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Review of But We Live On  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, cheshire , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "But We Live On" , because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first stanza of this thought-provoking poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about or meditate on.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it states the theme of the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme.

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for entry "Green Apples" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, KingsSideCastle , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Castle's Chessboard"  "Green Apples" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because they remind me of the green apple I had for my morning snack.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because I enjoyed reading the description of the apples.

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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative, emotions, and plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with the emotion of tranquility.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its location.

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Review of Time to reign  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Beck Firing back up! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "I Blog Poetry and Prose"  , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Terrence stepping into the lab. The conversation between Terrence and Eli moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like that part because it revealed Terrence's and Eli's personalities.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Pencil  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, elizjohn , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Pencil" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza established the speaker, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poem's plot with a decisions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem because of the descriptions of the pencils.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, wrose .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the power going off. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the description of how the birthday candles were used. I like this because it showed creativity.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the family.

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Review of Funeral Crashers  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, IdaLin , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Funeral Crashers" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 27, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first statement hooked me. The conversation among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while making the reader smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Gary and Roger are intriguing and sympathetic characters.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, speaker, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme scheme.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because the active descriptions helped me visualize a storm.

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Review of Obsession  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Odessa Molinari , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Obsession" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 27, 2024)" .

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with high fences enclosing the rear gardens. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it suggested that Charlie had the fountain of youth in her back yard.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of Fish Tacos  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Whitemorn , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Fish Tacos" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 27, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first stanza established the speaker, location, and subject of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words moved the narrative forward at a good pace while making the reader smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Fish tacos were a bad idea... It was IN DEPENDS DAY! I like this line because it made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of PUN-ishment  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "PUN-ishment" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 27, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Oliver barking. The conversation among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while making the reader smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I enjoyed the puns because they made me smile.

Final thoughts: The title is a good choice for this story because it suggest a subject without giving away the plot.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Author Ed Anderson , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Eve And The Mummy " , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (March 27, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Eve Leach realizing there was something off about her apartment building. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite character is Eve. I like her because she is a sympathetic vampire.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this well-written story because it made me both smile and laugh. Therefore, I am giving it a 5.0.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, SandraLynn Team Florent! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "In the Blink of an Eye" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker looking a the party decorations. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the description of the cake. I like this because it sounded like a cake a mother would make her daughter.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the descriptions.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, JCosmos , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Joe Lewis the Chase of His Life " , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza hooked me with Joe Lewis waking up in a forest. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poem plot and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the action.

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Review of Worm Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, IE .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with someone watching Abigail. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: Abigail is my favorite character. I like her because she is an intriguing, sympathetic, and strong woman.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction among the characters.

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Review of Bud's Diner  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Hugh Wesley .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph hooked me with Peter's reaction to the man behind the counter. The interaction and conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The way Peter's emotions are shown through his actions and the active descriptions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robin:TheRhymeMaven , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "~*~Grasping Inner Truth~*~" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Pray that our eyes, hearts and souls learn to trust… I like this line because it closes the poem with a suggestions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, JCosmos .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with where Joe Lewis died. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax was my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning heaven, hell, and limbo.

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for entry "~ Sky Diving ~" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, ruwth , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "ruwth is writing..."  "~ Sky Diving ~" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed

First Impression: The title of this story hooked me because I wanted to know about the author's adventure. The three different perspectives helped me to understand the different people involved and how courageous the author is.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of this entry were the pictures. I like the pictures because the emphasized the author's courage.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this item because of the perspective shown.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Happy Anniversary, turtlemoon-dohi .

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the descriptions and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, While Indigo Spirit knows His might. I like this line because of the emphasis on the Indigo Spirit.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful and well-written poem because of the subject.

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Review of Bottle  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Chris Breva .

First Thoughts: The poem looks good on the page, while giving the reader something to think about.

What I liked: The use of the same line at the beginning and ending of the poem.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this beautiful and well-written poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to consider concerning time.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Let Go and Let God Heal You" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (March 20, 2024)" .

First Impression: This thought-provoking prose essay emphasizes the best way to deal with anger. The examples taken from the Old Testament of the Christian scriptures shows what anger does to individuals and families.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: The logical and thought-provoking approach this essay took in dealing with anger.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this item because it reminded me that the main message of His Holiness Christ was love.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Lee Lawson .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the writer waking up in pain. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the way the writer got ink for the quill. I like that part because it suggested a symbol for writing.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Nobody's Fool  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, D.L. Robinson .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm move the plot and the laughter forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poems plot and gave the reason he changed his identity.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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for entry "Night Visions " 
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, 💙 Carly , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's"  "Night Visions " , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Roddy stumbling out of the pub. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: In this phrase, verdant tales, did you mean tales or tails?

I like: My favorite part of the story was the climax. I like this part because it fitted the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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