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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem, while hooking the reader. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of fun forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like the last stanza because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's statement of falling in love once. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while revealing his personality and building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it reveals a lesson concerning love and money.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the speaker.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because I am attempting to survive on Social Security.

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Review of A prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The first line is my favorite. I like this line because it address the Creator without using any of the Creator's names.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this prayer-poem because of it spiritual feeling.

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Review of Alien Speak  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The alien speaking in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: I like the peaceful approach this story takes toward contact with aliens.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph with the storm feeling sorry for the man on the bench. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: The storm is my favorite character. I like the storm because she is a sympathetic character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Why so rush?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first line hooked me and drew me into the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotion of inquiry forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, Trust in God our only solace left. I like this line because it reminds the reader that trust in God is necessary.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about concerning trust in God under all conditions.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of friendship forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The repetition of The vine upon the wall gives the poem unity.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotions of friendship.

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Review of So Little Time  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the star's wish. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is when the star became a snowflake. I like this part because it made me smile.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful story because it reminded me of children's stories.

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Review of Super Sized Alice  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Mel Carlyle's question. I wanted to know what her sister was doing. The interaction and conversation between the sister move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: Alice and Mel are both sympathetic characters, whose interactions show how much they care for each other.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of 3rd Strike  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the search lights. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of this story is the description of the battle. I like that because it was exciting, well-written, and it kept me focused on the main character and his reactions.

Final Thoughts: The climax surprised me because I expected it to be real war and not a live-fire exercise. Well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, tracker , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "When Will We Ever Learn?" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 29, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Elaine's statement. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The way the speaker told this story using conversation between her and her cousin to help move the plot forward.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it fitted the title.

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Review of A Flight of Fancy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Flight of Fancy" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 29, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with both Hector and his alarm clock being retired. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: Hector's imagination is very creative. I had to smile when he imagined his landlady in love with him.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Hector's imagination.

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Review of Gore  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Gore" , because I discovered it in "Horror/Scary Newsletter (November 22, 2023)" 

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Harvey getting an idea from a detective show. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story, because, while it was a surprise, it fitted the story.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of its comments on a consumer society.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "old friends shocking confessions " , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the way both Joe and Sam were shocked by the other's confession.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the characters.

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Review of The Wooden Sphere  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Wooden Sphere" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the statement about staring at something and it changes. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The similes used in this story are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, Nausea rolled like a slop of chilled oysters in my stomach. I like this simile because it helps me imagine how the speaker felt.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice are good choices because they reveal the speaker's emotions.

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Review of Ready Yet?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, J.R. PETE , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Ready Yet?" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the wife's question. The conversation between the couple moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The conversation reveals the couples relationship, while showing how well the wife knows her husband.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, elizjohn , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "For Daniel: The Lost Summer" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp" . Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The speaker moves the narrative and emotions of mourning forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite because it closes the poem with the most emotions.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this poem, because they express the most emotion.

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Review of A New Super Hero  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A New Super Hero" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the new superhero. The conversation moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: In the last paragraph is the speaker talking to Andy or George?

I like: My favorite part is a superhero who can inflate time.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because of the conversation between the chaacters.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Beholden , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Troll’s Guide to Solving a Crisis" , because I discovered it on the fantasy genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the speaker asking a troll how trolls deal with a crisis. Grundle helps move the narrative forward while giving the best ways to deal with a crisis.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is when Grundle said life is for enjoying. I like this because it is a positive outlook of life.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of Grundle's advice on how to handle a crisis.

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Review of No Turkey  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "No Turkey" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, message, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and message forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it emphasizes the message of the poem.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the message.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Jacky , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Very Good Afternoon" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first statement hooked me. I wanted to know why someone was jumping to conclusions. The conversation move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I like the reason there was no ice cream in the freezer.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conversation.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Geoffrey Williams , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Library of Forgotten Fables" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 22, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me because no one knew where the library came from. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This metaphor, Death raked its bony fingers across the land, is fresh, descriptive, and well-written.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the boy who rediscovered the library.

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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hi, John Andrew Jenkins , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Glass Customer and the Order" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 22, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Hiberdale enjoying playing with his friends. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: Is this the beginning of a longer story? If so, I suggest finishing the story.

I like: Hiberdale is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed the story, but I am not sure what the story has to do with the title.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dael Dhra , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Creation Myths for Kids" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (November 22, 2023)" .

First Impression: The poem at the beginning hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A type in this sentence, They even made is teeth into rocks! I suggest changing is to his.

I like: My favorite part of this story is the way the sun and the moon were created. I like that because the sun was depicted as female and the moon male.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this creation myth and the way Norse gods were created.

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