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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting. I believe that Jesus had but one message "We are all loved and equal."

I have tried to keep an open mind (and heart) especially towards trying to respect other people and their beliefs (differences).

I too believe in service, which lead me into Masonry and that has opened my mind in countless ways.

Keep writing, thank you for sharing your strength and wisdom.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Democracy is the way forward. I believe this also. It embraces everyone.

However, power corrupts over time due to the influence of money politics. Greece has taught us all so much over the course of time.

My issue with the current financial system is that we have currency differences based upon values not fully understood by the majority are we to accept these values as accurate based upon blind faith?

I believe that we are all equal, everyone. Currency should adopt the same principal and do away with differences in currency based again upon values that are not properly explained. One currency, one market, global democracy.

My next issue with the current system is that there does not seem to have enough debt forgiveness and we chase debts with far too much effort. If I understand the current system of banking there really is no end in either direction... so why is their a debt ceilings? Greece after World War 2 held most of the debt in the world. They practiced charity and wrote off vast sums of debt. Yet, they suffer from austerity due to the powers of those who hold the debts now. Again, where is the charity?

Third, the world economic system seems to fear growth. War is not a solution at any given time. Yet business is used to trigger war over and over again.

Look at the USA, they were manipulated into Afghanistan due to terrorism but what was their aim, their true aim? Simultaneously, they are also lead into war with Iraq. Again, what was the true aim, intention. Next, they are drawn into the Syrian conflict, again trying to get the USA into a situation where troops are required on the ground.

My view is that all these points if simultaneously pursued can be used as launching points against Iran in the future. Thankfully I believe Barak Obama is very perceptive and has taken the US troops out of these places dancing against this mass manipulation. Oh I would appreciate his being in power beyond the 8 year mandate (they are trying to avoid dictatorships sadly; so many great leaders run into this wall of time being limited in office).

These wars and conflicts are manipulated to generate revenues to help with debt management and as well as a way to control the growth of civilization especially from the standpoint of those trying to create a single source for generating governance.

I personally feel that there are wealthy personages in the world that simply use everything that they can to try and govern. Their intentions are cloaked in secrecy, hidden behind dummy corporations and so on. The ones in the eye of the storm or public eye are being managed by them. Why? Who are they? What is in their hearts?

I site these things to try and broaden your focus. We need a single system of governance not based on greed but rather based on actual management with heart. The current systems have been corrupted and need to be amended using the democratic processes.

I believe in the World Bank. I believe in the United Nations. I believe in a single currency. I believe in a single marketplace where equality is practiced. A persons money should be worth the same regardless where they live. Therefore, I believe in a single stock market with a single currency in the world. I believe that both Masonry and the Shrine Fraternities have been used for governance in the past and are at odds with each other due to businesses on either side. They are always dancing with each other vying to dominate, to make the rules. In the end, there can be only one source for governance, a democratic one where Masonry and the Shrine are treated equally and not manipulated into wars. We have to get off this planet and into the stars is my belief for we are not alone.

Anyways, I am starting to vent... forgive me...

But we have to crawl before we can stand. Walk before we can run and so on. But I dream of everyone being equal one day. I believe in Star trek. I recommend you watch the original TV series and set of movies.

Thank you for writing a very thought provoking piece. Keep sharing, I will try to do so as well.
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Review of Best. Day. Ever.  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Glad that you all enjoy the great outdoors. Writing from a true perspective is always fun in my humble opinion.

I never had such friends or opportunities so I enjoyed this piece. When I was growing up we didn't have the money to participate (father died when I was 12).

Thank you for sharing a bit of your life. Keep writing.

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Review of My City of Dreams  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes sadly far too often people tend to not vote at all for they have lost faith in the structure. But they do nothing to change their collective fates.

That fate is rigged an interesting concept.

A very thought provoking piece, thank you for sharing it.

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Review of The Everyone Drug  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Everyone searches for love, everyone. Unfortunately there are times when love fails. Nothing on earth can describe its loss. Competition for this commodity is extreme.

A very thought provoking piece that you have shared thanks for doing so. Please keep writing.

I see no changes that have to be made.

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Review of Blackbird  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for sharing your talents. I enjoyed this short story. It flowed well and it doesn't require any changes in my humble opinion.

What inspired you to write about this? Please let me know I would appreciate that.

Again, thank you very much and keep writing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very well written piece. You kept my attention throughout its reading. I don't have any suggestions for any changes.

The characters were believable. Their development was good.

Thank you very much for sharing your work. I enjoyed it. Please keep sharing.

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Review of MATHEMATICAL KIDS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a very thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing your views. I am Canadian and I believe that there is a major push from the powers that exists in our governmental agencies to sacrifice education due to budget concerns but I also believe that they wish to bring about more parity in the world.

The internet is where teaching must turn. Thanks for sharing your views.

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Review of See What It Is  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes we can only control our own actions. I enjoyed this piece for its rhythm and rhyme as well as for its wisdom.

I noticed that you post a lot of works. Keep up the pace!

Thank you for sharing your talents. Turn around is fair play. Feel free to let me know how I am doing with my efforts as well.

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Thanks I am Catholic and I appreciate this brief newsletter. Happy Easter to the both of you as well.

My church is of course in my heart. When my father passed away many years ago the folks at our church saw fit to distance themselves from us for our family unit was now broken. ever since I celebrate Jesus in my daily actions and how I live my life.

Thanks again for sharing your faith.

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Yes Christmas through the eyes of a child is wonderful and special. You captured the child's imagination very well.

It brought back memories, I used to dress up as Santa for the children at our Christmas party at work years ago.

Thanks for sharing your works.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Happy Halloween to you as well. This flows very well.

A super hero and a super villain out for a day of fun eating candy treats keeping each others secret identity under wraps.

Halloween brings all sort of folks together. I enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing it!

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Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Well I read this piece twice to try and understand it properly.

I would like to hear back from you. What were you trying to accomplish in this piece?

The rabbit stole so was punished for not taking her mother's wise advise.

Anyways keep at it, feel free to edit this piece to improve it's flow.

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Review of The Little Lion  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes indeed they are members of the family our pets. We don't realize just how much their unconditional love is missed however until they are gone.

We carry on and the memories we had of them we cherish.

Overall, I enjoyed this brief story. It kept my attention. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
The capitalist system does have room for individuality so long as you are under contract working to meet their goals and expectations. They being the share holders and business owners. What happened to charity? What happened to love? Hate is sadly winning over the world population and eventually, the corporations of the world will lead us into conflict for they manipulate our political and economic systems since they lobby the respective politicians.

Freedom is a wonderful concept. When will humanity ever attain it?

The focus used to simply be family in the past. In the last 100 years that has been replaced to a certain extent with what our societies teach us about greed. Keep in mind that money corrupts everything if not kept in check.

Keep writing. You have my attention.

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Review of Thinking is Bad  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Its well written and yes we are all prisoner's of corporate greed. You see we are taught to participate and become a happy participate chasing money within the confines of our urban detention centres (cities) yes I did not excel within the education processes either.

It seems that the world has not changed, people hide their actions and intentions within a corporate structure too.

Thanks for sharing your experiences.

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Review of The Academic Lies  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
School teaches us from the perspectives of individuals not necessarily the truth or in the broader picture from the victor's point of view.

People tend to write from their perspectives heavily influenced by their environment and their direct experiences.

Never forget that human nature has a component of greed within it. We are given a system of governance with money as the main tool for control. Can you imagine a world for one moment that people give for free? Work for free to promote positive change? The world that we have would then become ours if we did indeed do this. The world is starving for fresh ideas.

Anyways, I enjoyed your writing, keep at it.

I will review it again in the not too distant future.

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Review of The Princess Doll  
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Yet another extremely well written piece. I see no changes to the magic you have created. Thank you for the opportunity to read it. I have no suggestions to provide for amendments.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Suggestions: Went to town and hung out with friends at the movies.

Congratulations! Telling the truth is hard to do at times. This was an enjoyable read.

The only other issue is do not be afraid to make a new paragraph now and then. Makes for an easier read.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Amusing! Children do tend to grow. One moment they are little children. The next minute they are teenagers.

Suggestion: Please check spelling. clothes

Suggestion: You were trying on my clothes again...

I do not see anything else to amend. Thanks for the font, it was a pleasure to read.

Keep writing. Thanks for sharing!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
"The Perfect Snow Day" This was very well written as well as thought out.

I used to travel in the winter months with hockey teams. This piece has brought back some fond memories of relationships long past.

Thanks for sharing. Please keep writing.

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Review of My life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well get help speak to your school councillor. I don't know how else to help you.

I must congratulate you on your strength for it takes a lot of it to admit that one's life is far from ideal.

Top knotch. Keep writing.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
I am into using my mind and heart so I entered into Masonry and the Shrine.

We do tend to get lost within the confines of our own problems forsaking balance and harmony along the way.

I gave my heart to service a long time ago, living a life with empty pockets.

Everyone requires love, everyone. Sometimes you get hurt.

Sorry that you had a rough time.

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Review of bike life  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I suggest the following changes:

Introduce your living conditions. I have visited the Dominican and from my experience motorcycles are the main mode of transportation. What are your experiences? Lead into your statement with something.

Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

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Review of My time  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It was nice to read about you and your life. I love the Dominican and have spent a lot of time there in the past. I used to spend a couple months out of a year there on a resort back in those days I had money.

So this piece is about your little brother. Touching.

Keep writing.

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