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Review of Thwarted Assassin  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Pat ~ Rejoice always! , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Thwarted Assassin because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The poem follows the state form and looks good on the page. The rhythm flows easily from line to line and stanza to stanza, while moving the emotions of depression and hope forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Murderer of my spirit. I like this line because it defines depression and explains the title.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because it showed that one can survive depression.

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Review of Saint Christine  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, bob county , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Saint Christine because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The quote at the beginning of the story aroused my curiosity. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, women next door was, I suggest changing women to woman because the rest of the sentence suggest she is only one person.

My favorite part: I like Jake because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thought: This story does a good job in revealing Christine's personality.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Roari ∞ back to 🌎 , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "The Life and Crimes of Elfenezer Spruce because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (May 12, 2021), and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Elfenezer consulting his watch. The interaction and conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Elfenezer Spruce because he is an intriguing and unsympathetic characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Rhoswen - Goal Reacher , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I am review "Thanks to a Soldier because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The rhythm is a little rough, without being distracting. The end rhyme in the first two lines grabs readers attention, and pulls them into the poem. The main emotion is gratitude.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last two line are my favorite, because the state the poem's message.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the way it expressed the emotion of gratitude.

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Review of Eat your words  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Eat your words because I discovered it on the community newsfeed, and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the protagonist being lost. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last paragraph is my favorite because it climaxed the story's plot.

Final Thought: The first person point of view and voice was a good choice for this story, because it showed the speaker's fears and personality.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Spiritual Dawning , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "The Missing Souls of Writing.com because I discovered it on the community newsfeed, and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of hope and friendship forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Smile in the shadow of downtrodden dirty days. I like this line because it reminds me that a smile always changes a person's attitude.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed friendship.

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Review of My little friend  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, HollyMerry , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I am review "My little friend because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm flows smoothly from line to line and stanza to stanza, while carrying the emotions of love and faith forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions.

My favorite part: I like the emphasize on prayer, as a part of healing the kitten.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the emphasize on love and faith.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, Destiny , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the decision Bella had to make. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: Bella's logical through process as she considers the decision she has to make.

Suggestions: Typo in this phrase, If i don't, I suggest making the personal pronoun I uppercase.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Bella. She is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi, Princess Megan Rose , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first stanza of the poem hooked me, and made me want to know more about the Fantasy Garden. The description of the garden makes the reader want to visit it, and interact with the animals in the garden.

What I Like: Riding the unicorns appealed to me, because I think it would be fun the ride a beautiful unicorn. I also like the idea of interacting with the all the creatures of the garden.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write a story about one of the unicorns being ridden by a human.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the tranquil and peaceful emotions it shows.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi, hiryuu , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the descriptions of the drought ravaged mountains. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: The metaphors and similes are fresh and descriptive, which assists in the movement of the plot. They also help the reader understand the characters and the importance of their mission.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion would be to use these, intriguing and sympathetic, characters in another story.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because the interaction of the characters helped move the plot forward. The characters interactions and conversation also revealed their relationship and personalities.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi, Victor L. Rolling Jr. , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me with the remark about the polar vortex. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I Like: I like the metaphors used in this story. I especially like the metaphor in the last sentence about the wind wanting to came in.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story, because of the active descriptions.

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Review of Cabinet Discord  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Hugh Wesley , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the sound of the chimes. The interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

What I Like: The last sentence is my favorite, because it made me smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, seizz, I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the story in the times. The conversation between Reeves and Ashworth moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the chills.

What I Like: I like the mater-of-fact way Reeves told the story about what Dawson had told him. I also like the fact that Reeves checked the platform before going to his club.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it sent chills up my spine.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, siameezi , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first stanza of this prose poem establishes the theme, speaker, and hooks the reader with the idea that many worlds exist. The author keeps the reader's attention by asking logical and thought-provoking questions.

What I Like: The questions encourage readers to meditate on the subject, so that they can search for answers within themselves that satisfies them.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prose poem because it made me wonder if there are other worlds spread across time and space.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Dr Gonzo , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this column establishes the theme, while giving the reader a hint at what the author is going to say. This allows readers to decide if they want to read the rest of the column or not.

What I Like: The authors ask thought-provoking questions, and logically states his own beliefs without belittling the beliefs of the reader. I also like the way this column demonstrates the author's own on-going search for truth.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this column because of the logical and thought-provoking questions the author ask.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, LightinMind , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm is musical, and moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

What I Like: The musical rhythm of this poem, because it emphasizes the emotions of faith, hope, and gratitude. The last stanza is my favorite, because it states the poem's lesson.

Suggestions: I suggest putting this poem to music, because it can easily be sung in a spiritual service.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the spiritual emotions.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, G. B. Williams , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: This is a thought provoking editorial that cuts to the heart of the issues facing America today.

What I Like: The suggestion that America needs more prayer and to return to God.

Suggestions: My only question is about the hedge around the counter. It it intended to refer to a metaphorical hedge of prayers for protection or a literal hedge to cut the country off from the rest of the world? It is unclear which was intended, so I suggest making the difference clear.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking editorial because it reminded me that prayer for America is needed everyday.

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Hi, Novelz , I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this documentary hooks the reader. It gives enough information to make the reader want to know more.

What I Like: The educational information about Mr. King that is included in this document. I like this because some of the information I did not know before reading this documentary.

Suggestions: There are two places in this documentary that gives numbers for footnote, but the foot note, with numbers, are not at the bottom of the item. I suggest adding the footnotes. I also suggest adding the link to the source of the information somewhere in the document.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this document because of the education information.

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Review of In the Woods  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi, Alisha P. }, I am Prosperous Snow writing poetry .

First Thoughts: Beginning this story with a poem was a wonderful idea, because the first aroused my curiosity to know moor. The title is a good choice, because it tells where the story takes place without giving the plot away.

What I Like: The girl is an intriguing and sympathetic character, who readers can relate to because of her fear and the way she took action instead of waiting for the wolf to come after her.

Suggestions: A possible type in this word, folklorn, I suggest changing the spelling to folklore.

The movement of the plot is slow, because the action is told rather than shown. I suggest using action words to show the action.

I understand how the girl became a ghost. I would like to know how she became a vampiric ghost.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Elfin Dragon - contest hunting , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Welsh Dragons & Their Legends because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The information in the first paragraph aroused my curiosity about Welsh Dragons. This appendix contains well-researched information, that I found fascinating and educational.

Suggestions: A possible typo in this phrase, tossed like bung, I suggest changing bung to bugs{/be}, because it appears a better fit in the context of the sentence.

My favorite part: I like the way the heading of each section uses bold font to set it off. This helps the reader focus on each section.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this item, because it educated me on Welsh Dragon myths.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Aminomina , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "The Nymphs of Asthamie because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with a strange planet. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like Margot because she is an intriguing, sympathetic, and strong woman. I also like the climax of this story because it was a surprise.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of Margot.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Tim Chiu , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "A Time to Say ‘Hello’ because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of romance and hope forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses hope and states the lesson of the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the advice about saying hello.

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Review of Fairy Nuff  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Fairy Nuff because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the sign. The first person point of view and voice is a good choice for this story, because it reveals the main character's personality and moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like both Fairy Nuff and the speaker because they are sympathetic and intriguing characters.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jade Jaspers , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Imagination of the Mild because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The rhythm flows easily from line to line, while moving the tranquil and joyful emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way internal rhyme is used in this poem. I especially like the internal rhyme on kind and mind in this line.
I do placate my natural mind to the depths of my own kind


Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed inspiration.

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Review of Tu Dolebis  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Kurt Philip Behm , I'm Prosperous Snow writing poetry , I'm reviewing "Tu Dolebis because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

My favorite part: These are my favorite lines, I like these lines because the climax the poem's plot with a message.
You can’t kill the darkness
—banning the flame


Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the message.

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