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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the Phantom City. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

What I liked: Blair is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Blair.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Job of Your Dreams" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: An incredible thing happening at the waste disposal factory hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the character builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it emphasized the fact that it is up to human beings to take care of the ocean.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of its message about the environment.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, dlspiritwriter 🙏☯️😻 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Meaningful Perplexity" , because I discovered it under by online writers and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes its form, mood, and theme. The rhythm flows easily form line to line and encourages the reader to read this poem aloud. The main emotions are curiosity and searching.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: This is my favorite line, Though we may not yet grasp it, is there a reason for everything? I like this line because it caused me to stop and consider an answer.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning the meaning of existence.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, MysteriousMist .

First Thoughts: The clang of steel on steel breaking the silence hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: The character because they are intriguing and sympathetic.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chapter because of the action.

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Review of Contest Entries  
for entry "A Second Friend" 
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Angelica- House Florent B & W , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Contest Entries"  "A Second Friend" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Joe taking Zoe with him. The conversation and interaction among the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the lesson this story taught. I like that part because it emphasized supporting your friends.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson it taught.

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Review of Starlight Parlor  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Alala .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, location, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because of the rhyme on here and dear.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it brought back memories of camping out under a star filled sky.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, JCosmos , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing ""Never Enough Cows" " , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza hooked me with the missing cows. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, maybe for an alien BBQ. I like this line because it made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of Sam Adams.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, MJones , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Invisible Thread" , because I discovered it on the philosophy genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with the main emotion of love.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well written poem a 5.0 because of the way it shows the unity of the human race.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Shunned Siblings" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The teacher's statement in the third paragraph hooked me. The descriptions were part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, J.R. PETE , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Just answer the question" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first question hooked me and made me smile. The conversation between the human and alien moves the plot forward at a good pace, while making me laugh and smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last question is my favorite. I like this question because it climaxed the story and made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me laugh.

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Review of Days of Suet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the descriptions forward at a good pace, while encouraging the reader to read this poem aloud.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it contains the most emotions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the description of winter.

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Review of Gone Fishing  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker wanting a place in Fred's heart. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the climax. I like that part because it was the logical ending to the story.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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Review of To live in fear  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, jayesandz , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "To live in fear" , because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it closed the poem with the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it showed emotions.

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Review of The Golden Buddha  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Rhino , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Golden Buddha" , because I discovered it on the spiritual genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with the first sentence. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about concerning the Madhyamaka Buddhist philosophy.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it helped me understand a method of wiping away delusions.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about, while introducing me to an unfamiliar philosophy.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Georgia and Lennie WC 290" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of the delightful day. The conversation between the sisters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it made me wonder who actually killed the parents.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the climax.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Jellyfish-on holiday , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Colourful House of Commons" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The rhythm moves the description forward at a good pace. The rhyming words keep the reader's attention and help the reader focus on the action.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first line is my favorite. I like this line because it drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: This intriguing poem puts both internal and end rhyme to good use.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Good middle class values" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the grandmother's statement. The conversation between grandmother and granddaughter moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, jackiesmuse , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Edith and Effie WC: 297" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Edith examining the label on a bottle. The conversation between the sisters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is about finding the skeleton in the attic. I like this part because hiding a skeleton in an attic made sense.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of I AM  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, ~SilverMoon~ , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "I AM" , because I discovered it on the religious genre page.

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to consider in each paragraph.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, I am love, you are love, and we are one. I like this sentence because it is something we all need reminded about.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about.

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Review of River's End  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, cinderella .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, mood, and theme of the poem The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it reveals hope.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, 💙 Carly , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Beneath One Distant Spring" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it reminds me of spring without mentioning the season.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written inspirational poem a 5.0 because of the way it shows the coming of spring.

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Review of Guide Me, Lord  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, intuey of House Lannister .

First Thoughts: The second paragraph of this non-fiction essay hooked me with the unexpected turn. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while making the descriptions part of the action.

What I liked: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it reminded me that God is always protecting us.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written essay a 5.0 because it reminded me we must always thank God for His protection.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, StaiNed-House Targaryen , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Beneath One Distant Spring" , because I discovered it on the community newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace,

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line Melodies of life give dreams to none who are dead. I like this line because of the way it expressing mourning.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 it gives the reader something to think about concerning death.

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Review of Six More Days  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Winchester Jones , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Six More Days" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Regie Simpson being fed up. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story was Higgins reaction to Regie's actions. I like this because it was a normal reaction under the circumstances.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Fruit to Bread  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Scarypotato-doing bettertoday , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Fruit to Bread" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The second verse is my favorite because the questions made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because it made me laugh.

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