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Review of AN ORDINARY MAN  
Review by Johnny O
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome!
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Review by Johnny O
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there! Thank you for the education and the time taken to convey, greatly appreciated. I believe I have updated the entries as per the requirements and your direction. I will send two other poems once written for entry to increase my chances.

Thank you once again for the opportunity.

Johnny O
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The group needs some startup gps.
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Review by Johnny O
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love is light and darkness is the absence of love. I loved once upon a dream but alas without direct inclusion and interaction it dies and darkness prevails yet again. Most of the time we are in darkness. Light only happens once in awhile when we stumble upon it within ourselves.

I gave you what points I have. enjoyed the read thank you for sharing.
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Review of The Night I Died  
Review by Johnny O
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, death is an end but also a beginning. We die more than once in life and there are many different reasons. I died when, father died at 12. I died each time I became homeless. I died when my dog passed away. I would give you gift points but I am empty at present, sorry.
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Review of On Capitol Hill  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
On Capital Hill every deal has a string;
When the greedy and corrupt play and sing.
Where money is the focus and law's corrupt.
Where the speaker does keep score without interrupt.
Ensuring that the status quo will never win.

Back in the day their rules were crystal clear,
When money took second versus those held dear.
Justice reigned over the corrupt on Capital Hill.

These days truths are twisted into many lies.
Where they lay in wait greasing their wallets.
Where fake news comes from their flapping lips.
We bare witness to a nation in debt.
Enslaved to the point of collapse and ruin.
Because morality is lost upon a greedy hand.

In God We Trust?!

Wow you're writing is great! Please do keep sharing.

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Review of Song of love  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's written well. I write to rhythms and melodies also. I always have been able to do so, I find the process of creation a good healing wind for the soul.
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Review by Johnny O
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written. You see all can be achieved if we use the old ancient method of just printing money and funding government at 100% rather than debt chasing and crying broke which is a sad joke. Right now due to restrictions that were lobbied in place we have a reactionary governmental model in practice. Have you ever noticed that in politics present day the powers that be react to things after the tragedies have occurred? A sad truth.

The monetary values are based upon the needs of the few over the many trying to retain their grips on the market they have and not on the infinite value of life itself. We have to stop this practice of trying to place a value upon life.

A single currency where all are equal has to be based on life and its infinite value and not the current idea of a fractured world creating suffering and death through inaction based upon material wealth.

A proactive society is required in order to promote life and sustain it! Global warming is here to stay for example and we all know that the waters are rising so where are the efforts to try and retain land mass?

Please keep writing and I hope my idea takes root with everyone about freeing humanities potential rather than stifling it.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow what a fun exercise and to be rewarded for something fun on top of it!

I will submit my entry separately for this is my review.

Thank you for this opportunity to participate. I was having a bit of a writer's block and this helped me overcome it.

Please keep on sending me these opportunities!
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As always, very well written. Very true as well.

I have been unemployed for six of the last seven years but I never have given in to the negative. With the assistance of persistence and determination along with medication my situation is improving on a daily basis.

Please keep writing, I for one appreciate your efforts and the truth's within them
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Review of Happiness  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imagine going through life with memory loss. I tend to forget most things!

I agree with you.

I used to be in charge of multimillion dollar fundraising events but I had no personal life. I lost that job and now I am simply enjoying the opportunity every day represents.

Please feel free to read my portfolio, I reward with GPS.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is very well written. I don't see the need for improvements. This reads great as it stands.

Suggestions:
The Grandmother can be developed a bit more. A first name would be nice.

The poltergeist could also.

David could sleep over at his Grandmother's in order to try and reassure her.

David can also be developed a bit more. Getting into his habits, debts, gambling, a few run ins with Dolan.

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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, at times we do tend to not look ourselves within the mirrors reflection. The key with a mirror is that it never ever can reflect that which we possess within just the crude vessel that we are contained in.

Now if a mirror could reflect our thoughts on top of our appearances, now that would be a surprise.

As always the quality of your writing is exceptional.



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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Just as there is dark there is light. Just as there exists wrong so to does right exist.

Many preach balance between Yin and Yang but I have found the best results are born from deeds and gifts inspiring action either of self or from others.

Apply the credo that we all are equal and you will be blessed with positive results.
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Review of Limited Friends  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have only a few true friends. The majority of relationships are in passing in life and based upon business for the most part.

When my tenure as GM for events expired so too did the majority of relationships. You find true value in family and friends.

Its called love.
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Review of Running on Empty  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
True but you have to live life to the fullest at the same time.

If you don't push your limits it is difficult to achieve the desired results the soul desires.

I am a quarterback and I have thrown you the ball. Although it can be a predetermined play you still have to make things happen through action.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Some rewards are worth the efforts while many are not. We ourselves decide what is our true purpose and desire based upon our own needs and self worth.

I was sacrificing my life in pursuit of money and success for twenty five years and have learned a few things long the way about life in general as well as what I will and will not do going forward.

Keep sharing, thanks.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes you are quite right.

My methodology has been as I have stated before to try and eliminate money and the taint it carries by being benevolent. Further, I have tried to promote equality for all by putting into practice the main tenant that we are all equal regardless of anything.

I have rocked the world literally speaking during this process.

Not looking for any rewards, just love and understanding. No one owes me anything least of all God.

I simply figure if you have ability you therefore have the responsibility to create.

Keep sharing, thanks.
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Review of It’s in a Book  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
True. It is a great thing to practice writing for it is an extension of ones soul that enters this process and bends the pen to the page painting fantasy as well as reality.

I have always felt as if I was born from another age long since past. I have kept that within the centre of my actions and deeds.

The power of love and benevolence is limitless just be careful to write your self in modestly for the majority tend to be selfish.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Live life as though you are KING. For you must rule your own actions. Our TEMPLES are held within our mind's eye and governed by our hearts and desires.

Will you be a righteous KING or not, its up to every person to decide their own souls worth and whether they enter heaven or hell.

Please keep writing, thanks.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
True.

People tend too often to sacrifice their souls and morality for the exchange of money.

I don't.

Money corrupts for sin can be hidden within these transactions turning negative thoughts of any sort into actions with negative results.

Life is far more precious and should be held sacred.
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Review of In moderation  
Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For years I was running events with multimillion dollar budgets such as the Shrine Circus in Eastern Canada and various parts of the US.

People have their reasons why they consume spirits, wine and alcoholic beverages. You are right of course, you have to pick your spots and use moderation. Some do so for pleasure while others do out of habit and some out of necessity due to pain or trauma of a kind.

Since 2010, I have limited my consumption and eliminated the consumption of these beverages to try and improve my health physically as well as intellectually. It works.

Keep writing, its appreciated.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
True. Very.

Music is an extension of the soul and is of course a language of its own. The melodies ebb and flow and so too do our emotional states.

As I have said before try and live life without the pursuit of money being the cornerstone and replace it with love.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I have tried to put this into practice by not sacrificing my soul for the pursuits of money. I am the least perfect of us all but trying is the key to success.

Too many people as well as corporations hide their purposes through the exchange of money for actions from individuals.

Can you imagine a world where society is based upon love? Simple actions of selflessness given to assist the collective whole for nothing? No strings attached? We would then have no need for money and Camelot could be established.

Camelot was based upon this premise. So to is Eden.

You inspire my thinking processes, please keep sharing, thank you. We are all better off for it.
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Review by Johnny O
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love is the key.

We are all equal. This needs to be practiced. Starting with the Banking system by eliminating the cap upon the treasury and practicing benevolence through quantitative easing processes.

There seems to be a pattern to life on this planet where opposing views are always struggling for dominance. Humanity lives in the centre of this conflict.

Peace is attained through sacrifice. If neither side is willing to compromise conflict ensues and the victor makes the rules.

War is the absence of love where hate reigns.

Your writing is exceptional.

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