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I enjoyed this poem. Your right bears enjoy cold and snow compared to hot and dry. I have encountered many bears in my lifetime. In the smokies in Tennessee I came across a black bear. In the rockies I came across a grizzly. very different bears. Thanks for sharing this fine piece
Nice poem of nature. You captured the eloquent beauty of the outdoors. Adding animals made your piece even more enjoyable. The animals always will defend themselves in the wild and you portrayed this very nicely. Thanks for sharing this poem of nature. I enjoyed it
Nice poem. it flows perfectly and has a peaceful plot. I enjoyed this and felt as if I was there in your poem. The dawn at many times brings peace and solitude to each person. The pleasant birds singing and the dew on the grass offers a coolness to the air. Your version paved the way for a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing
Great story about some young girls bored in their room. It tends to get that way a lot when your young. Its hard to keep your mind on one thing for a long period of time. Sounds like my girls when they were younger. They often entertained themselves one way or the other. Its often good to have siblings to share things with. Its harder for someone thats all by themselves. But they too find ways of entertaining themselves. Thanks for sharing this
Wonderful poem. Great words for the reader. Your example shows us how to do the right thing. I agree listening is half the battle. Communication is a must and the trust will fall into place. Compromise must be dealt with to have an understanding. Love will be there if it is equal on both sides. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this poem. It speaks of a beach and the future of her passion. Its got to start somewhere and you will always remember the place where the magic started. The beaches show power and peace. The waters show serene and ample views. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.
wow I enjoyed this. Its sad that people dont pay enough attention to the one their with to know what he or she likes. Its very important that you do this and that communication is strong. Without that then the trust is put off on a shelf. Doesnt sound like this relationship is very strong at all. The other guy probably knows more about her wants and needs are. In fact being at the friends place is very obvious that she is not into Bill any more. Often times its too late to fix the relationship and it becomes a life lesson. Well done showing this type of relationship and helping others that are in this situation. Thanks again
It depends on the poet. Each person is different. I myself the words come easy and they flow easy too. It also depends on the mood of the poem. Sad poems seem to be harder for some to write about. Some like to keep stuff inside and others its easy to express. Love poems on the other hand is easier to express. But again some hide love too. Just depends on the person. I am able to release things inside very quickly and can come up with a poem within minutes. I hope your able to come up with a way to get your feelings out in a positive way and a way that can help you defeat victory. Thanks for sharing this
This is well shared into detail. The only part that didnt make any sense is the last few words ( and beats ) do you mean conquered? Other than that a short but powerful term. God created everything and will continue this for the rest of man kind. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this poem. I liked the difference between the two. One of a great London and the other of a darker London. The differences are far alike. The 2nd one is of her husbands past. the deep dark sectrets he held and the sadness she felt inside. The 1st one is of the place where she holds the pain inside. Thanks for sharing this
This is on my favorite list. Baseball is my favorite sport and Detroit Tigers is my favorite team. I cant wait till March gets here. I live in Nebraska and always travel to Kansas City to watch the Tigers when they play the Royals. I go at least 6 times a year. I have caught many balls and my favorite ball is a homerun ball from Victor Martinez before he retired. I would love to catch a homerun from Miggy. Your poem was a perfect definition of baseball. Thanks for sharing this poem
Very nice poem. I was a little confused at the top of the poem it said the item number is not valid. I liked the part about giving the quilt to her best friend even though they were miles apart. Hr heart felt by giving the quilt to her friend it was a way to wrap up in Gods love and that God was protecting her and hopefully soon the Cancer would be gone. Just receiving the news brought a peace to her heart and she knew thats what had to be done. This poem brought tears to my eyes and I can understand if it did the same for you. Thanks for sharing this heartwarming poem
I like the plot and ending of this poem. goals are hard to reach no matter what time of year it is. Its always up to the person trying and obtaining their goals. If you want it bad enough and your out for this goal for yourself for the better then its worth trying. It all starts with admitting you want to change. Each goal you try for comes with persistance and pain. Plus the strength to keep going. each person either has success or failure. The hard part is continuing to keep this up. I thank you for sharing this and best of luck to you on enduring your goals
Charming and unique. This was a blessed story of endurance and love. The action that took place showed the reader the charm and resistance in the characters. I enjoyed the plot and the outcome. It was wonderful and filled with animals. Thanks for sharing this fine piece
A wonderful poem for your wife. A beautiful dedication. Most dont get to experience this and to have this passion deep inside is amazing. I always say any relationship will always work when you put God first in the relationship. Congrats on your lifetime love. Thanks for sharing this
I was encouraged by this poem. Sometimes it may not be the biggest boat in the water but as long as your able to experience it will the one you love, to me thats the biggest boat on the water. God has always been there to help it stay afloat. I have been this a favorite for me. Thanks for sharing this poem
Awesome poem about Jesus. We always got to remember its not on our time its on Jesus time. You have shown great love for the Lord and how he answers our prayers. Our sins are forgiven as long as we ask for forgiveness. Jesus has the grace and we must obey to him. He only holds our life after death. Wont it be great when we get to those pearly gates and be with him forever. Now is the time to show Jesus that we want to be with him and continue to live through him. Thanks for sharing this awesome poem.
I enjoyed this fabulous poem. Your flow is amazing. Nature poems are beautiful and yours in truly another one thats shows beauty. Your pen paints the picture of nature burning with desire and a tremendous observation of natures passtime. Thanks for sharing this exquisite piece
Wonderful outlook on caverns. This write is perfectly flowing rhyme and rhythm. You cortealed the motion of the charm that surrounds this and captivates the glammer of its beauty. Caverns are a wonder thing to visit. I did so in Kentucky when I lived there. The coolness inside stays that way all the time and the stalagmites are amazing hanging from the ceiling. Your did a wonderful job at showing the partake of this and I thank you for sharing it.
Wonderful take of pure love. I enjoyed this story of love and tragedy. Well depicted and enchanting. I liked how you put in the fairy tail and added more to this story. Wonderful take and your words flowed perfectly. Thanks for sharing this well planned story
I enjoyed this fine poem. Cant say I ever loved a married woman before except the one I`m married too. It would have to be tough to experience this. Not wanting to break up the marriage but also have strong feelings for a person at the same time. It would have to tug at your heart and mind. Depends on how much and how far this woman would go and how much her marriage is worth and how good her faith is for her husband and God. Thanks for sharing this
wonderful poem. Great penning you displayed here. Great questions to ask and very good way for the heart to ponder. I have asked these questions in the past and it left me pondering of what will happen. You made the words flow perfectly. I enjoyed the density of your passion and the length of your heart when it comes to the questions you insist. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. Keep writing
A good penned poem. Many times this happens to people. There must be love from both sides for it to work out. It can never be a 50/50 its got to be a 100% both sides. Sadly this happens a lot and all you can do it move on and hope you find the one that truly loves you for you. Thanks for sharing this
I enjoyed this well penned poem. The dreams we have feel so real at times. Perfectly flowing and your love of this person shows deeply and it inspires many to make dreams come true. You take the reader and have them feel like its them in the poem. Well done and thanks for sharing this
I loved this poem. A very inspiring pen. I love the beach myself and enjoy just laying out thinking about life. Building sand castles is fun. Its neat how you can come up with brilliant castles. Then when you are finished you get to look at your work and see what art you created. Again thanks for sharing this
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