|1st Thoughts: Such a wonderful expression of emotion!
Review: This was a very enjoyable read. The tone and setting are all very mellow, yet in that lies the bittersweet sting which you handled well. Grammar and spelling are spots on from what I can tell and as a poem, it flows nicely too. It's got a somber rhythm to go with the tone of death. I was a bit confused, though. I didn't know whether you were talking about a car or a person, but, that also contributes to the tone, a sort of mystical quality, if you will. THe car was very much a person in its own right or a person was like a machine yet human still.
Take that as you will, I also recommend a larger word vocabulary, though as a poem this may be very difficult to do as you do have constraints. In any case, I'm glad to have stopped here and taken a look only to read it through. If your poems are this thought provoking all the time you might just have something here, but, don't just take my word for it. It's up to you if my opinion matters. Cheers!
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