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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Don Two , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Betelgeuse À La Mode in "Poetry Newsletter (May 27, 2020).

First thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and delicious emotions forward at a good pace.

I like: The second stanza is my favorite because it described the taste of the muffins.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it was about food.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Roland King , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "The Prosody Corner on the newsfeed.

First thoughts: The first thing that caught my eye was the graphic at the beginning of the forum. It is beautiful, while suggesting to the reader the forum's subject. The explanation is clear, and the use of font colors and bold help the reader focus on each section.

I like: I like the use of the green font with the prices. The colored font helps the price stand out.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I have no suggestions.

Final thoughts: Thank your for creating this educational and beautiful message forum.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Royal Eduardo , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "The One Who Stayed in "Drama Newsletter (May 27, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the kiss. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing her motives and personality.

I like: I like the way the story ended because it surprised me.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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for entry "~ A Story-Poem ~
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, ruwth , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "ruwth is writing... "~ A Story-Poem ~ on the newsfeed.

First thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, plot, and mood of the poem. The rhythm is smooth and carries the plot forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem are hope, sadness, and faith.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the plot with hope.

Suggestions: I suggest "Vision of Hope" as the title to this story-poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotions of hope and faith.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, lauradena , I am Prosperous Snow , I am reviewing "Meeting the Atakapan in response to your request.

First thoughts: The spiritual experience described in this story is clear and precise. There is no doubt in my mind that the speaker had this experience. The speaker answers all the questions that arose in my mind while I was reading it. The descriptions are written as part of the actions and flow of the story.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it shows the speaker's wondering why this experience occurred to her.

Suggestions: The only question that was not answered in this story is the reason the experience occurred to the speaker. Many times when a person has a spiritual experience, the reason for its occurrence is not clear. This gives the spiritual experience described in the story authenticity.

Final thoughts: I am giving this story a 5.0 because of the description of the speaker experience and the emotions she felt during and after the experience.

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Review of Time again  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Bride@#dangreviews , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Time again on the community newsfeed.

First thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, and mood of the lyrics. The rhythm and rhyming words move the song and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion is sorrow.

I like: I like the use of both end and internal rhyme.

Suggestions: I encounter no distraction. My only suggestion is to put these lyrics to music.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this sorrowful romantic song.

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Review of Not a Goldfish  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Hyperiongate , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Not a Goldfish in "Comedy Newsletter (May 20, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the daughter's question. The conversation between father and daughter moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

I like: I like the climax because it made me smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the conversation between the characters.

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Review of Dad’s cure  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Dad’s cure in "Comedy Newsletter (May 20, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Dad's cures being legendary. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it climaxes the plot and made me smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Snotnose Johnson in "Comedy Newsletter (May 20, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the Johnson family. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it made me laugh.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I am giving this story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Becky Winchester , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Photographing a Wyvern- Rebekka on the mythology genre page.

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the implication that Wyvern caused The Bubonic Plague. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

I like: This is my favorite phrase, I assure you, I am perfectly sane, because it raised doubts in the reader's mind about the sanity of the speaker.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion would be to use this as part of a novel on this subject.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this perspective, because of the speaker.

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Review of Goldenpelt  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, ACorrin , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Goldenpelt on the folklore genre page.

First thoughts: Goldenpelt's station hooked me. This item does a good job of describing Goldenpelt and her powers.

I like: I like Goldenpelt's ball of yarn.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this character description of Goldenpelt. I'm looking forward to reading more about Goldenpelt.

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Review of Whirly  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, dragonwoman , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Whirly on the scri-fi genre page.

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Rotunda's questions. The interaction between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

I like: I like the surprise at the end because I did not expect the characters to be robot squirrels.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Honing the Craft  
for entry "Week 49 Sweetbriar
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Tinker , I am Prosperous Snow , I am reviewing "Honing the Craft "Week 49 Sweetbriar for "I Write in 2020.

First thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the descriptions and narrative forward at a good pace.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite because of the description of the blossom.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the flower.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Kieran1998 , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Natasha's Romantic Night Shock! on the community newsfeed.

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Natasha planning a romantic night with her boyfriend. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

I like: I like the way Natasha dealt with the burnt cake.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the romantic ending.

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Review of The Turning Point  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Prodigal , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "The Turning Point on the spiritual genre page.

First thoughts: The first paragraph of this non-fiction essay establishes its theme and subject. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while showing through the words what preceded the spiritual awakening.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it expresses hope and faith.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this encouraging essay because of the subject.

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Review of Where to Meet God  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, G. B. Williams , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Where to Meet God on the religious genre page.

First thoughts: In this non-fiction essay the author discuses where and how to meet God. The first sentence establishes the theme and subject of the essay. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving examples of meeting God in daily life.

I like: I like the emphases on opening our eyes so that we can see God in every human being.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the thought provoking subject of meeting God.

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Review of Existence  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Rhychus , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Existence on the spiritual genre page.

First thoughts: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the poem's narrative and message forward at a good pace.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses the emotion of hope.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this poem a 5.0 because it clearly stated its message.

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Review of Higher Power  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Baloney Bill , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Higher Power on the inspirational genre page.

First thoughts: This poem is composed of rhymed couplets. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the spiritual emotions of hope and faith forward at a good pace.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasizes of the message of the poem.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this beautiful and well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses the author's message.

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Review of The Expats  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Mastiff , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "The Expats in "Short Stories Newsletter (May 13, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the truck backing down the ramp. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

I like: I like the way the story ended because it was the logical ending.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the characters.

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Review of Moon Cathedral  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Moon Cathedral in "Short Stories Newsletter (May 13, 2020)/

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of moon rise behind the cathedral. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

I like: I like the metaphors and similes used in this story, because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile, like a crazed paparazzi.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. My only suggestion is to use this as the first chapter in a novel about the cathedral.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story.

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Review of Happily happy  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, dollar , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Happily happy while port surfing.

First thoughts: The first line establishes the theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other and move the narrative forward at a good pace.

I like: The first and the last lines are my favorite because the confirm the title.

Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. My only suggestion is to use this poem as the basis for a character in a short story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this encouraging poem because of the subject.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Richard ~ RL Bites! , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered the "Reflections of an Itinerant Musician "Remeberance ~ Memorial Day on the community newsfeed.

First thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the definition of what Memorial Day is and isn't. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace while giving examples of why Memorial Day is a day of remembrance.

I like: The last sentence in the second paragraph is my favorite, because it reminds us to consider the sacrifice of soldiers rather over opinions or reasons for war.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought provoking essay a 5.0 because it reminds us of the reason for Memorial Day.

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Review of Revelation  
Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Triv , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Revelation in "Drama Newsletter (May 13, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with movie night. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

I like: I like the twist at the end because it was unexpected.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Pernell Rogers , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "The Stains of Purgatory in "Drama Newsletter (May 13, 2020).

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with banging on the door. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

I like: I like the way the descriptions were written as part of the action because it kept me focused on the plot and the main character.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I am giving this exciting story a 5.0 because of the action.

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Review by Prosperous Snow
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Kenzie , I am Prosperous Snow , I discovered "Delight in His Commands on the religious genre page.

First thoughts: The first paragraph of this article drew me in and aroused my curiosity about what the author had to say. The main point is finding joy in God's commandments as we go through life.

I like: My favorite paragraph is the one about the birds, because it reminded me of the way the birds sing on cool spring mornings in Las Vegas.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring article because of its subject.

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