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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Barefoot Bob , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "An Evening With Oedipus because I discovered it in "Fantasy Newsletter (September 22, 2021), and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Oedipus being a full-blooded Angora. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The point of view and voice of a cat.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the conversation between the cats.

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Review of Bamboo  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ✨GERV➻❥Ult Candy Crusher , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Bamboo because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it states the lesson of the poem, which is to bend with the trials of life.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the lesson.

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Rated: E | (4.5)

I'm reviewing this for "I Write In 2021 because your post was just before mine. I'm not a professional reviewer and these are only my opinions. Take what you find useful. Ignore the rest. All comments are given with love and respect for you and your writing. *Smile*

*CheckB* My overall impression and emotional impact: The poem reflects the chosen lyrics and looks good on the page.


*CheckO* Form, format, rhyme and meter: The rhythm of this free verse poem makes it easy to read, while expressing both the darkness of depression and and faint light of hope.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling and mechanics: I found no technical problems.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: I have no suggestions.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses hope.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review and I hope you find my comments helpful. Remember, they are only my opinion. You're the writer and know what's best for you. *Wink*

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Review of Vanity Fair  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, LightinMind , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Vanity Fair because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the joyful emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with joy.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it made me happy.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Dekland Freeny , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "Power in a Whisper because I discovered it on the community newsfeed, and the description aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the campfire and the glade. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, length fro her quarry. I suggest changing fro to either for or of.

My favorite part: I like the use of foreshadowing, which is suggested by the glade feeling brighter and hopeful for at least a little while longer.

I also like the way this story ended, because it suggested that this story is only the beginning.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the active battle scene between Sebile and Nimue.

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Review of Back to the Skies  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, Blimprider , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Back to the Skies because I discovered in on the newsfeed.

First Thoughts: The cover to this blog is inspiring. The introduction arouses the reader's curiosity and draws them into the blog.

What I Like: The first entry is encouraging. It encourages me to keep watching this blog for more entries.

Suggestions: Keep writing.

Final Thoughts: I would miss you if you left WDC.

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Review of Under Your Skin  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi, two of four , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am reviewing "Under Your Skin, because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (September 15, 2021), and the description hooked me.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph aroused my curiosity about the bump. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like the climax, because it was a chilling surprise.

Suggestions: I enjoyed reading this story, because of Jared, who was an intriguing and sympathetic character.

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Review of Spawn of Dagon  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi, Graywriter at the Cabin , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am reviewing "Spawn of Dagon, because the description aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Dagon's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like the surprise ending, because I did did not expect Dagon to eat her mate.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this satire, because it made me smile.

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Review of Strange Mind  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, E. B. Bloomfield , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I discovered "Strange Mind, under read a newbie, and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The rhythm of this free verse poem flows easily from line to line, and move the narrative and sad emotions forward at a good pace. The first person point of view and voice is a good choice because it expresses the poem's emotions.

What I Like: As I read this poem, I got the feeling that the speaker was talking directly to me, the reader.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: The poem looked good on the page. Centering it helped the reader focus on the narrative and the emotions expressed by the poem.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Philippe , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I discovered "The Sad Story of Willie Pete under read a newbie, and the description aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Willie Pete being a Misery-Guts. The descriptions were part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the laughter.

What I Like: My favorite part was the eulogy, because it is like no other eulogy I have ever heard.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story, because it made me smile.

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Review of Skywalker's Boots  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, SJ Longtaile , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am reviewing "Skywalker's Boots, because the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Dominica job being to imagine how things felt. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: The power of the boots to take a person anywhere in the universe.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story, because of the boots.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Bubblegum Jones , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Not Just Another Ghost Story, because I enjoy reading about ghost stories and reading the stories.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph arouses the reader's curiosity about the house, and why the speaker never paid much attention to it. The description of the house is well-written and visual. The reader can picture the house in their mind.

What I Like: The last paragraph his my favorite, because it suggest there is more to the story of the house and the ghosts that haunt it.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this article, because it would make a good background story about the ghosts that haunt the house.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Bubblegum Jones , I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am reviewing "Spelling that doesn't match your memory, because the title hooked me.

First Thoughts: The is an enlightening article. I am certain I always remember the wrong spelling of Loony Tunes. I am not sure why, because those were my favorite cartoons as a child.

What I Like: My favorite is number 13, because I am sure that is another name I would spell wrong. I enjoyed the cartoon, so I do not know why I never noticed how Ms Deville spelled her name.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this educational article a 5.0 because I learned something.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, mikewrite, I am Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am reviewing "Star Light, Star Bright, because the descriptions hooked me.

First Thoughts: The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the climax because it was chilling.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion would be to write more stories with the main characters involved.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation between the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, T.L.Finch , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Beneath A Hunter's Moon because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the location, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace. The rhythm makes this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot and expresses the emotion of joy.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it was about wolves.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Adherennium , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "I've dreamt the lines because I discovered it on the Hub under Newest Static Items, and the descriptions aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first stanza established the speaker, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moved the narrative and mystical emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because of the internal rhyme.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the theme.

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Review of Poor Tom  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Poor Tom because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxed the poem's plot. I also like the repetition of poor thing because it expressed the emotion of sadness.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the main character Tom.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Thankful Sonali HAPPY 21 WDC! , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "Lord Krishna and the Clouds because I discovered it on the newsfeed, and the description aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: Listening to this song, I could feel the respect and reverence that the singer has for Lord Krishna.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: Even though I did not understand the words, I liked listening to the song. I do not think a person has to be able to understand a song to feel the emotion in the singer's voice.

Final Thought: I am giving this item a 5.0 because of the emotion expressed by the singer.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Author Joseph J. Madden , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "A New Addition to the Family because I discovered it under read a newbie, and the description aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the wreckage of the passenger liner. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the battle scene between the Starhowk and the predator, because it was all action.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because of the battle scene.

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Review of The Nerds Revenge  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Paul , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "The Nerds Revenge because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (September 8, 2021), and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Greg's question. The conversation between the characters moves the narrative forward, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the story ended because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story, because it is always nice to see a nerd get revenge.

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Review of The Cage  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the way the barbarian had been captured. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the punchline.

What I liked: The punchline because it made me laugh. It makes me laugh every time I think about it.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because ii made me laugh.

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Review of Peaceful Handover  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, SeektheSnark , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I'm reviewing "Peaceful Handover because I discovered it on the technology genre page, and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with David realizing something was up. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph was my favorite, because it climaxed the story with something civilization needs: reliable transportation.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the trains running on time.

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Review of Weed Widow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dorianne , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Weed Widow because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the poem's theme, mood, and message. The rhythm and rhyming words move the narrative and smiles forward at a good pace. The rhythm also makes this poem easy to read or rather sing aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the repetition of Weed Widow because it suggest this poem was lyrics and intended to be put to music.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because it made me smile.

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Review of Treasure?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "Treasure? because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Jeff and Danny going into the attic. The interaction among the character move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: An unnecessary word in this phrase, like the thieves, I suggest deleting the word the.

My favorite part: I like the way the story ended because it made me smile.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sand Castles Shopgirl 739 , I'm Prosperous Snow Celebrating , I am review "The Reluctant Camper because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words complimented each other, while the rhythm moved the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite, because it climaxed the plot with a happy ending.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the theme.

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