That is how the night time is. For when we finally lay on our bed to round off the day, we reflect on the day spent. Whether we spent it well or not gives us different feelings. It might even be frustrations and failures! Failures of the past can haunt us too.
This is actually a case of love which has gone sour., a love that has transformed from warm affections to hatred and even maltreatment. This is a good, but short prose, though it requires reading between the lines to understand the real message. Kudos 👍
1. "Created from God mind " should be: Created from God's mind.
2. "And is replace with unconditional love..." should be "And is replaced with...
3. A second paragraph should be ensured here: I just want to wake up one day and see where man has lost his evil trove of drudge....
4. Finally, this your dream or hope is only possible in God's paradise or God's new world. Thanks!
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