn't even yours really.
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Review of The Test is In  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks for sharing this must be so hard and even more so since this is your child. I will say a prayer for her I hope she will recover with little to no issues/side effects. I do know God is able and a healer, I also know cancer is a hard walk to walk through. I not sure but if she's heard of In the rooms there are some support groups on there they may help her if she is willing to check them out. Well, the issue is it is also groups that addicts of different kinds have joined for help, addicts of all kinds from food to drugs to sex. However, there are some Trauma groups and cancer is a kind of Trauma for sure.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.0)
Short and sweet to the point interesting not sure why someone would want to read or know this but if you are a young person then maybe. Young folks sometimes seem to be a little clueless about running a household and all the problems that can arise sometimes out of nowhere. I guess sometimes it's also good to be able to vent our frustrations.
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Review of Day 16 - 2.11.13  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a cute and fun writing seemingly written by someone that doesn't take life too seriously. I like it it's light-hearted and in this day and time that's nice. I tend to be serious a little too serious at times so this was good. It's nice to not take oneself too seriously. I do agree that the best stuff is usually higher up and or on the top shelf well that is if you like what you have and to keep it. It does stand a better chance of staying nice if on the top shelf/higher up and or not getting taken if you have people around with sticky-fingers so to speak.
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Review of Utopia  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Not, bad can't recall reading anything like this before it's neat and thank you for the explanation at the end. I got to learn something new that I didn't know about not sure I understand well enough to write one but it was nice to read yours.I also like that the poem is about love.
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Review of Water  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Not bad for your first semi-long poem.Lots of neat rhyming and timing, pretty good flow. What I like about this poem is it's talking about the importance of water and what it means to us and our world. It also points out that it can also be somewhat destructive and cause great harm at times which is true.We surely can't live without water nice job keep writing.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this it's a good writing. I think when we are young we always think that most or all of our endeavors will be successful. We soon learn that this is not always so but we live and we learn as we grow. I did enjoy your share it is possible that it was nothing you did wrong and that the plant wasn't a good strong sapling in the first place.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow, thanks for your share this is a good reminder that here in the USA we are so blessed for so many many reasons. I am glad to hear that his son is getting better. I hope someone will bless this man with better transportation and that the police will just let him be so his son can get the treatment needed I will say a prayer for them.
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Review of Trust Issues  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Yes, salt and sugar do look so much alike but they are not the same we know. A trained eye can tell the difference though and if we look real close we can see that hey this is sugar and this is salt. My mom is that person she is a trained cook been cooking longer than I been in the world and she can say hold it that's salt, not sugar because she has trained herself over the years to know the difference. As we get experienced in and with life we also can tell salt verses sugar, light verse dark. Also, God helps us if we choose to ask for his help wither someone is salt or sugar, light, or night. Then again, to be honest, we all have some of both in us,it's just that some have more sugar ie light and some have way more salt/night in them but there's a Jesus for that if we dare to turn to him. We all are someone if only to God and those that use us/hurt us are only really hurting themselves. You matter to God and to those that really love you.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Oh yeah, food now you talking about one of my favorite pass times eating but I working on that. Any way never thought about putting something like this on here but I will now I love to bake yes I do and I am pretty good. I grew up eating these haven't made any in a long while but will make sure I make some soon. Making these with my mom and sometimes my siblings were among some of the few good times I had growing up. I have a more sinful version of these that use M&M'S and or nuts.
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Review of Circles of light  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
It's different I think I like this poem. I like the way you talk about what nature looks like as it's hit by these circles of light. I like the way you draw the reader in with such vivid descriptions you can pretty much see what you are talking about if you just think about your descriptions.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow short, sweet to the point, and yet so much to ponder. I think what you said is true. We are going to encounter many problems in life period being a Christain will not keep us from life many problems/issues it just assures I'm never alone in them. Thank God for my help, my strength, and comforter the Holy Spirit.
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Review of Grammy's Lessons  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (4.0)
Amen and amen God is good and good all the time.It sounds like you had plenty of love in your life and it sounds like it did you plenty good.I think if you are anything like your grandma you grands are blessed to have you in their lives,howeevr they may not realize it fully until much later in life.This was a good read.I think it's something about them old-school saints that our world is missing today and we really need them and their values.Something about the name Jesus it is the sweetest name I know.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.0)
I'm glad you are enjoying your writing because if you enjoy it it comes across in your writing and when you don't that sure comes across as well. I am also glad to see that you are challenging yourself by entering contests that you think will help you grow as a writer. Not sure however if this would work for all writers but it seems to be working for you so that's good. Keep writing/happy writing1
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Review of Frogs  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, this was good I really liked this story a lot.This story was very interesting I could not bear to turn away from it the one time I did it was that good.I not sure I agree with how the boy's dealt with the bullies but then again sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do.I've been bullied a lot during my life and when I've resorted to fighting it has almost never worked out for me though.There is a certain glee reading this however that the bad guys so to speak got theirs.I think those boys are safe now and most likely for a long time to come.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow, this is a neat poem. I like it it's different. You paint a picture that one can see in one's own mind. You are very descriptive in describing your processes of writing in bed. I like that your description is very detailed and yet it flows very freely throughout the poem.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it I don't know a lot about being an Irishman but I like it. You paint a very vivid picture of this culture. You also can tell you were most in love with the little red-head that's now in Heaven. I am sure you miss her greatly but you will see her again one day. Good job very descriptive.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem is a neat little poem.I like how the cat kind of out smarts the dog.Not sure how the dog couldn't firgure out that something was up but I guess it doesn't matter to the cat either way because he is going to have dinner and the dog is not.This is a fun writng I like it is kind of unexcepted.
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Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
This story is very interesting two old superheroes' too old to be hero's any more to old to save the world. They seem to have a friend and superhero in their nursing friend however which thankfully she is because they would be dead if not for her. Then again they do seem to still be hero's inside their own heads and to each other giving them still a little bit of life in them and a small amount of hope. This is a nice little story that's kind of uplifting.
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Review of Moon and her Star  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
WOW, powerful this poem speaks volumes of a person's love and loss. This asks a lot of questions that make the reader think about the many possibilities and the what if's of this relationship. There is some hope that this person will be ok and shine again if only all alone although we are never really truly alone in this world I am learning we just feel alone sometimes. The concept or the wish I think however is to shine for oneself without completely depending on another. Good job writer.
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Review of Muse on Steroids  
Review by Happy to write
Rated: E | (3.5)
Ok wow, I don't know what to say for sure it surely gets you attention sort of like a smack in the face, like listen up you I got something to say. You are very descriptive in your phrasing and I don't think anybody that reads this will not have a response in some form or fashion. This poem demands to be read and heard wither you agree with it or not. It's really in your face and sometimes that can be a good thing because at least you know you have been heard. You definitely get you live to write and or must write.
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