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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first planet hooked me with the reason Mythos and Mason were on Earth. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of this story. I like the climax because it shows that patience will eventually pay off.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Mythos and Mason.

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Review of The Costs of War  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Captain Allen walking through the ruins of his home city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like that part because of the lesson about life going on.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Captain Allen.

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Review of Meeting Aliens  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The second paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because of the speaker's description of space.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0, because of the way the speaker's fear is shown.

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Review of The Darkest Sky  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Genipher Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The Darkest Sky" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Merari crouching by the front door. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The way the families emotions are shown through their actions and words.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the active descriptions.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi, The Dreamer Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "The story of the sensitive heart" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: This is a good character introduction, because it gives enough information about the main character to arouse the reader's curiosity. It also causes the reader to sympathize with the main character.

Suggestions: In this phrase, a lot many things. I suggest removing a lot because it makes the sentence easier to read and understand.

I like: The title drew me into this story. I encourage you to expand it and give the main character a name.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because it made me curious about the full story.

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Review of The Town Watcher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Millicent unpacking her tote bag. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

What I liked: Millicent is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Millicent.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, rickyallen, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Invalid Item" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under By Online Authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sir Gray Arm being amused. The conversation and interaction among the character moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I suggest making description part of the action.

I like: This is a good simile, it clung to the ground like a serpent crawling across the roads, because it is fresh and descriptive.

Final thoughts: The end of this story arouses the reader's curiosity for the next part.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The description under the title aroused my curiosity. The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, She's obviously never even heard a turtledove! I like this line because of the way it foreshadows the rest of the poem, which expresses the truth about love.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its theme.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first line hooked me with the phrase "too dumb". The rhythm flows easily from line to line and encourages reading this poem aloud. The rhyming words are well chosen to express the author's thoughts.

What I liked: The last line is my favorite. I like this line because of the way effete is used.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way the author used the rhyming words to express the meaning of the poem.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, StephBee Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Grandma's Computer" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under By Online Authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Mace blowing the dust off the box. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite character is Ryker. I like him because he is intriguing, sympathetic, and persistent.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph of the prologue hooked me with the speaker finding himself dying again. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of chapter 1 is the climax. I like this because it aroused my curiosity for the rest of the story.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chapter because of the action, which helped to reveal Jack's personality.

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Review of Eucharist  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, plot, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot, while helping the reader understand the poem.

Final Thoughts: Good use of rhyme on reflection and excommunication.

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Review of BIG YES  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Naomi Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "BIG YES" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the author's spiritual awareness. The main emotions of this item is faith and hope.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the positive attitude the author shows towards problems as opportunities for grow.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because of its inspiration.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robin:TheRhymeMaven Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Whose Faith has it Right?" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem, while hooking the reader with the thought-provoking questions. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite because of the questions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Columbus testing his bonds. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of this story was the battle scene. I like this part because it was exciting and realistic.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this alternate history because of the action.

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Review of What if?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the coffee being too hot to drink. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part is the day dreams. I like them because the active descriptions made them seem real.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the poem plot with a question.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the plot.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while expressing the emotions of faith, hope, and love.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it contains the emotions of faith, hope, and love.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its subject.

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Review of Being Fed Up !!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Spiritual Dawning Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Being Fed Up !!" Open in new Window., because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This my favorite line, Coffee after coffee, poetry helps. I like this line because it is a true statement.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme.

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Review of Rain Boy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Rain Boy" Open in new Window., because I discovered it when I clicked on Read & Review.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Blackberry Street. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story was when the boy rose into the sky. I like this part because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the boy.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The title and description of this poem aroused my curiosity. The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention focused on the subject.

What I liked: The repetition of the words }To whom and To give the poem unity while expressing the emotion.

Final Thoughts: This is a well-written poem, that gives the reader something to think about when judging other people.

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Review of Musings...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Gaby Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Musings..." Open in new Window. "Uncertainty" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The paragraph written for the contest got my attention and made want to know more about what happened to the woman.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the hook was description of the wind. I like that part because it showed a strong wind rather then just telling about i t.

Final thoughts: Good luck on the contest.

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Hi, Jeff Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Technological Faith" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with technology being a double edged sword when it comes to our faith. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving both the upside and downside of using technology as a tool of faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of this essay is about technology being intended to make our lives easier. I like this because it gave me something to think about concerning the way I use technology to assist in deepening in the sacred writing of my faith.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about.

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Review of But We Live On  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, cheshire Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "But We Live On" Open in new Window., because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first stanza of this thought-provoking poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about or meditate on.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it states the theme of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme.

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for entry "Green Apples" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, KingsSideCastle Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Castle's Chessboard" Open in new Window. "Green Apples" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because they remind me of the green apple I had for my morning snack.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because I enjoyed reading the description of the apples.

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